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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Taliyan seetiya for updating such an awesome chapter 👏. And please end this judai scene, I can tolerate lot of hatered and fights between them , but they staying away fom each other is just unbearable😭, I so want this Jay and akash to be thrown in hell😡, and there they should be burnt in a pot of boiling oil.Gosh I know I'm being the linit of sadist😉, but cant help. U write so well that I actually feel like a part of this ff. Continue soon dear😊

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: ilvuday
amazing...infact i hope d samething happens 2 manyata in d show she shld crave for his love...but it was mindblowing

She is already craving dear thats why she is neither happy divorcing nor in accepting Akash's love . as she is feeling empty inside,

Poor girl has already payed a lot , she did try to patch up,but Uday has been ignoring her since separation.

Now its Uday's turn to fill that emptiness and break the ice . Now its his time for explainations and amendmments ,which he will eventually do in next chapter.😊
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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
Taliyan seetiya for updating such an awesome chapter 👏. And please end this judai scene, I can tolerate lot of hatered and fights between them , but they staying away fom each other is just unbearable😭, I so want this Jay and akash to be thrown in hell😡, and there they should be burnt in a pot of boiling oil.Gosh I know I'm being the linit of sadist😉, but cant help. U write so well that I actually feel like a part of this ff. Continue soon dear😊

Thank U dear

If u see the title of next chapter and ending of present one u will logically know your dreams are going to come true ,as our manyata will travel her way to womanhood only and only with her prince charming i.e. Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh.😳

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007
A cliffhanger??? That's all I could say bcause u stopped at d main point...n this chappy was jus sooo awsum ...I loved ...:( why are u creating distance between manveer now pls make their love confession & one kiss pls it's a request frm me plsss ..thnks a lot for d pm & update fast ..I really can't wait for d next chapter(the way to womanhood ) love u tons yaar u really made me addicted to this 😍

Well dear its all to happen in coming chapter.Kiss is such a small thing its full blush blush,and that to with no remorse but happiness.😛

As for distance well dear these men what say yaar,,,,,when they are boyfriend they always run behind the girl head over heels,but when they become husbands they get an attitude.So is with Uday.

But then his heart still beats only and only for Manyata whatsoever move on he may show off and Manyata's throbs for him.😊

Edited by shana0127 - 13 years ago

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: sim1623
Oh wow! I love it! I always love it when FF writers make Manyata drunk cause then she does stuff she will regret later :D I don't know if I am right but because of the title of the next chapter, I think that they will do it, I mean I can be totally wrong but it seems like they will... Can't wait for the next one, amazing job!

Simran :D...

Manyata wont regret anything that she is going to do dear , infact both Manyata and Uday are going to cherish it forever .

Smart Girl as u are absolutly right in what u have guessed 😉 and yes they would do nothing wrong,they are stll husband and wife,too much in love.

Actually alcohol has given Manyata push thats it.A piece of separation or divorce paper cant separate them,in fact it makes them feel deeper,whether love or hate,though it does create misunderstandings,which will be solved later.

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Rohitha

@...Rohitha...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

tht was great 👍🏼👍🏼 and plzzz update soon & thnxs fr d pm

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snowdream

@snowdream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

That was awesome.👏..Update soon and if possible pls pm me

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@-The_Tomboy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Gaahhh wat a update!!! loved it to the damn core of it!!!! I guess I know wat will happen!!!! ur ff is getting better each day!!

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fia21

@fia21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Omg this was freaking BRILLIANT!! 😲
Shana I love your FF. The way you've portrayed their post marriage life is amazing. And it's written so well that I can actually imagine everything that is happening 👏
Coming back to the update, man this chapter was awesome. Loved it. I won't deny that Akash pisses the crap out of me even in FFs, lol, but he was much needed to make Manyata realize what and who she really wants in life. And a drunk Manyata trying to figure that out would be like the icing on the cake. The title of your next chapter has got me so excited because I'm sure they'll do it. They'll so do it 😳 And since Manyata is drunk, she might make the first move 😉 . Can't wait to read it. Aaahh Shana I am literally dying of curiosity here so please please please update sooonn 😊
Once again, amazing update. I am in ManVeerland now 😍

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Anny

@SyedAinah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#170

Awesome update...to hell with jay n majnu ,dey r too much irritatng...i think as usual plan backfires ...by d title of ur next update ...i guesss dey ll do it...i m super excited for next update...update fast plz

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