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Posted: 13 years ago
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hwww scarey precap but interasting 😉
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congrats on the new thread
awesome promo
waiting for the update
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread

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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update again I have tried to execute one of my stupid ideas 😆 hope each one of u would like it
love-Piya
PART 70

Geet was getting drowned in Maan's love

Maan: Agla mehmaan tumhara intezaar kar raha hai Geet [The next guest is waiting for u Geet]

Geet saw a beautiful diya arrangement on her path which were directing her towards her next destination

There was a huge bowl that was covered with a beautiful cloth

Geet removed the cloth and dipped her head slightly to see the contents of the bowl

The bowl was full of water but the most attractive and beautiful element was the moon's reflection in the water

When Geet dipped her head to see the contents of the bowl it seemed that the moon was only a small shadow of her beauty through this act Maan was directly comparing his moon with the moon of the nature

Before Geet could question Maan about this guest she felt a beautiful arrangement of white flowers which had the shape of the half moon curtained around herself

The memories of the first night after marriage were getting refreshed through this small act of Maan

The curtain of white moon shaped flowers had covered her from all the sides

One of the strings had a small switch attached with it; Geet pressed the switch and once again a note flashed on the screen

Note from the moon:

"Gurur tha mujhe khud ki khoobsurati par

magar aaj tumhe dekkar mil gayi hume sachayi ki wo nazar

Maante hai hum; tumsa iss jaha mein koi aur nahi

hummein toh daag hai par tum ho iss jahah ki sabse khoobsurat bedaag chandni"

[I was proud about my unchallenged beauty

But after meeting u I got the vision to see the truth

I agree no one can be compared to your beauty

I have some stains but u r the most beautiful unstained moonlight of this world]

Before Geet could say something; beautiful white light kissed her body from all the sides it seemed as if the moon was showering its divine blessings on her

Maan: Chand toh tumhari parchahyi hai Geet bada gurur tha uss khuda ko k uske paas ek chaand hai toh maine socha aaj apne pyar ki chamak zara uss chand ko bhi dhika du taaki mere chand k saamne aaj khud khuda sar jhukane par majboor ho jaaye [The moon is your shadow Geet; God was very proud of himself as he had a moon with him so I thought of showing him the shine of my moon to him as all the beautiful things of this world are nothing in comparison to my moon and look today the entire universe has been forced to bow down in front of my beautiful moon]

Geet had tears in her eyes she could not stop herself any more

She went and hugged Maan immediately

Maan: Kya hua Mishty abhi toh kafi mehmaan baaki hai milna nahi chahogi unse? [What's the matter Mishty still there r so many guests remaining won't u like to meet them?]

Geet: Mujhe kisise nahi milna Maan bus mujhe apne baho mein samet lijiye mujhe darr hai kahi aapka pyar dekhkar mujhe gurur na ho jaaye [I don't want to meet anyone Maan just capture me in the folds of your loving arms I am scared I may become proud after seeing your never ending love]

Maan: Gurur ki kya mazaal jo mere rehthe meri Geet ko chu sake tumhe chune ka pyar karne ka haq sirf mera hai sirf mera [No one can touch my Geet; only I have the right to touch u to love u as u r mine only mine]

Maan started placing wet kisses on her shoulder

Geet was in a teasing mood. She pushed Maan playfully and folded both her hands and looked at him seriously

Maan: Kya hua Geet? Aise kya dekh rahi ho? [What's the matter Geet? Why r u giving me such looks?]

Geet: Maan aapne saare kaaiynat ko mere muhdhikayi par invite kar diya aur sab ne mujhe itne pyare pyare anokhe taufe diye par Pati Devji aapka taufa kaha hai? [Maan u invited the entire universe for my muhdhikayi and each one of them showered me with unusual and memorable gifts but my dear husband what about your gift?]

Maan: Ofho Geet mujhe laga k itne famous logh tumhe gift de rahe hai toh mujhe gift laane ki kya zarurat toh main tumhare liye gift nahi laaya [Oh Geet I thought there is no need for my gift as all these famous guests are already showering you with memorable gifts hence I did not get anything for u]

Geet: Aww'nahi laye ; jaaiye main aapse baat nahi karti [Aww..u did not get anything go I am not going to talk to u]

She turned her back towards Maan. Maan very well knew that Geet was just teasing him with her fake anger

Maan goes and hugs her from behind

He bit her earlobe gently and Geet automatically melted within a matter of seconds

Maan: Aisa ho saktha hai k meri Mishty ki muhdhikayi par uska Maan khali haath aa jaaye aaj main tumhare liye kuch khaas taufa laaya hoon [ Is it possible that ur Maan won't get a gift for his Mishty on her muhdhikayi? I have got a very special gift for u today]

Geet: Achha toh bataiye aisa kya special gift aap lekar aaye ho mere liye? [Okay show me my special gift]

Maan placed a huge rose in front of her. This rose was not a real one it was made up of satin ribbon

She took the rose but gave a questionable look to Maan as she could hear some rhythmic beats from the rose

Geet: Maan iss gulab se ye kaisi aawazein aa rahi hai? [Maan where is this sound coming from is it from the rose?]

Maan: Ye gulab nahi Geet ye mera dil hai aur ye aawaz mere dil ki dhadkane hai aaj tumhari muhdhikayi par main apna dil tumhare saamne kholkar dhikana chahtha hoon [This is not an ordinary rose Geet this is my heart and the sounds that u can hear are my heartbeats; today I want to open my heart in front of u this is my gift on your muhdhikayi]

Geet was totally surprised

Maan guided her finger towards one end of the rose. He kissed her fingertips and requested her to unwind the ribbon (satin ribbon rose)

Maan: Mere dil k pehle panne ko padna shuru karo Geet har ek paane par mere dil ki dhadkano se maine tumhare liye pyar ka ek paigaam likha hai [Open the first page of my heart Geet I have written some messages of love with my heartbeats for u go and read them]

Geet started unwinding the ribbon

She was spellbound to see the source from where the sounds were coming

Maan had written the entire message with the help of small "Gungroos"

The gungroos were made of gold and Maan had stitched them beautifully on the satin ribbon in the form of a message

Maan placed his hand on her shoulder and went and stood behind her

Maan: Mere dil ki sachhayi padho Geet [Read the truth of my heart Geet]

Maan guided her fingers to the starting of the message and he placed his lips very close to her ear and started reading the message

Maan: Dil ki kahani aaj dil ki dhadkano ki zubaani sunane jaa raha hoon Geet jaanta hoon tumhe ehsaas hai mere pyar ki gehrayi ka par phir bhi tumhara haq banta hai mere dil k har ek jharoke mein jhaakne ka [I am going to read out the story of my heart with the help of my heartbeats I am aware that u understand the depth of my love but I feel u have the right to see every corner of my heart personally]

He kissed her cheek

Maan:

"Dil ka har ek lahu bus tera naam lethi hai

Teri khushboo inn dhadkano ko madhosh kar jaathi hai

Dil toh humara hai par parchahyi tumhari hai

Dhadkata toh hai ye humare seene mein par iss dil mein mehfil tumhari hai"

[The blood that flows through my heart sings your name

My heartbeats get intoxicated by your fragrance

Heart is mine but it is embedded in your shadow

It beats in my chest but the happiness of this heart lies in you]

Maan:

"Pyar karna iss dil ko tumne shikaya

maasumiyat ki kashish se iss dil ko jawan tumne banaya

tum na hothi toh shayad main kabka zinda laash bun chuka hotha

meri zindagi k har ek panne ko sapno se bhi zyada khoobsurat tumhine banaya"

[U taught me to love; u were the one who bestowed the magic of your innocence and touched my heart with the delightful feel of youth. If u wouldn't have been there then I would have been leading my life like a lifeless soul. This is the truth Geet u r the one who have beautified every page of my life with your love]

Geet unwounded the ribbon to read the next part of the message

Maan:

"Ek regastan mein bhatak raha tha main tum ne mujhe jannat ka rasta dhikaya

Apne palko ki chadar bhichakar tapti hui dhoop k keher se hume bachaya

Hum toh marne k kagaar par the jeena hume tumhine sikhaya

Pathjhad sithi zindagi humari isse dulhan ki tarah tumhine sajaya"

[My life was like a desert but you lead me to the path of paradise

By spreading the folds of your eyelashes u protected me from the scorching heat of the sun

I was on the verge of death u were the one who gave me a new life

My life was an autumn ur simple touch decorated it like a beautiful bride]

Geet had tears in her eyes. Maan touched her hand sensually and requested her to open the next part of the message

Geet unwounded the remaining part of the ribbon

Maan: Shurkraguzar hoon main uss pal ka jab tumne mujhe apni zindagi mein shaamil kiya [I am grateful to u for making me a part of ur life]

Maan took her finger and tapped the ghungroo gently giving rise to a musical tune

Maan: Iss besure se aalam mein apne meethe suro ka aazaz bhar diya [U converted my unmusical environment into a melodious tune with ur love]

Geet smiled happily and went to the next part of the message

Maan:

Kin lafzo mein bayan kare k aapki aihmeyat humari zindagi mein kya hai

Yuh samaj lijiye k aap humari zindagi ka wo farishta hai jinhone humari takdeer ko bulandiyoon k mukaam tak pauchaya hai

Aap humare aks ka wo khazana hai jiski hifazaat karne k liye hum saikdoh baar maut ko apne aaghosh mein bhar sakthe hai

Aapki muskurahat humare jeene ka maksad hai

Aapki ibadaat humare dil ki mannat hai

Jaha aapke kadmo ki chap padh gayi wahi humari jannat hai

Jhukthe hue aapke inn palko mein hi humare dil ki manzil hai

Aapke hotho k pankhudiyoon ki nazakaat humare mohabbat ki amanat hai

Guzra hua har ek pal aur aane wala humara sunhera kal humare mohhabat par uss khuda ki rehmat hai"

[How should I explain what place do u hold in my life

U r the angel of my life who has taken me to the heights of success

U r the precious gem of my soul and I can die millions of death to keep u safe

Your smile is the reason of my existence

Your worship is the temple of my heart

The place which has the mark of ur footsteps is the paradise of my heart

The destination of my heart lies in ur beautiful eyelashes

The soft delicate petals of your lips are my most precious possession

The days that have passed by and the days that r going to come is the blessing of the Almighty on our love]

The rose had now reached its end Geet could see a sparkling heart shaped structure which had a border made up of diamonds

The middle portion of the heart was curtained with the ghungroos but this curtain was stitched in such a way that it could be removed very easily

Geet understood that Maan had left this part unstiched intentionally

She was about to remove the barrier that was preventing her to see the hidden element when all of a sudden Maan stopped her from proceeding ahead

Maan: Geet ab jo tum dekhne jaa rahi ho wo mere dil ka sabse anmol hissa hai zara samalkar dekhna mera wo anmol hissa najaane kab se mere dil mein aaram farma raha hai khayal rahe usse halki sibhi takleef honena paaye [Geet this is the most precious part of my heart and it has been residing in my heart from a very long time be careful u should not disturb it as it is really precious]

Geet was slightly confused. She started removing the ghungroos slowly and with utmost care

She could not stop her tears from flowing when she saw the precious part of Maan's heart

It was her photo but not an ordinary one this photo was stitched with beautiful pearls and it had the border of precious diamonds

Maan: Tumhi toh ho mere dil ka wo anmol khazana jiske liye ye dil dhadaktha hai agar tum iss dil mein nahi rehthi toh najaane ye dil kab ka dhadakna bhool chukka hotha. Geet vaada karo humesha mere dil mein yuhi samayi rahogi mujhse koi bhool ho gayi tab bhi mujhse kabhi dur nahi jaayogi humesha yahi rahogi mere dil k kareeb meri Mishty bankar meri zindagi bankar [U r the most precious gem of my life, my heart beats only for u. If u would not have been in this heart then my heartbeats would have lost long back. Promise me Geet u will stay in my heart forever even if I commit a mistake u will never leave me; u will stay in my heart always as my Mishty; as my life]

Geet was overwhelmed by his gesture. She simply captured his lips into a soul searing kiss and allowed their hearts to do the talking

PRECAP: Angry Maan😲😉

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
speechless
yu deseve loads of hugs n kiisses di...
wat a tot...
amazing ...
fab...
idk wat shd i say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh wow angry maan this s smthng i would luv to see...
but mishty ke samne he wont be able to maintain his angry self for more time...
yay...
me first
very very happie di😊
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
WOW Piya 👏

mind blowing update... u wrote superbly 👏👍🏼
i jus love the connection between Maan n Geet 😍 thanks 2 u 🤗
precap..Maan is angry 😆 i'm sure Geet will pacify him 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
awesome
just loved it
Precap is exciting
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome
loved it.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful update dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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a wife would always wish to get a immense love from a husband...

u have portrayed it so beautifully...

i search for words to comment...

million and zillion likes...

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