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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Oh my ..my...
Gussa itna haseen hai tau pyar kaisa hoga...hmmm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Friends,
This is the Last part of this FF. I know this is sudden but I think this FF has reached the point where both of them are completely realized their love for each other and that is what thisbFF was all about.
Please hit the like button everyone and please also I will request all of you to comment this time as this is last update. Tell me your views about this FF and this update. I expect lots of comments.
I will soon come up with new FF again with different concept. But I will only start posting it depending on the response and comment on this last update which will let me know if you all will want to read more from me or not.
--Luv U all
Anu
Last Part
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When he was done he opened her hands, laid beside her and whispered in her ears

"Itna tarapta hoon main jab tum mujhe chor ker idhar udhar jaatee ho" Angry Geet just turned to other side but he brought her even closer and filled her in his embrace

Geet kept going away from him in anger and turning other side. She was so upset with him but Maan gave no heed ' he knew so well that in real Geet can never be upset with him so he kept smiling and bringing her closer and how long could Geet ignore Maan.. she atlast snuggled herself in his embrace and close to his heart' but still she did not gave up her anger on him..

Next morning Geet woke up and was about to leave the bed.. gathering her clothes when Maan caught her by her waist while sitting making Geet losen her grip on her clothes.. Maan was fast to get hold of her clothes'.

"ummm aoona' where are you leaving this early"

"Maan give my clothes' it wedding day and lots of work to be done" Geet said regaining her anger

But Maan came more closer to her and placed a soft kiss on her bare shoulder

"uff my sweetheart is angry" "Who cares if I am angry'. No one is going to come after me to please me"

Maan embraced her more tightly now placing kiss on her cheeks

"Kaho to subah se sham tak mana sakta hoon tumhe'."

"tou manaoo' main chalee. I have lots to do and to remind you its your sisters wedding"

Geet made his grip loosen and left' Maan laid back on bed with sigh'

"hmmm' to manana padega'. Why not, abb dekho mera manana' but sorry Geet it will be my way coz I have to please you" and he covered his face with sheet to drift in sleep.

Geet was in big Kitchen of Mansion which had been opened for marriage purpose. She was busy checking on stuff when Maan embraced her from back and placed a soft kiss on her cheek'. Geet got scared and immediately checked the kitchen'.she took a sigh when she found no one was there

"Do you think I am a fool.. you don't need to check when I am there"

"I don't trust you for that' anyway why are you here' you promised you will please me first'"

He swirld her to look at him

"Abb wohi to ker raha hoon' this is my way of pleasing you' so as per my promise I have to pleae you whole day' so I will be doing this every now and then"

Geet opened her mouth wide in surprise with his tricks

"Just to please you' nothing else I promise" and he left to meet Annie and see all the arrangement. He wanted to make sure everything was perfect'

But in between he kept on his ways of pleasing Geet as promised' only making Geet think why on earth she asked him to please her'

Every now and then he would pull her' sometimes place passionate smooches, sometime taking her to corner and placing sensational kisses all over her chest and shoulder' and then asking

"Am I pleasing you correctly Geet" and she would be more angry and leave'

This Maan's crazyiness for did not go unnoticed by guest but Maan cared less for those people.

Then Geet's family arrived and Maan was just waiting for them. He welcomed them whole heartedly living whatever he was doing. They were the most important guests for him' they were family. Dadima too came to welcome them whole heartedly. Annie arrived too.

All other guest felt how important Geet and her family were for Maan and his family. By now everyone had stopped talking about Geet

Dadima:"What' you all should come much before. You have arrived on the marriage day directly"

Mohinder Handa hesitated

"How long can we stay in daughter's house"

"This is house of your son first'. I am your son first and Geet came to this house much after you made me your son"

They have these kind of exchange and then Maan left to call Geet who was busy with supervision of all marriage arrangements.

He closed her eyes and held her by her shoulder and started to walk her with him.

"Maan what is this'. Not now please Maan' itna nahi cheriye ' I have lots of work."

Maan opened her eyes and she saw her whole family and felt utterly shy. They all spent fun filled time together and then all ladies went for girls rituals.

Marriage was done in elegant manner. At time of bidai, Geet and Annie both got very emotional as they have spent so much time together and Annie was Geet's shelter in days Maan was not behaving well with Geet.

After quietness of few days, they all recovered and when they got call from Annie that she was so happy, here too every one relaxed then.

Then after few days Maan and Geet went to her family and stayed there for few days. They remembered their old times their.

Just while the family was having evening talks at Handa's place, Geet was in Nandini's room and Maan and Brij on the living room area.

"Thanks Brij for giving Geet to me'"

"Haha Maan' did you even wait for us to give Geet to you' well but I really played big gamble when handling Geet to you"

"Gamble?? "

"Off course.. One thing I knew very well that you both are somewhere or the other crazy' Geet I knew was crazily in love with you but gamble I played was for you'. That time I only knew that either you madly loved Geet or you madly hated her'. if you would have really hated her, then her life would have been hell but I gambled by giving points to your being madly in love with her' and I knew if that was case Geet would one day be most happy girl'. And I won my gamble"

Maan was starting to feel guilty about the ways he had treated her but Geet entered and placed her hand on his shoulder. They had promised each other that they will not remember the past that was painful and live in present and fill each other's life with colors.

Maan's presence and his complete surrender to their relation and love had filled geet's life which was so painfull with love and colors.

This was their complete surrender.

Next: Epilogue

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

awsome but very sad my fav ff is going to end and wt is my luck on last part i m first one to comment happy also that on last part of my fav ff i m first one to comment but really very sad because i had not expeacted that this going to end so soon pls dear write new ff soon eagerly waiting for new ff n epilogue also beauce without epilouge it is incomplete so write soon n thanks for writing such a great ff hats off to u dear even still i m remeber when maan is hating geet hw mush i had cried by only reading hats off to ur writing u r awsome dear nw pls write good ff like this soon

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
superb,,,,just love ur work,,,😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
awesome update

sad that it is ended

thanks for making us a part of this beautiful story

Waiting for the Epilogue

Please update your other F/F yeh rishoon ki uljhan

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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
omg this ended
i cant believe it
atleast thoda time de dethi yaar mein prepare kar lethi ending ke liye aise jhatka de diya
this is one of my fav ff too saad to c this ending so soon (for me its too early dear)
i hv enjoyed reading this ff thoroughly from start
the way their relation changed from start till end where he started to express his feelings to her
mujhe rula diya issey end karke
waiting for u to start a new one on maaneet soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
it was an amazing ff...loved it...waiting for the epilogue..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Gr8 update Dear! M shockd on 1st grnds, aise kaise achanak last updt ho gaya?? I felt abhi toh shuru hua tha... Me saddy saddy... U write awsm Dear.. Romance jst pours lyk honey frm ur FFs! So u bettr not stretch urself n tk rest 2 ur contnt, aftr dis v want new Maaneet romantic fics! Thnx 4 d wndrful FF once agn!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
lovely ff dear ... plzzzsoon epi ...and YRKU
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome dr,
loved it,
will miss this ff,
waiting for epilogue.

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