IPKKND OS : I Will Wait For You, Part 3 Page 21 !

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Man!!! This was sooo Sad!!! I swear...I felt like I waz gonna cry with every word that i had written!!! Ohhh goshhh!!! Arnav will be broken without her!! He will neva forget her and move on 🥺

So emotional!! =| Love it!!

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

It was so beautiful. Heart wrenchingly so. You took me to another world with this. Loved it!

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Zania

@zaniax

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

tht was so sad..i had tear's in my eyes😭..But it was beautifully written :)

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Just stumbled across this, and I am actually blown away by how beautifully you wrote everything. This was truly amazing. sad, but it was the perfect end.

I was wishing with all my heart that she would say yes to coming back with him, and then they will go back to being together. My heart ached for Arnav at the pain and guilt he must feel, you brought tears to my eyes at how Khushi forgave him and gave him the strength to continue.

I can't even imagine how Arnav would do without Khushi by his side, and you gave us a glimpse of what could happen, and it's heartbreaking.

But really, this was an amazing OS! I'll definitely be recommending it on my blog! :D

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DrishS

@DrishS

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

It's heartbreakingly beautiful, Hayley! I don't have enough words for this. I feel so sad for Arnav :'(

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Beautiful but sad dear. feeling bad for Arnav😭

Thanks 😛

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Hay Jaaan !!
seriously man I was angry for a second cause Id totally lost touch with the story !!
But then reading it made me all so calm and it touhed my heart so deeply that I couldnt afford to be angry anymore...Seriously one o the best heart-wrenching stories Ive read and yet or some reason by the end of it I had a smile on my face and tears in my eyes...
Smile cause she wasnt gone forever .She said she;s wait or him always...And tears cause he has I am guessing a long time beore he gets to actually meet her !! All the guilt he's going through...I eel so bad or Arnav I just wanna hug him back...
Loved the OS update thoroughly...And Im waiting or WHL !!
Thanks for the msg

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nj123

@nj123

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

That was just beautiful!😭

I'm just kinda disappointed that they had to part with a fight.

This was heart wrenching and absolutely LOVELY!😃

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Loved it
It was so heart wrenching
Loosing ur love is so painful
The last line she was gone left me in tears
U wrote it beautifully and the song is so good

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imran78

@imran78

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

I was waiting for this chapter since long, and was delighted when i got your email.
It was very sad yet beautiful written.
Arnav has to deal his whole life with the guilt. I feel very sorry for him but i think it was the perfect end. I cant imagine, how the life would be for both, if khushi had survived. Would they be able to forget the past and start anew.

Thanks for your email hayley.