IPKKND OS : I Will Wait For You, Part 3 Page 21 !

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

beautifully written. it was satisfying in the way i can imagine and feel arnav's regret that he has to live with now

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jtammareddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Wow! That was breath taking.

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fareeha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Beautiful beautiful!
Heartwrenching end, but absolutely beautifully written.
Pls give us a happy OS too, plz?

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abii95

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Wow, you are an amazing writer honestly :')
I dont think for a moment i got bored of reading lol
;'( very sad ending yet so beautiful

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haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

whenever i think of a closure scene its always Bruce Willis' Sixth Sense.
Going down the lane of the end , promising a better beginning..its always so poignant.

The same went here for Arnav. I just cant imagine what he must have felt seeing her there.
What anyone feels wen just one misjudgement cost someone's life.
But the closure of that horrific moment was just so beautiful.
The landscape nurturing Khushi's most cherished qualities...a soothing presence.
Arnav's apologies for an act that may not have been committed by him but happened through him.
He knew he was yearning for a saudade feeling...something which would never come back.

Lastly wen Khushi answered his silent question as to why she never survived "You never asked me to stay". , what a kill...After this what remained was Arnav's realization to let her go to some place where she'll belong and where he'll too be welcomed.."I will wait for You".

Fabulous just so bloody fabulous Haley!!!!!!!!!!

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Jasleen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Wow Hayley that was a beautiful part! Very well written, I loved how you showed Arnav's pain and regret! Awesome job as always!!!

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shona-li

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

A part of me is kinda happy you wrote this, for all the times Arnav has unchivarously left her in the middle of nowhere in the dead of the night. That just ain't cool. What an a**.

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

wow, what a beautiful update... khushi's words 'you never asked me to stay' are so overwhelming and poignant! yet her parting words leave us all with a sense of hope that these star-crossed lovers would one day reunite ina better place