OS: Burning in your Love (Part 2 & 3 Links)

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Labitha

@labi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

What a beautiful and touching os👏

Beautifully portrayed Arnav and Khushi's emotions.👍🏼

Loved their trail of thoughts.Thoughts of how they spent their lives without each other and the conflict of emotions overwhelming them.a brilliant take 👏

Waiting for the next part...🤗

p.s. Are U a malayalee?

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nims6

@nims6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

it was so emotional...both of their feeling were beautifully expressed ...im happy that at the last minute his mind wanted to stop her,...hope he does so..u have to continue it...please continue for us...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

itz very nice plz continue😊

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Loved that you gave us both their POV! You've captured all their feelings so beautifully. Their love is against all odds. Even against their own conscience. They cant be without each other. I do hope you continue ! Or is it upto us to imagine how he stops her and convinces her to stay? :)

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chupachup

@chupachup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Smita, I have no words.. One of the most beautiful stories I have read on this forum..I almost had tears in my eyes..I dont know if there is a part 3 but I would love to see Arnav stop her.

Mindblowing writing..

Edited by chupachup - 13 years ago