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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

That was brilliant, Loved it! (:

Your a fab writer yanow that right?😃😳

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gauri khan

@arshisangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Absolutely brilliant :) loved ur thoughts and ideas and obviously possessive arnav. I wish if his character could be lyk tht in real I mean in a serial :p. Keep up d gud work and thx for d pm :D :D

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

oye angst partner... loved it hun...

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Wow awsome os love possesive arnav he cant let her be anybodys elses she is only his. Love the last line she would never be able to let him go he wont let her go ever wow loved it. But poor kushi really feel for her. Thanks for the pm.

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Wicked! 😉 Brilliant OS

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vaidehi1995

@vaidehi1995

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

that was very very good😃

very dark and the emotions were displayed very well!

just loved every aspect about it!

i just have no idea what to say other than beautiful!

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Banginbengali

@Banginbengali

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Eviffie how are you!!??!! Hope your doin good...n WOW dark much!!??!! Lol...I usually hate readin dark writings...but your writings are just to bloody good!!👏

Arnav seriously made me wanna punch him in this one lol!! Such a rude/mean lil person...instead of showin his love through care...he shows it by bein rough!!

Poor Khushi loves him...but hes just to bloody mean n thick headed...uggg!!😕 What a proposal Arnav seriously...instead of slammin her...n showin her through hunger...learn some love words...goodness!!

The forest scene...just made my eyes see red😡...Arnav if you want her that bad maybe love n tenderness n care would do the trick...stop showin her lust you greedy lil person...okay Im done fumin...so he took her to the mandir...!!!😕

Eviffie what can I say beautiful OS...very dark but your writin as usual superb!!!⭐️ Thanks so much for the PM!

Edited by Banginbengali - 13 years ago