ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th1: Prologue, Ch 1-16

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#991

part10...brilliantly writen...finally, anjali confessed the whole truth...finally, arnav come to know khushi's innocence...so heart-touching update..i just loved this story..👍🏼

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#992

part11...fabulous part...Now anjali back on her match making avtar😉...loved it...now arnav wanted to apologise to khushi..and she run away..😆😆...loved it the way u describe whole scene and khushi's monologue..

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.ButterCup.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#993

part 12...beautiful chapter...arnav feels so jealous & possessive towards khushi...but khushi's words left me wondering what & why she said to him...anyways...nicely written..i'm thoroughly enjoying this exceptional story...

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.ButterCup.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#994

part 13...i liked the way he wooing her back...very light-hearted update...loved it.. anjali and aditi teasing them...i'm thinking that khushi is scared...scared of losing their friendship..scared of loosing newly found relations..i think so...whatever her reasons..arnav knew how to win her trust..how to win her love..beautiful update..

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#995

Part 14...so serene and beautiful update...finally, akash and aditi married...loved it the way she soothes him about anjali's happiness...both knew what they wanted from each other..and this now shows in their gestures...wonderfully written...😃

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#996

part 15...wow...such a romantic chapter..

loved their sizzling chemistry...their kiss was so intense, sensuous & mind blowing...& what a pure bliss... arnav found his 13 year old pic which is safely kept by khushi...loved it completely reading khushi's thoughts about marriage..and she reciprocates arnav gestures and didn't run way ...

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.ButterCup.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#997

part16...

lovely chapter..wow..khushi finally confessed her feelings to him...such an outstanding story...this my most fav chapter so far...fantabulous part..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#998

moving to the next thread..i must tell i'm thoroughly enjoying this story every bit of it...

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Niranjana R

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Posted: 11 years ago

#999

loved it.. so good story

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mdm2013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1000

"Damn, Di. I am almost tempted to tell Akash that we should postpone our honeymoon. I think it's too soon to show him my true colors, though" Aditi laughed.

Dat was one hilarious and awesome facet to who Aditi was.

Where Colors of the Wind was an intense and emotional love story, Fate Intertwined was a breath of fresh air!!

Light and fast moving! Dunno if I too am a sucker for forevers, but I love the stories wherein Arshi relationship starts at young age( teens) and goes on to become stronger as they grow-up. 😃

Gives them enough time, I think, to grow-up while handling responsibilities and also realize their feelings in the meanwhile!! 😉😛

Dat may also be the reason why I love your Emerald Isle so much!!