OS: Burning in your Love (Part 2 & 3 Links)

Frequent Posters

Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

aww..tht was emotional..it made me teary eyed😭 plz continue

Quote

hilly

@hilly

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Super duper amaazing ! :D
loved it .. do contineee pleasee ?!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

fabulous start. Now let him pull her in his arms and kiss her...

Quote

mimi

@moon_mine

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

wonderfully written!!!!

bt pls cntinue wid it!!!!!

loved it!!!!

Quote

Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Beautifully written! I loved how you described Khushi's thoughts and feelings. Definitely continue!!!

Quote

goguma

@goguma

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

touching!
is it time to say goodbye now?

kushi's heart is aching... i can feel it.
His DI will always be his top priority... nothing and no one can change that.
not even kushi...

and him?
stop saying kushi kushi
lets see what YOUR heart is telling you, arnav!

edit:
wait!
there WILL be one on arnav's right? 😳

Edited by goguma - 13 years ago

Quote

Anum

@tajwar za

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

aww its a nice start please update it soon

Quote

Riya

@Riya.Raj

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wow! Plz pm me if u update. I really liked it.

Quote

Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Beautifully written! I loved the part where Khushi realises his life will continue after she's gone.. Very touching OS.. Please could you PM me when you update? Thanks! :)