Not Quite Prince Charming (removed)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awesome update loved it azaar is khushi she is the fire as it arvnav means ocean so maybe it mean the ocean will dowse the fire

loved the update arnav working for khushi this i can't wait to see loved the update very cute thanks for the pm

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Kuku

@lankan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Loved it. The symbolism was great. I really liked the end, totally wasn't excepting it, but hey i'd rather you surprise us then make us predict the plot ; )

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667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Absolutely amazing! Loved it :DD

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Love love love the concept... I love Disney... 😃

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

omg he wants to work with her...wow this is interesting...thnx 4da pm dear...loved t...

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

ooo arnav working under khushi

do i see glimps of past here? haha i like it!

wonder what he will do besides annoy her, irritate her and of course romance her!

hehe please pm me when you update next

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I am so in love how you've conceptualized the story! Fire and water cannot survive together. It normally is the ocean which extinguishes the fire but now Arnav is giving Azhaar all the time to burnt and scar him.LOL!

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

OMG!!!! I absolutely loved it! He applied! And I bet he can't cook for shit! Or can he? Please please please continue soon!

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Heart heart bubble bubble!

loool!!! i can't think of fairytales without the times i've spent playing heart HEART bubble Bubble (u're saying that in ur mind now aren't yu? 🤣loool)

i luv the way yu described how she was singed by the heat coming off him..👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

okie symbolism..

where's the fire? in the kitchen

who's burning? BOTH of course

how long will it last? beyond Azaar Ltd

what's the kheer doing there? u tell me! loool