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raii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

beautiful,sad, heart wrenching... 👏

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drumstick

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

that was really intense

cant wait to read the rest

make it fast

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peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

It was the most depressing piece I've read on Arhi but I loved it.

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Auroni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

OMG this song...I madly love this song...
And the OS ws really heart touching...
Beautifully written...

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kaira101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

👏👏👏

such a heart wrenching update I loved it

sooo sad i literally had tears in my eyes😭

thanx for the message

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Divya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

after a very long time huh!!!😆 btw amazingly written!!!! loved it!!!😍

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priyah_reddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Hayley I literally had tears after reading this :)

Absolutely splendid job :) loved it to shreds ...

Wow was heart wrenching ...

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Batool Imran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Hayley.🤗

It was something out of a fairy tale I guess, something that you have always cherished all your life, but never have a chance to express, and one day there comes when it is lost in the evils of this world, leaving you with a weeping heart having nothing but sorrow pouring out of it.

I wont say that I cried, because I really dont cry all that much, really takes something big for me to cry, but yes I was on the verge of letting my tears escape. Their ecastsy, the kind of feeling of guilt that is all over him, how those woods were nothing but events of treachery for him now.😳

You seriously, are an amazing writer, and as much as I am a sore loser at commenting, this update definetly made me commenting. Sure I had to think for a good 2 minutes, about the story until it came back to me, leaving me mystfied by the way you have played with words to portray something that is only beyond purity.😳

Thankyou for the update, and ofcourse the email too.🤗

And what ever happened of 'Where Happiness Lives', is it on hold or something?, or did I miss getting email's to its updates?😕

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Flame.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Hayley! This was heartrending :(

I just finished read a tearjerking book and now i came here and read your chapter. Ahh i'm totally in the depression zone. This was so sad. Why did she die :( My eyes were wet whilst reading it. Sad yet beautiful <3