Tujh Main Rab Dikhta Hain MG OS

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Hey everyone...I am back with a Maaneet OS...I have tried to do something different for once...I hope you like it! šŸ˜‰ Please comment and tell me how it is...it really does make my day and ofcourse encourages me to write more for you!


The Sun rays disturbed geet's sleep. She woke up feeling emotionally exhausted. It was a new morning and she had decided to fix everything. It was all her fault as she blamed maan for betraying her when he had been her saviour all along. Dev was only released for a day and that too because of Dadimaa and that everything was just a misunderstanding. Maan had been her support from the first time she had met him in hoshiyarpur and now what had she done. Insulted him infront of everyone when he was trying to make her life better, and actually was going to give the baby his name, knowing his brother's deeds. She had to apologise. In her eyes, babaji had sent maan so that she and her baby would be safe. He was the angel sent from above. Thinking these thoughts, she got up, and quickly got ready. It was time to visit Khurana Constructions, and confront maan.

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When she reached KC, she was told that Maan had not come in today to work and was working from home. She wanted to ask why, but she probably knew the reason herself, so that they would stay away from each other and would not confront each other. He had made up his mind that he did not deserve her, but it was the other way around, she didn't deserve him or his precious love. He had done so many things for her, even employed all the Indian Paints workers just for her and sold that company to someone else so that she would not be tied to that contract. Now it was her turn to do something.

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She reached khurana mansion, and instantly bumped into Nakul.

Nakul: Maam aap?

Geet: Haan...nakul tumne maan sir ko kahin dekha hain kya?

Nakul: Haan...woh abhi hall main hain...tai chi ki practise kar rahe hain...

Geet: Thanks nakul...Dadimaa ghar pe hain?

Nakul: Nahin woh shaadi attend karne gayi hain..kal lautengi...

Geet: Okay...tum jao...

Geet left Nakul and went to look for Maan. She had lived in this house long enough to very well know where everything was. As she was walking she could remember their cute knok-joks and how maan had cornered her to the wall or how he was taking off her jewellry. Those were their sweet memories which were engraved itself in the mansion. It was only theirs no-one elses. She walked to maan where he vigorously exercising.

Na kuch poocha

Na kuch manga
Tune dil se diya jo liya
Na kuch bola na tola
Muskura ke diya jo diya

Maan couldn't see her as he was facing the other way. She could see how stressed he was with his muscles flexing every now and then.

Tu hi dhoop tu hi chau

Tu hi apna paraya
Aur kuch na jana
Bas itna hi janu

He was breaking ice, and playing with fire. She could feel the emotional turmoil that he was going through.

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karun
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karun
Sajde Sar jhukta hai
Yaara mein kya karun
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karun
Rab Ne bana di jodii

She had enough of this.

Geet: Maan Sir...

Maan stopped what he was doing and turned around to look at geet who was worried for him. She started to walk towards him with slow steps. She looked at his eyes which only reflected pain, probably for her. She felt guilt, how could she even doubt this man for a second?

Geet: Maan Sir...please aap yeh exercising ban kijye...

Maan: Geet tum yaha...shouldn't you be at work?

Geet: I have taken a day off...

Maan: Hmm...

He was about to move away from her when she started speaking again.

Geet: I am sorry maan...for everything. (he looks at her, he was going to say something but geet cuts him off) Please maan mujhe aaj kehne dijye...

I am truly sorry for everything. Maine aapko galat samjha...aapka pyar ko galat samjha. Main bhool gayi thi ki jo insaan meri zaroorat ko apni zaroorat se pehle raktha hain woh kabhi bura nahi chahe ga. Par mujhe aaj sab kuch pata chal gaya hain...ki main kitni galat thi aur aap kitne sahi. Aapne mujhe sab kuch diya...meri har itcha ko pura kiya par maine kya kiya sirf aapko badnam kiya...aur upar se uss din main aap ko...(she puts her hand on her mouth with the duppata)

Maan: Geet uss din..maine hi tumhe batamezi se haat lagaya...

Geet: Nahi...aap mujhe kabhi dukh poncha hi nahi sakte...aapka pyaar hi sab kuch hain...aaj mujhe pata chala hain ki maine kitni badi bhool ki hain...

Apne toh sirf Dev ko isliye jail se nikala kyunki dadimaa chahti thi aur woh bhi kuch samay ki liye hi...aur kal aapne naintara ko bhi handle kiya mujhe bataye begair...

Maan...main aapke haat jodh thi hun (she puts her hand together but maan is quick to grab them) please mujhe maaf kar dijye...main aapko iss halat main nahi dekh sakti...

Maan: Geet tum yeh kya kar rahi ho? Aur yeh jo tum keh rahi ho yeh sab sirf shabdon main acha lagtha hain..par assal main tho baat yeh hain ki main tumare layak nahi hun...aur galti toh meri bhi hain na...maine tumhe sach nahi bataya aur isliye...tum aise...

Aur waise bhi...Dev mera bhai hain...aur jaante huwe...tum meri saath aik nahi zindagi shuru kar paogi...bhool paogi ki dev mera bhai hain...nahin...geet...tum kisi aur ko deserve karti ho...

Chali jao yaha se...yehi tumare liye behtar hoga...

Geet: Main aapke liye sab kuch bhulane ko tayiaar hun...aur aap aapne aap aur dev ki kabhi comparison mat kijye ga...aap main aur uss insaan main zammen aasman ka farak hain...aur woh aap ke jaisa kabhi ban hi nahi sakta...aap jaise sache dil insaan kisko nahi mil sakta...

Aur haan...baby ko apne papa ka pyaar chahiye...kyunki baby ab papa ke bina bhi nahi reh sakti...

Maan main aapke bina nahi reh sakthi...aap meri zindagi ban gaye ho...maan ke bina geet adhuri hain...isse toh acha hain ki main marjao...

Maan: GEEET...(he covers her mouth with his hand) Khabar daar tumne aise baate ko toh...aur haan, geet ke bina maan bhi adhura hain...

He embraces her in a tight hug. They stay there for ages, locked in each other's arms where both found peace and solace. After ages they break apart a little.

Geet: Maan aap hi mere sab kuch ho...please kabhi bhi mere se dhoor mat jana. Jab aap mere saath rehthe hain...tho babaji ki jhalak dikhti hain!

She bends down but maan immediately stops her.

Maan: Geet tum yeh kya kar rahi ho...main itna bhi mahan nahi hun...

Geet: Nahi...aap meri liye bagwan se bhi zyada ho...aap main rab dikha hain...

Maan: Geet...

He again embraced her in a hug and kissed her on her forehead to show her that he loves her immensely.

~THE END ~




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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG me FIRST????😲

Lovely OS dear….šŸ‘

The characterization of Geet's feeling was awesomeā€¦šŸ˜³

Hawww yeh kaise ho gaya???😲

Nakul ghar par aur dadima nahi… Bichara Nakul….???šŸ˜‰

Badi naainsaafi haiā€¦šŸ˜†

Loved the dialogues of Maaneet….😳

Me could feel the pain in themā€¦šŸ˜­

The pain of their separation, love, anger, helplessness….Everyting could be felt….😳

Very apt title….😳

Awesome OS dearā€¦šŸ‘

Me wondering if there's a Part 2????šŸ˜‰

Love you
Ruchi😳
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awesome os...

loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such lovely os...


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Beautiful os...
Missing maaneet a lot..
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wow fabulous update

really love it

now am really missing our maaneet alot

this os is really really wonderful

keep it up dear
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