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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

mujhe badnaam mat karo.. maine tadpaana chodh dia hai...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: aria009hera
mujhe badnaam mat karo.. maine tadpaana chodh dia hai...

Ha aur ab dhamki dena shuru kiya hai

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Neethu Uthaman

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: apurva100
tujhe jab karna hai tab kar update..
Mein nahi tere peeche padungi update ke liye

Hain hain tereko toh aur bhi kitna kaam hai. Ahem ahem

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
yeh aisi cheezein puchi nhi jaati..

kar di jaati hai.. itna toh samjh upi...

dekh thread 2 shuru ho gaya so issi cheez ki khushi mein party ke taur pe UPDATE

😛 😛 😛 sabar ka phal meetha hota h !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Upi ullu banaya na updated likh kar jaa ab mein going bad me milte hai...

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Palakh Aggarwal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

plzzz karo na update dying to read it

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: upasna_mishti
😛 😛 😛 sabar ka phal meetha hota h !!!

are title toh dedi

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par update kaha hai????😕

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Neethu Uthaman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: aria009hera
mujhe badnaam mat karo.. maine tadpaana chodh dia hai...

Hain tu toh meri acchi bacchi hai. Muuaahhh

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

*chapter 10

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kriya in the car ! watching trees sprinting outside , merry children howling , flowers all the way !
it was not dat dark! but its gonna b most adventurous nite of the grp !
n fr kriyansh ~ its gonna b thier one of the spl. nites ~~~~~~~~~!! *winks*
ol gurls were supa excited ! dressed in thier most beautiful dresses !
n sharon , she was bit exhausted but on seeing her girlfriends so happy n smiling at her mischieviously she got excited as she knew wat friendship meant fr those gurls n dey cud anything fr her ... so

her expectations were high ... wat is stored fr her ...
she kept on guessing whole journey ... wat cud b there ... !!!!!!
kriya n gang ol staring sharon ...
all; (shouted in sharons ears ) sharon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sharon got scared by this sudden mess ! she looked at them wid a gussa walla luk ( :P )
n den all started teasing her ... but soon dey planned sumthing to tease her more ... they ol started talking bout there old days ...!!! n guess wat sher pinjare ma aa hi gaya ( :P )
sharon : (enjoying the atmosphere ) god , I feeling like that old girl !!!!!! again !!!
kriya ; sharon u are a girl ... same as that old one u havnt changed ...!!!
actually u are a WOMEN !!
N TO B A MARRIED WOMEN SOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳
n ol cheered fr her !!!!!!!!!!
sharon ; i know who would have guessed ? me gettin married !
rini ; not me 🤣
sharon ; let me finish ! :p😛
rini zipped her mouth
sharon ; okay guys so today we are gonna hv my bachelorette n i dont even knoe wats gonna happen n which ppl are invited ...
kriya ; sharon we told ya dun take any stress ...its gonna b a blast today ...
all; wooohhh we gonna rock !!!!!!😊

they got into a club which was aparently sharon's dad's but... poor... baby she didnt knew wat was up to ... wid a beautiful launge... cute bartendars😳😳😳 !!!!!!!!!!!!!! . spacious ,
bathed in shimering pink color . a very beautiful silver candle stand at center which though made up of stainless steel but appears to b made up of most pure silver !!
beautiful petals lined up ol the way ... n heart shaped velvet footmats were placed in a perfect path order so that sharons entry cud b more royal !!
n it was !!!
it was a blast all there school friends were dere to witness the most rocking bachelorette !!!!!

on her entrence small orchis petals start falling frm heaven !!!!!!! she felt so touched !!!!!!!!!!!
her face got lighten up seeing all beautiful stuffs that were decorated fr her !!!
sharon ; ( wid a lil watery eyes ) guys ye ... sab tumne ... mere liye ... guys its so beautiful ... i hv'nt imagined dis much in my dreams ...!!!!!!!!
n den suddenly ... LIGHTS ARE GONE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤢
N all gang members shout 'SURPRIZE ' !!!!!!!!
they got a crown fr sharon ! !!!!!!! a silver one having a big purple n crimson red stone in it !!
she felt so touched ...
sharon (overcomin frm her thought dat ol dis is dream wid grt anxiety ) ; so gurls LETS ! DO IT TONIGHT !! LETS PARTY !!!!!!!!!!!!! (in singing tone :0 )⭐️

nw just imagine a rocking party ...wid most happening songs on dj ... wid dim lights all there was ... fun ... soungs of sweet giggles !!!

the girls spent whole time dancing and drinking . the bubble machines were placed around the club ensuring that there waere always bubles floating everywhere .
then rini mentioned to the bar tender that it was sharons bachelorette party ... n he gave their group rounds of tequila shots ...!!!!!
all on a round table ! n rini n simi luking at kriya mishchieviously * grin * ! sharon observing wats up to deir mind !
soon cutest bartender came upto dem wid a tray having tequila shots !
on seeing him comin to dem she cleared to gurls again dat she was nt goin to drink !
but sharon haha she was in full mood to make our model get drunk !!
sharon : ohh!!!!! kriya tum drinks nai logi ... koi nahi ... i can understand !! your feelings !
kriya ; wat feeling sharon ? but i knew tum muje force nahi karogi!
sharon ; ohho kriya i know u tum drink nahi karogi kyuki ... rey ...!!
kriya ; was left shocked at wat just sharon said !
kriya (cutting sharons lyn) ; wat rey sharon ! m ...m nt drinking cuz mera mood nahi h n u know i dont drink !
sharon; ohho !!! kriya i know ! but baaki sabko to yehi lagega naaa ki... tum ...rey se...
be4 sharon cud even complete her sentence kriya quickly gulped a shot of tequila !!! (hahha)
n ol were left wid wide smile n grinning faces ! hehehe
n finally ol got drunk totally ! hahhaahhha

finally the party got over ... they were drunk hahaha poor kriya ... her resolution of nt getting drunk was broken !!!!! :( =D

gurls in parking ...
kriya teased sharon ;" you have got only few daaayyy aawayyy !! ( again she sang out )
"well ! i cant drive ! ; vishakha exclaimed .
"well ! cram into a cab then ! " kriya said . " we can get your car TOMO RRROOOWWW " ( she sang out )
" TOMMORRROW , TOMMORROWWW ! i love this song ! and rini began singing !
soon simi n vishakha also joined her !
ONCE MORE " neha cheered !!!!!!!!
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kriya giggeled and hailed a cab tripping over the curb into the street
" whoops !!!!!!"
"get back up here " sharon pulled back on the sidewalk .
they ol were mad
NO CAB :OOO
kriya started serching fr cab now infact getting madly mad !!1hahhahahahhahahha
n started searching cab beneath the leaflet , in dustbin ... below street bench ... oh gawd !!!! hahhahhahahhahahhahaha but failed so reched to the grp aftr her hard efforts to find a cab !!! :(

hahha
n simi rini n vishakha were busy singing there lovely tomorrrorrww song hahahhahaha
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NO !! sharon gasped through her laughter ... my ears are bleeding please !!!!!!!!!

simi ; " fine " dont appreciate our singing . then again , maybe it was just the song . we could pick a better one !!!. "
neha ; ooohhh !!! lets sing a better ( beeter :P ) song !!! : n neha cheered again !!

kriya ;! u know wat sharon we are gonna sing your song cuz u re' crabby ! n soon gonna get married !! :P ( teasing her madly )
rini laughed as she coughed on and helped kriya start !
( guys this song is bit teasy song n in dis song ... queen refers to sharon ... n dead refers to ... queen getting married n here waking up means getting ready to mate with her soulmate :P)

" DING DONG DING ... THE QUEEN IS DEAD ! ...
WHICH QUEEN ? THE OLD QUEEN !!
THE CUTE WICKED QUEEN ! "
the others joined playfully while sharon glared playfully !
"DING DONG DING , THE CUTE QUEEN IS DEAD !
WAKE UP YOU SLEEPY HEADS !
RUB YOUR EYES ! GET OUT OF BED !
DING DONG DING ! THE QUEEN IS DEAAADDD !!!!"

" gee ! thanks ever so ,much how is dat supposed to cheer me up ?"
you want so much more ?? simi exclaimed !
"god I need a camera . you guys are a mess . your hair is messed up and you can see soapy stuff frm the bubbles on your clothes , your make up is smeared and youe singing sucks !!!1. actually this is like a vedio

kodak moment !!!!. sharon excalimed with babish anger !

neha again glared playfully ; " happy song time ! " n kriya gigled and the four started with their favorite song again
!!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

on the othe side all boys were getting mad at there miserable state ! ;p nil n vicky were lying down on the sofa ! thier faces were pale n ashen like that of a corpse ! hehhe
rey on the rocking chair ... bit restless ... hearing songs frm his i pod ...
swayum observing nil n vicky 's rone dhone wale actions ! n bharat n amar ... controlling dem !!
vicky ; (crying madly ) meri kagu mereko chor kr chali gayi !!!!!!! ( uaan uaan :( :) )
bharat ; abe chor ke nai gayi tere bina party kr rahi h
vicky ; ( crying more madly ) haan voi voi ! :P
swayum vicky tu ro mat vo log abi aate hi honge ruk me unhe call krke poochta hu ki teri kagu kahan h ! ro mat !!!!!11 (wiping his tears lyk a mother ;p)
swayum called sharon !

tring tring !!!! tring tring !!! ;p
sharon picked up the call n as she picked ol gurls came near her to listen her talks *like smaal kids * n swayum had put the call on speakr as vicky was getting restless n rey hehe ... as soon as he knew

dat dey were calling gurls he just stopped the music but pretended as he was listening to it ! ;p haha

sharon ;(fully drunk tone ) heeelllooo !!!!!!! swaaayyyuuu !!!!!!! muaaahhh ! <3

swayum was dumbstruck at wat sharon said n her gestures , he thought dat she wud get mad at him as he interuptd in party but here she was giving him kisses ! hahha
n boys dey made " O " shape of their mouths n
all said colectively teasing swayum in gurls voice " muaaahhh "
:D
swayum quickly put the speaker of n went to the oder side of sofa ! ;p
swayum ; sharon u r drunk !!!!!!
sharon ; kyu tume koi problem !!!!!!! ( smiling wide )
swayum ; nai kya problem ho sakti h ... (brushing his hairs ) achcha tum ho kahan ? n baaki sab kahan h ??
sharon : kyu ma tumhe kyu batau ?????????/
swayum ; sharon ! please vo kya h na tum sabki ... (aftr thinkinf fr long tym ) ... vo ... tum sabki kuch dresses aayi h ... tumhare favorite designer ne aaj deliver ki h to tumhe aake

dekhni chaiye na !?
sharon ; got excited ! n she told swayum bout her whereabouts n also told dat ki sabne thoda si drink ki h which swayum understood ... they were fulltoo tully !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

swayum n the four soon reached dat place as fast as dey cud as it was nt safe fr gurls to howl at streets in too dark n dat too alone !
swayum n oder four men stood on sidewalk .
sharon hopped into swayums's arms !
swayum first felt bit akward but soon realised that this was his true sharon n remembers the colg party drunk scenes !!!
sharon screamed "honey !!!!!!!!!!! u here ?????????/
n boys burst out in laughtr !!
n all drunk gals "awww dat so sweeettt !!!!!!!!!!!! "
n boys laughed at dis tooo *sigh , poor girls * hahah

lets go ! swayum exclaimed .
gurls n boys hopped in leaving kriyaansh back ! wid swayum

kriya ; m gettin boared !!
swayum ; kriya tum tention na lo ye h na joker rockstar ye tumhe entertain karega !!
n rey was left wid ? questioning exp.
rey ; dude what do u mean ?
swaym *wispering in rey's ear * ab kya ma kriya ko aise halat ma sambhalu
rey ; ( knowing wat swayum meant to say ) areee tu ja na sharon tera wait kr rai h !
n swayum left !
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all gurls piled up at the back seat singing
" THE SUN'LL COME OUT TOMOOOROWWW :" yet again !!!!!!!!!! hahaha
"this luks fun " swayum commented wid a smile while ajusting himself at drivers seat !
the girls gigeled .
' It is s" neha agreed !
sharon again looking at back making her hands in order to pretend clicking piccha said " KODAK MOMMENT " !!
all down to the mansion !
sharon ; guys m nw tipping over n wanna go to bed !
"me too " vishakha squealed
rini ; OH ! CRAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ' i forgot where my room is though ???????????????????/ * pretending to faint same as she did in show while no ragging sequence * 😆 😆 😆
"come stay in my room " vishakha squealed .
back getting into giddy drunk mode .
"me too " simi screamed
sab muje akela chorke naaahhhiii me bbb !!!!!! neha said coming into full filmy mode !

" YEY !!!!!!!!!!!!! SLEEEP OVER " !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! rini shrieked !

" i just lost my girlfriend ! " vicky exclaimed coming into full devdas mode !!!!!!!
" oh ! me tooo !! " amar bharat nil joined him !

sharon rolled her eyes in a giddy drunk mode ! "i'm going to my room ...bye !!!!!
n sharon left n sharon ke peeche peeche swayum ;p

the oder eight piled up n headed upstairs,
the girls were giggly and loud the whole way up and didnt bother conveersing wid guys, finally they ended up in vishakha's room
vishakha pulled on her pajamas and gave the extra pair to neha ... an oversized teeshirt to rini n pink shorts to simi ! there were two queen sized beds
and girls fel into them and ... were asleep instantly ! ;p ;p ;p
boys just waited fr the mornig wen they will b giving coffee to their love's punding heads !!!!!!!!hahhahahhahahahha

~~~~~~~~~~ on other side
kriya went crazy she sat on the sidewalk doing anshan !!!!!!! :o
kriya ; mene kaha na jab tak tum dance krke nahi dikhaoge me yahan se nahi jaungi ! !
rey ; kriya ! u hv gone mad !!!!
kriya : kyaaa!!!!!!!!! tumne muje mad bola !!!!!!!!!!! ab to bilkul b nahi !!!!! tum naacho meri basanti !!!!!!!!!!!! hahhaha
rey heared sum ppl comin close to dem so he quickly decided to obey sardar's aka kriya's rule !
he quickly did a small micheal jacksons step !
but kriya ! was nt full wid it !!
kriya ; bas itta sa !!!!! nahiii *****she stood up pouting****
rey senseing sum body coming quickly took kriya in his arms n headed towards the car ! as if sum1 saw kriya in dat condition ...den it wud b a big touble fr her ...

~~~~ kriya was feeling numb ~~~' she was again into those arms ...
god shouting at herself at her miserable deeds everytime she got into such situations n ...den... got lost into those hipnotic eye's !
she felt like all her irritation was sucked by his breath !

Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Firstly congrats Upi...n v really luuuvvv ur FF...its not cox v r ur friends n hv to appreciate but u guys do a fab job!!! v really luuuvvv u n ur FF!!:):)<3<3