OS: Don't Leave Me Alone!

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spurthi

@spoorthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

awesome update smitha
loved it😳
beautifully written
hope something like this happen in future
thanks for the pm

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Archana Natarajan

@archanan14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Awww this was sooo sweet... Love your OSs, they just make me happy! Thanks for the PM!

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subiscs

@subiscs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

awesomeee os!!!! i need to find new adjectives i think to appreciate ur os 😊!!!! oh my all ur os rock ya!!😊

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SankaDevi20

@SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

"He tried sitting in front of the laptop, to let work, his ever demanding mistress charm his mind away from his wife" - Hahah this was my favorite line! Laptop se kardo inki sagaai! Love how you mixed in the laptop! I adore the way you described both of their pent up emotions coming out, and khushi cried for a good hour! It was a good decision on her part to leave for a couple of days! Good for her to get her thoughts together and good for arnav for obvious reasons, run after her, realization! He climbed in through the window, sho cute! And her book, I am wondering ( the show!) what she keeps putting in there and whether or not it's gonna play a big role, but it certainly did here and I'm happy - again khushi made him laugh! Uh-oh, too long comment! I loved this os! :D