ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th1: Prologue, Ch 1-16

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

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wow

Great start dear..

Just read the prologue..

Such a beautiful concept..

I know its gonna be awesome

time while reading this ff..

i earlier read ur "A Word's Worth" story..

& it's totally different genre..I really like it..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#982

Awesome part1..Arshi comes face to face after 10 years gap..loved to read that khushi is independent..she is a wedding planner...really interesting dear..👍🏼

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#983

part2...hmm i felt that something is fishy or mysterious..something had happened in the past..the way they reacted, and the tension between them..made me very curious...TG it's akash wedding..i thought khushi is going to planned arnav marriage...really liked akash..so arnav and khushi will work together for akash wedding..interesting..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#984

part 3..OMG...what a twist..i arnav misunderstood her..arnav & Anjali saw shayam and khushi together😲..such a horrible incident..so that's why the awkwardness between arshi ..and shayam and payal r couple..wow...story is getting more & more interesting..and i'm loving it..⭐️

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#985

😊part4...brilliantly written...i can easily imagine the way u describe RM in khushi's eyes..loved this enthusiastic and smart khushi..loved it the way she retorting him back with the same intensity..lovely Rabba Ve scene...nani is so sweet...

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#986

part5...awesome chapter..so Anjali is coming..she didn't live with her family..Aditi is so sweet just like akash..really liked khuhsi and aditi bonding..interesting..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#987

part6...superb chapter..loved arshi khatti meethi nok jhonk..khushi is jealous seeing arnav with lavanya...payal and shayam r worried for khushi..it's gonna be interesting when Anjali comes...one thing for sure arshi r in love with each other since teenage..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#988

part7..adorable chapter...Aww the red saree will bring arshi together😆😆..the way u describe the exchange between them..i'm wondering how they can speak with their eyes...😉..totally loved it...loved their Rabbe ve moments..beautifully written...

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#989

part8...O.M.G...what part u wrote...i'm completely surprised...they were back in their usual selves ...they talked ..they had their dinner together..and this lovely evening is ending up with their mind blowing kiss...hayeee..such a romantic evening..so passionate..but everything ruined by idiot shayam entry...arnav again misunderstood her..& left her without saying anything...

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#990

part9...fantastic update...u made me so emotional dear..very very heart-touching update...seriously i didn't expect anjali's this reaction when they come face to face...gosh anjali and arnav both had suffered in their childhood...and glad to read that anjali knew the truth...amazingly written dear..🤗