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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

i know you said os please continue that was so perfect loved it ,it had the beauty and the beast essence loved how he claimed her as his own and intended for her to be with him

loved it dark sexy and wanting thanks for the pm

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517072

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

''Haffie!!! Haffie!! Haffie!!!'' *Antu is screaming and running in circles*😆

Gosh,this is by far the best O.S of yours!!!👏 I have read it already 3 times,and I guess I will keep reading it in future!!!❤️😆

What's with you and darkness hun?😛 Not that I don't like it,but all your male lead characters are 'Dark Devils'.😍 😈

Why,why,why?? Why don't you write an ArHi FF like this??????😡 Please!!! *Antu is begging wid folded hands* Please write an FF with 'Dark Devil but Decent' male character pleeeaassseee!!!😃😃😃

Thanx for the pm!!!🤗

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

* i am speechles **

yes, it was DARk, but you wrote it brilliantely!! arnavs desperate need for her was penned down amazingly!!

i did feel bad for khusi,poor thing !!

it was amazing dear!! you nailed it <3

and the poem , do i even have to say how much i loved it!! you are an amazing writer!!

LOved it 👍🏼

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Aashi

@Kashkidiwani

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

niice os!!!!!
bt u have stopped writng on arsh :(
why???

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winchfire

@winchfire

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

wow man!! normally i dont prefer dark characters..u made me chnge my mind!!

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Ms. Fernandes

@PrincessD

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

awesome. think CVs shud take some tips from ur OS, perfect for ASR😊 great, continue more, luv to read the darkness

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

beautifully written!

outstanding piece of writing!

do write more of such OS n pm meeh...it was fab , loved it!:D

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

very dark, and very deep... i love it!! intriguing! it's zoo different, yet completely the same. he's a monster, authoritative figure, yet he's got the soft spot for khushi... his khushi, only his. great job on the os!!! :D