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spicyrays

@spicyrays

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#471

wow... amazing update... hmmm... loved it... lastly kriya acceptd her feelings for him... thnx for d pm...dear...

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#472

Wowww it was fantastic update dear.. (1st. kria's day dream abot rey<3 (2nd. kriyansh dare push ups<3 (3rd. kriyansh confession<3 (4th. Kriyansh hawt n romantic scene hayeee loved it so so so so much.<3<3 amazing,mindblowing,supeb,rocking,chumeshwari,hawt,romantic,faadu update... Loved it alot.. Please yaar ab koi misunderstanding create mat karna and update asap egarly waiting for next !!!

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#473

Upi r u serious u foung this update crap!!
its mind blowing update
loved it very much
loved kriya's dreaming part
the dare was awesome n the way they did it loved it
the last part was intense n romantic
finally the confessed...eagerly waiting for the next part

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Apurva

@apurva100

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#474

Upiii...tune finally update kar diya...bahut sare hugs update dene ke liye:-):-):-)

update was amazing yaar..i loved it

rey and swayam convo was funny...

and the way rey waiting for kria i love it...
hayye aur kria ki imagination...

and the game part was awsome...
kriyaansh romance is so cute..
pura update mast tha...

Love u

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#475

Wow finally got to read ur update after so long.

N what r u saying its crap???? No dear I really enjoyed this one.It was far too special for KriYansh.

The parts which i liked the most.

1.This line is so so true. Hahahaha
'Eventually all boys were waiting for the galz to come up from their "make-up world "...*sigh* these occasions are made for this torture only ...' Like the part when the boys were waiting for the girls to come down.

2. Loved the part when kria was selecting the mehendi design.
"Here it it !! for my love " he pointed to a beautiful design with a great work ...' Hayeee even if she was dreaming.

3.Now my favourite is undoubtedly the dare game where KriYansh were given to do the push ups.
A big hug to you 🤗 for thinking this idea for making rey doing the push ups with Kria beneath him. Too too romantic this one. I could clearly imagine the whole scene. N the way they have their love to each other was awesome .
Btw I also like RiMAR dare doing the CAT WALK. Good one.

4. Finally the hawt bedroom scene.So beautifully described with the right words.

Overall a fantastic update dear.

Edited by Arsha-4-Ever - 13 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#476

Mindblowing update:):)
Luvd it:):)
Thanx for d pm:)

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#477

Amazing Update upi.

Do u seriously feel its crap if so then u r wrong.

It was mind blowing.

Loved Reyam convo.

The Kriyaansh part was cute.

Kria day dreaming abt Rey was so cute.

the couple dare was lovely😍

And finally they told the other what each ment to other aww so cutee.

Update next part soon.

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#478

Pasto it was amazing...the puah ups were really gud...I really luv the part...plzzz update jaldi...v v v v v v v curious to read it!!;)

Love u lods!!

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#479

It was amazing Pasto...espevially the push ups n ahhm ahhm the other scenes also...plzzz update fast...

Luv u loads!!:)

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#480

maine saare comments de diye...

finally...

arrey side mein tab khula tha and breaks mein likh rhi thi issliye time lag gay...

so sorry for the delay