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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on your new thread...update the next part soon😊
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Congrats Anu for the new thread
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Waiting for geet's manana and keeping her promise😉
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congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi All,
This is a MEGA update. I hope you all like this part. Do please let me know.
--Anu
Part 53
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She tried looking everywhere but could not find him. She asked dadima to give her responsibility to someone else for some hours as she was too tired. She then tried calling Maan several time but Maan did not pick it and she knew why and only kept prying to her babaji.

It was almost evening and Geet ad tried all afternoon to find Maan but he was no where to be seen. He actually got himself busy in looking for outdoor arrangements of marriage but did not contact Geet. he was really furious on her.

In the evening Geet was called by Dadima to be by Annie's as both of them would be ready together. So Geet was in Annies room but her all attention was on Maan.

"I have really been rude, I should have not said such things to Maan, how could I and how did I. Since you have known Maan love you so much, you have started taking too much liberty Geet.

The love for which you used die for, today you just misbehaved with it"

She looked up to her Babaji

"Babaji please make everything fine and please calm down Maan, please Babaji' this will never ever happen again."

After both the girls were ready and Annie was too excited and talking to Arjun chupke chupke on phone, Geet excused herself to check on Maan.

While she was going up on stairs, Maan was coming down and both were lost in their own though and they collided on stairs. Geet was about to fall when Maan pulled her up to himself .

Both were lost for few moments when Geet realized she has to speak to Maan.

"I am sorry" It was then Maan came back to sense, he separated himself from her, gave hard look and speedily went down.

"Such a good chance Babaji gave you geet but you wasted it all" but soon Geet got call from Dadima

"Geet, where are you beta' sangeet is about to start. Come along with Annie to Sangeet area."

Both Bride and bride grooms family and guests were to celebrate Sangeet together.

Dadima made sure everyone was present in sangeet. Sangeets started with full swing. Performers performed first and it was a blast. Geet was always trying to steal Glances of Maan, but he was no where to give her chance of eyelock so that she can plead forgiveness.

Then the couples were called one by one for Sangeet. The hosting was done by Annies friend.

First her friends performed. Then Arjun's Parents were called, then Dadima did her dance. After that few more pairs got call from Arjun's side and then Maan and Geet were called.

Geet was not sure that if Maan will even come, he was too angry to Dance with her and she was right Maan turned to leave when he heard someone commenting'

"Making a middle class girl a house wife is something else and being presented with her is something different'"

However angry he was with her, that was between them. He could not let anyone down Geet. He stopped that very moment. And the moment he stopped he heard Her voice'

(Listen to this song for real feel of it)

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GH3qRlwNdP8[/YOUTUBE]

She came forward and held his wrist from back

Achaa ji main haari, chalo maan jaao naa'. Maan looked at her, he anyhow cannot leave her alone in sangeet

Dekhi sabaki yaari, meraa dil jalaao naa'.. He snapped his hand away from her

Chhote se kasoor pe, aise ho khafaa'.. Geet slightly hel her ears

Roothe to huzuur the, meri kyaa khataa'. Maan went to the center, ignoring her

Dekho dil naa todo' Geet ran and held his hand

Chhodo haath chhodo' he signaled her from eyes to leave his hand.

Dekho dil na todo

Are! chhodo haath chhodo'. He held her hand and freed his wrist

Chhod diyaa to haath maloge samajhe?... She made a baby face and turned to other side

Ajii samajhe!...

And funny part was everyone though this was their performance and was unique.

Geet pulled him to center and they started playing their roothna Manana, fully aware people are watching them but from within their own fight going on.

Jiivan ke ye raaste, lambe hain sanam '. Geet held his hand on her shoulder and started walking

Kaatenge yeh zindagii, Thokar khaake ham '. Maan just dragged himself reluctantly

She went infront of him' Aye! zaalim saath dele

Maan turned to other side with his both hands on his chest ' Achche hum akele

Zaalim saath dele

Are achchhe ham akele

She left him quietly and sat near Arjun and Annie' Chaar kadam bhii chal na sakoge samajhe?

Haan samajhe!... he turned and saw she was not near her.

Everyone started laughing on Maan'. From inside he actually felt very happy that people were laughing at his plight and not on Geet's but for her his anger was still there.

He too quietly went and sat on other side of Annie'. Annie was so happy that her Bhai performed on her Sangeet' most unexpected form him it was. He brought her closer, kind of giving her blessings.

Then Annie and Arjun were called for dance and so only Geet and Maan were left. Geet came closer to him and whispered

"Thanks'" "What for'. That was all for Annie" uff his ego and anger. And he left after a while. Actually knowing him it was much unexpected that he stayed so long .

Sangeet went on for long and Geet had to be their. She was killing every minute.Even sending off took long. It was around mid night when she reached her room. Maan was in his inner black vest on top and black track pant on bottom. He was working on his laptop.

Geet came near him "Maan sorry" she said softly, he didn't look at her "hmmm' good night, have a nice sleep tomorrow being the marriage day will be hectic"

Geet knew he was speaking calmly from outside but it was all his anger

She came closer and held his arms and placed a soft kiss on his arm'

"it will never happen again' I am ready for anything you say but don't be this distant" he turned to her removing her hand from his arm "Achcha?? "

Geet swung her head in yes "Anything you say'. Waise bhi promise lee hain na aapne mujhse, I am ready for it'."

"Leave it, you don't have guts' you cannot completely surrender, you were full of tears when I asked something last time'. Do you remember"

"I will this time and everytime' whatever you say" he kept looking at her with questioning eyes

"Packcka'" she promised holding her throat with her fingers. He had a cunning smile

"Sochlo" she hit him on his arms "kaha na haan, phir dara kyun rahe hain" Maan got up and went from cupboard brought two red silken scarf'.

"What's this?? " "I want no questing.. is that ok" she again shook her head in yes making baby face.

He lifted her up in his arm' geet's heart started beating fast not knowng what was coming up. He then laid her on the bed. Took both her hand and tied them together

"Maa-aan" she said softly but he did not answer and then from other scarf he tied her legs together and signaled her to say nothing. He then just left her and went to washroom.

Leaving Geet wondering what he was upto.

He came out after 10 mints. Geet just kept gaping at her husband who looked so fresh after bath with his bare top and only towel wrapped at bottom. His hair wet and water droplets on his face made him look so s**y. she just wanted to run and hug him, place kisses all over his bare body but he had tied her. She felt so angry on him.

But tis was just the start of her torture' Maan was taking his good time to fix his hair and then spaying fragrance on himself making Geet more restless'

"babaji, yeh satane ka kya tareeka hai'. I thought he will do something to me but nahi he has his own ways always unexpected."

Then just wrapped in towel with his best fragnace and wet hair he seductively approached her' Geet gulped her saliva in anticipation that he will come near her and she will get to feel him.

Maan did come near her, very close, brought his face near her and slightly brushed his rough cheeks on her soft one. Geet closed her eyes to feel him'. She just wanted to tear the tied scarf, hold him tight and place kisses all over him. She turned her face to put her lips on him but before she could do it, he distant himself and smirked.

"Maan this is not fair' you can't do this to me"

"You are not supposed to complain or say anything." He himself took full liberty to come near her' he started placing kisses all over her face, his hand inside her kurti, playing with her waist' but she was tied and could do nothing. She wanted him to take her lips within his so that she can pour out all her restlessness through kiss but he kissed her all over her face other than her lips.

Geet could take no more' "Maan please Maan' it's enough, I can't take it anymore"

"Chuh chuh chuh'. This is just a start baby"

He pulled her kurti up, snapped her bra to take her curves in his hand and placing kises all over her belly'

All Geet could do was wiggeling and moaning his name with please'. Maan then came up and just brushed his lips with her' he himself was getting restless to take her lips within his but he was controlling himself. She opened her lips for him to go inside but he moved away' leaving Geet completely frustrated.

He went down again placing kisses on her belly and plying with her curves'. Went more up and took the hard tip of her curve within his teeth' giving her some relief with this pain'.. "Maa-aan". He then moved down to her feet placing kisses all over her feet, he extended his hand to the dori of her pyjama and snapped open it and pulled it down to her ankel. She immediately wanted to spread her legs but it was tied'. She was all wet and he was hard'

"Maan abb bohut ho gaya' I can't take it' please Maan" Maan just ignored her as if he did not hear what she was saying. Ke kept placing soft kisses all over her leg, biting it in between and licking it' It was really getting impossible for Geet'. he then came up and tasted her wetness and played there with his tounge' "Maa-aan" she kept on moaning.

He then snapped opened her scarf from leg, removed his towel and went inside her. He was rocking over her while playing with her curves and waist from his hand and kisses on her face. All she could do was to give herself to him with her hand tied.

When he was done he opened her hands, laid beside her and whispered in her ears

"Itna tarapta hoon main jab tum mujhe chor ker idhar udhar jaatee ho" Angry Geet just turned to other side but he brought her even closer and filled her in his embrace

Next to be continued

Last Part

Precap: Marriage over

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pehle toh maafi maangthi hoon itna late comment par mujhe yaad tha k maine res kiya hai aur comment karna baaki hai actually was a bit busy warna aisa ho saktha hai k main apni Anu Di k update par comment itna late karu
kya hua abhi bhi naaraz hai hmm...lagta hai Geet ka formula apnana padega main bhi gaathi hoon "Accha ji main haari chalo maan jao na"😳
Di I am so happy aapne ye song use liya pata hai old songs ki khoobsurathi aajkal k songs mein kafi kum milthi hai
maan bhi na bada hi ziddi hai par ek baat toh hai wo geet se pyar bhi bahut zyada karta hai jaise hi wo stupid log geet k baare mein kuch kehne lage maan turant hi geet k saath nachne laga khair unka sangeet kuch hatke tha ab kyun na ho humare maaneet bhi toh special haina
ehlo pura ruthna manna ho gaya par phirbhi maan naaraz hai hehe kyun na ho naarazi k chakkar mein geet se kya karwane ka mood hai ji zara hume bhi toh bataiye
aww...poor geet such a sweet torture maan toh maze le rahe hai aur geet pyar ki kashish mein tadap rahi hai hehe
di u explained this part beautifully it seemed i was actually watching the scene in front of my eyes
aww geet ruth gayi par maan ne baho mein le liya toh humari maan ki deewani momm ki tarah pigal gayi
continue soon di and once again sorry for late editing
love -Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ossum dear
lovely prt
wow msk really played a well.game dear
waiting fr next prt
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Thanx for updating yaar..
Maan's punishment for Geet was so hot and sensuous..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the song was really sweet...
And maan's torture was ufff...

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