Married For Riyasat-Update-Chap 12-part II-Pg 89 - Page 18

Originally posted by: fia21

Omg this was freaking BRILLIANT!! 😲
Shana I love your FF. The way you've portrayed their post marriage life is amazing. And it's written so well that I can actually imagine everything that is happening 👏
Coming back to the update, man this chapter was awesome. Loved it. I won't deny that Akash pisses the crap out of me even in FFs, lol, but he was much needed to make Manyata realize what and who she really wants in life. And a drunk Manyata trying to figure that out would be like the icing on the cake. The title of your next chapter has got me so excited because I'm sure they'll do it. They'll so do it 😳 And since Manyata is drunk, she might make the first move 😉 . Can't wait to read it. Aaahh Shana I am literally dying of curiosity here so please please please update sooonn 😊
Once again, amazing update. I am in ManVeerland now 😍

Originally posted by: annysyed

Awesome update...to hell with jay n majnu ,dey r too much irritatng...i think as usual plan backfires ...by d title of ur next update ...i guesss dey ll do it...i m super excited for next update...update fast plz

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

a haaannn...why u stopped on that moment...😡omggg...u wanna kill me or what...naaa...

i wanna read more...😭right now...m crying like a baby...😭

now update sooonn...i can't wait till next sunday...plz plz plz...don't do that ...i will die with curiosity...plzz...update as soon as possible...plzz...(with puppy face) m pleading...update soon...😳

and for this update omg girl this update was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G...really i am not just saying it i mean it...amazing...out of the world...really looking forward to the story...awesome update...poor manayata...but why she is feeling bad for akash...ahhh...but still i loved it awesome...eagerly eagerly eagerly wating for the next chapter...

Originally posted by: shana0127

Thanks Fia , u know i always wait for your comments they are even more brilliant and make my writing paisa wasool.

You r right about next chapter , though its complete still I feel like editing and re editing it , as this chapter is nearest to my heart,

i hope i will be able to post tonight😊

Originally posted by: pyaar_ka_panchi

heyy shana

i just started to read ur FF i read one chapter 6 part 2 of ur ff last week due some time pass...that made me so much generated interest in ur ff...though i don't read FF's bcoz i can't ff prolong waiting for update & in general also i don't much interest in FF's due to want to keep the serials as in original form...for my peice of mind as ff generates expectations from serial which eventually don't fulfill on screen as episodes r done with different fram work in mind they need to keep loads of things intagged with the whole show...
that part made me way interested in ur ff its so simply written & written so well the thought process is beautiful...
i had reached part 5...i'm reading it slowly so i don't have to wait for next update...that is very interesting i can guess what is coming up...but for ur next week update i guess i too had to wait for ur updates...

Originally posted by: shana0127

Dear Tanvi ,
Thanks for showing intrest in my FF dear.I always update my FF on weekends,as I myself like DEK and wanna watch the way it goes,always hoping Manveer to happen and giving gaales to cvs,thats how true fans do 😃

I always try to make my FF predictable and even give hints to reader when they seem confused or too exited for next,coz I don't want my readers face the same dilemma as we face in DEK where story is unpredictable and not according to viewers like us.

I fulfill my and my friends dreams in my FF by trying to write the way we would like it to be so that at least on weekends we all are not killed by ghosts of terrible cvs and their plans to eat us alive.
Love U
Shana