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Posted: 13 years ago
just caught up on the last three chapters!
her family abuses her?! thats ridiculous!
but now arnie boy is here to help her so no worries!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i really luved it yaar... iam speechless... u write so well... plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arnav needs a bi**hslap! :p Not everything is about him! But ill trust you aashifa, please, dont break my achy breaky heart? :DI do like how sometimes they find comfort in eachother, like the thigh-scene :p but wow, what happened in the bedroom, arnav become ASR. And that Payal, with her payals, she shoudl take them off, I mean Khushis name is Khushi but she doesnt wear a clown face all day right? So payal shouldnt wear payals. As you can see this is the 12 year old in me standing up to say that Payals are Khushis trademark and Payal is imitating Khushi because she wants to take arnav away from her!! *pouts like a 12yearold*
Sooo, arnav is gonna stay huh? Hes gonna look sneakily throught he windo and find out right/ Why khushi doesnt wanna come back right? Because.. I would like him to because then he can tell me and I can tell my mom! ( 12 year old coming up again - alert!) Because I dont know either and i certainly wanna know! You are definately on a roll! Gonna go read part 5 now! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abuse! Oh gosh, I should have known.. Poor girl, thats why didnt go back! Okay, Ill say it.. I was wrong. It would have been so un-ASR-like, to actually stay back and watch for himself. And if he woud have seen it, he couldnt control his emotions im sure! Glad he hired that detective!
And your arnav is sooo artistic! He drew her, that is sooo cute! All she needs is a little loving, and by showing her the pictures, she felt it! :D I hate the way her family treats her.. well 'family' supposedly. Wheres babuji? And Payal, I cannot wanna strangle you more than this? You tattle tail! She went snitching as soon as she got a chance, and shes a perv, dore daaling on arnav! Im loooving it!! ( sound like such a sadist..)
As you can see, I got a little too excited again, so now you have two comments, excuzes moi :P I cant help it :p Lovely update, but you say its not the entire truth? Cant wait for the next one! But dooo keep revising, I understand! hahaha exams are like right around the corner huh? Good luck!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys! So I know know I have been gone for like ever and I am so sorry, but finally I have most of my work done, I will be here same time next week I am afraid considering my exams are now right around the corner, I hope you all can understand? Till then have this update :D it's a really long one so be happy.

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Chapter 6: Its gonna be easy now



She pulled away to shyly gaze at his face, his face she sighed, it was probably the most beautiful thing she had ever set her eyes on. But that beautiful face was covered in worry lines, his brows knotted and his nose scrunched up but he was smirking? Khushi was so confused, without knowing she reached up to touch his face her fingers going over those very same lines, her thumb smoothing over his lips. To her eyes he visibly relaxed but she knew he had not, his shoulders still hunched in that angry form.



She looked up into his own eyes and heard him sigh, she was now physically closer to him than she had ever been, her knees met his, leaning in she began to observe him closely, her eyes not missing anything going over his small freckles just below his eye line, those strong eyebrows laid above the most heavy lines and then she pouted, he had a small scar to the side of his eye. It looked like he had been in a horrible fight, off course scars healed over time but this looked like it had been done quite recently.



Reaching up she touched it, and felt him expel a breath.



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The air within Arnav left him as soon as she begun going over his worry lines, but the minute she touched that faint scar he forgot to breathe. It had been so long since he himself noticed it, and when she touched the scar he was reminded of the horror that had occurred and stiffened immediately but relaxed just as fast. This touch was not the same it was different, it was soft, smooth, comforting. The earlier touch was rough, careless hurtful. His eyes closed to hide the tears and he took her in his arms again taking in that godly scent that was so hers.



The hug was awkward in a way, his arm was looped around her shoulders and her knees went up to accommodate more room, it wasn't the best hug but it was something shared between the two as they listened to their heartbeats in unison they fell for each other without even knowing.



Arnav felt Khushi move slightly and slightly unwound his hold on her, only to look down and see her pretty face pouting up to him, he was tempted to take that very same pout into his mouth but he had to take it slow he told himself. So instead of kissing her on the mouth he bent and kissed her forehead and told her



"I'm here now, and always will be, I am sorry if this morning what I did was wrong but I never knew then, I do now"




His tone encouraged her to speak up and she did, but first her face was contorted with confusion, her lip swelling out into another pout and then the penny dropped she gasped and looked into his eyes, his nod confirming her worst fear.



He knew.



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"Before you begin to rant on let me just say that I don't know everything, but I do know enough to tell you I promise you will never have to set foot in that house ever again"



Today for them seemed to be full of hugs, she threw herself at him and cried her soul out, she cried till her eyes ran dry, she cried till he pried her arms off her and wiped her tears. She cried and it hurt him more than it hurt her, he didn't know why but seeing her in anguish set his heart alight, it tugged on all the heartstrings he never knew he had and he hated seeing that face clouded with pain. He hated it.



"Shh, its okay" He told her, soothing her face, trying to get her to stop hiccuping.



"Thaan - - kk you" She said and began rubbing her eyes making them all the more puffy.



Arnav wanted to laugh now, she really did look cute, he was hurting but he found her so amusing within that split second. He knew she needed loving and tender care, but how was he to demonstrate that? Was the real question? He wasn't like a normal man, in his life women came and went and they were easily persuaded with trinkets or other items of worth, but he knew this child-woman in front of him was here to stay. She wasn't leaving. Not now.



He heard her hiccups arise again and soothed her hair down, his fingers getting slightly tangled with the waves further down her hair. He shushed her and rocked her body against his and eventually she stopped.



"Feel better now?"



She nodded.



And now the real anguish begun he really wanted to just take her in his arms and love her until all her pain stopped but that was not a good approach not when she was so unstable within herself.



So he done something he had never done he asked her out on a date



"So Mrs. Raizada would you like to go out on a date with me?" He didn't know what to expect, was she going to refuse him was she going to go all shy?



"Where is it we are going?" She asked him, her eyes shaded and boy did he hate that.



"Where is it you wish to go?" He asked her



Her eyes sparked up "Can we go to the Pierre where they sell ice-cream?"



Arnav was tempted to refuse, there she was telling him if they could go and having something so sugary and here his body was telling him no you're diabetic. But he said yes and she squealed and reached up to kiss his cheek saying thank you for the millionth time that afternoon.



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Arnav went into the shower once they were done talking about time and the arrangement; the warm water hitting his back eased the tension within body, relieving the earlier stress.

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Khushi was busy humming away to a non-existent song, her body swaying to the rhythm she created; she was making brownies for the family, her taste buds were screaming sweet to her. Stirring in the chocolate pieces she added the walnuts, dipping her finger in the bowl she bought it up to lick and sighed, chocolate was her best friend at times.



But today someone else became her friend, it was her husband, he seemed to be the rock who was stood there as she crashed into him like the waves in the sea, an odd sense of calm came over her as she begun to wash the dishes relieving them off their chocolaty goodness.



While her brownies were baking away in the oven she began to roll out the rotis, making them round and adding extra ghee to her own. Her mind going through tumbles and tumbles of questions, looking back at her moments shared with her husband, he just sat there and took her crying form in making her feel so heavenly and light.



Her thoughts were broken by a light cough it was Anjali. Looking up she smiled at her and Anjali asked her where she was lost, shaking her head in denial she told her nowhere, so Anjali continued with her tirade on husbands and bounced onto the kitchen counter looking all childish.



And speaking of husbands Shyam, Anjali's husband strolled in looking happy to finally see her.



"Aap aagaya?" She jumped off the counter supporting her now formed baby bump.



"Anjali" He laughed swooping her into the comfort off his arms.



"How was the trip?" She asked him.



"It was good, but very stressful, wait hang on is that brownies I smell? Anjali are you cooking me brownies?" Laughing he looked down at his wife.



"Nahi nahi, Khushi made them"



"Khushi?" Looking up he saw the newest Raizada.



"So you are Khushi? Ever since you have arrived and might I add its only been 24 hours, my beloved wife cannot stop going on about you"



Laughing Khushi immediately fell at ease with Shyam, he looked so friendly and seemed to love his wife.



"To answer your question jeeju I am making brownies"



"Ohoo who told you that I love brownies?" He teased



"NO one did but what I coincidence I also love them" Hi-fiving Shyam she listened to him go on about Anjali and how she wooed him over with her cooking. He narrated that one of the main reasons he married her was because of her lovely cooking.



All of the laughing and teasing they were completely un-aware that two pairs of eyes were watching them, one was over-joyed with the comfortable image they all portrayed and the other pair was angry and unbelievable jealous.



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I am extremely sorry for not responding to your comments but they mean the world to me they really do, every time i read them I smile thank you 😃


And yeah thats right Shyamu is good, I should probably put up that really late character sketch right? Yeah I think I will do that for the next update, I am too tired now! 😕

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Posted: 13 years ago
Res!

~~Edited!~~

HA! First One!

Yeah... so... the New Chapter- and What it will Cost Me (I know- I'm poor at puns, but Oh well!)

Have I mentioned how much I absolutely Love you? No? Well, I do- Loads! 😃

So, now Khushi knows that Arnav knows- and she's fine with it- Payal's still a B*tch and Shyam's good- Whoa! Some Update!

and Mr. and Mrs. Raizada are going on a date!

and they're already falling for each other- hard!

and they Hugged! a Million times!

And she Kissed him on the cheek! and he kissed her on the forehead!

and He wanted to Kiss her Pout- but yeah... slow down there Arnie Boy😉

Love, love, love it!

And I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter! And Yes, I remember the deal- so yeah- I'll be updating soon... Pakka! 😆

Wow- I do ramble on, don't I? Oh Well, I think It's time for me to stop 😛 But, again- Fabulous chapter Hon! Keep it Comin'! 😆
Edited by Gargee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
^^ you better un reserve this time XD
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry for being later...read and res'd from the iPod.

Anyway, I loved how tender the chapter was...with Khushi trying to ease his worries as Arnav had tried to do hers away...and I loved Arnav's reaction to it - "His eyes closed to hide the tears and he took her in his arms again taking in that godly scent that was so hers."

And what horror? Arnav also has some sordid past?

But whatever it is, I am sure ArHi will come out of it together. :)

"I'm here now, and always will be, I am sorry if this morning what I did was wrong but I never knew then, I do now"

Awwwieee! <3

I love their interactions, man! They are so tender, so pure, so full of love and understanding even though they have started interacting only like 2 days back but they still get each other and care for and want to protect each other! <3

And the part where she hugs him after this priceless dialogue -

"Before you begin to rant on let me just say that I don't know everything, but I do know enough to tell you I promise you will never have to set foot in that house ever again"

Beautiful! <3

It was just amazing! And the way he shushes her and comforts her...sigh.

Icing on the cake - She wasn't leaving. Not now.

:D <3

And a date...whoopee! :D

And she is happy and comfortable enough to make brownies...YAY!

And Shyam is good...Double YAY! ;) :D

Loved it! Update soon! :)
Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I liked how he wants to take care of Kushi. Also, he wants to go slow with her (become friends, etc.) So I'm guessing Payal is the jealous eyes and Akash might be the happy ones? Or maybe Nani or Arnav? Anyway, waiting for the next update. BTW, why was Shyam not at the wedding?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: curledup

^^ you better un reserve this time XD


Already done that!😆

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