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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Usma55

Can you write an English translations for all of the parts please

Because I dont understand Hindi
Sorry
Update soon





ok dear i will try to do it and will pm u...btw from which country are you from???
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
BRILLIANT PLEASE ADD AS A BUDDY
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
This Is Getting Good ;) 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update... This is getting interesting...
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
awesome updates loved ir
pls pm me when u update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx everyone for THE likes and comments😊 and please those WHO WANT PM PLEASE add ME ON YOUR BUDDY LIST...
will be updating today 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me updating part 6...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great SS
Please PM me when yr next update is ready.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-6

Garima started crying after narrating the whole story...



Anjali had tears in her eyes knowing wht khusi had to go thru in such a small age...at least they had naani ...mama... n maami to support them...she inwardly decided to shower her love to khusi like she does to Arnav...

n Arnav after hearin all dis started respectin n thanking kartik inwardly for how he loved n took care of khusi in such bad phase of life...


INSIDE THE HOSPITAL ROOM

Kartik wid a heavy heart n lots of courage entered the room to see what he had never wished to...
his life...his only support...the only person for whom she had been breathing...fighting...struggling...his happiness...his khusi...was lying in a hospital bed fighting for her life...

he slowly n silently went near her and sat near the bed on a tool...n took here pale and skinny hand pierced wid a big syringe in his... n started complainin...

Kartik:aapko bohot maja aata he na hume tng karke...dats not fair khusi...u promised ki aap apna khayal rakhengi...its just not fair...aab hum aapka koi v jid pura nahi karenge...aur ye kya baat hui ki aapne shaadi tak karli...aur hume batana jaruri nahi samjha...kyun...(feelin hurt)...woh sab chodiye...ye bataiye...ki...ye sab...kese huwa...kisne kiya...hum... unhe nahi chodenge...beta...bataiye hume...kese huwa ye sab...boliye na khusi... baat kariye humse...kyun itni chup hein aap...humse aapki chuppi bardaast naahi hoti...aap jaanti hein na...(tear making way out his eyes)
jaldi se thik hojaiye beta humse aapki ye haalat dekhi nahi jaarahi...


Kartik was crying like a kid when rest of the family entered the room wid the doctor ...

payal came forward n place a consoling hand on his shoulder...
Payal : bhaiya...doctor keh rahe hein ki khusi aab khatre se bahar hein aur kuch hi dinon me thk hojayegi...

Doctor: ji ha lekin...
Arnav : lekin...what doctor...koi problem...
Doctor: problen toh nahi...but ek prevention ya kahu suggestion he...
Arnav :what???
Kartik: anythng doctor...bas meri behen ko jaldi thk kardijiye...
Doctor:dekhiye...Mrs.Raizada ko sir par chote aayi hein...issi le avi vi unki halat thodi naajuk hein...issi liye mera sujhaw ye hein ki inke ghaw varne tak inko behosi k halat mein hi rakhna thik hoga...kya he ki avi inke liye jyaada sochna aur stress lena jaan lewa hosakta he...aur agar hosh mein aane k baad ye accident k baare me jyaada sochne lag jaayengi toh...khatra hosakta he...

Aakash:but doctor...itne time k liye behosh rehna...kya ye safe hoga???
Doctor:Don't worry Mr.Raizada...it would be fine...
Arnav thought for a while n said...
Arnav: ya doctor...do it...the only thng i ant is khusi to be safe n fine...

the doctor gave certain medication to khusi...

Doctor: ye medications inhe har 24 hour mein dne honge...aur ha aap inhe...2 din k baad ghar vi leja sakte hein...

a breeze a joy touched everyone's face...
Anjali:sach...
doctor smiled a bit n left the room...



precap: taking khusi to RM
phew...finally updated...

please do press like n share your views in the form ofcomments...eager to read them...😆😃

Edited by Rocxy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
RES

yaeh me first...lemme celebrate that first...
anyways gettin bac to the story...it was nice dear n keep khushi sedated?????hope u continue soon dear n thnx 4da pm
Edited by kitzdoll - 13 years ago

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