Let me be your light!-Arhi FF part 8- pg 36 - Page 4

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zarmina asad

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hmmm your prologue is very interesting

Intro of Khushi seems as if you will be delving into the reasons behind her extra chirpy exterior! Bringing out some dark past eh?

and yes the first chapter is very well written! Wow

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

craps she is blind she can't see the way you described her feeling thing the way you described her knowing where everything is she can't see she was counting her steps loved the start can't wait for more loved it thanks for the pm update soon

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321abc

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey!

Awesome and interesting prologue, I liked it so much. I liked khushi's and arnavs fight at the end. Hmm is akash going to be the payals groom and then khushi will be surprised to see arnav at their house. I cant wait to read more

Thanks for the pm

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zarmina asad

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ohhh i was such a doofus, didnt realise that Khushi is blind! Dumas's comment opened my eyes and then I read it again and saw how you have actually tried to imply it though the use of heard and felt.

Waiting for the next part!

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smile1412

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome start.. Go for it.. Would love to go to the days when they first met😍

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Hira

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow amezing concept really loved it plz continue soon

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jakhushi

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Posted: 13 years ago

The loved the 1st few lines... very poignant...

Go for it Asumi.. looking forward to the next update.

Only 1 request... do update fast... please 😊

- Khushi.

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Audiwalia

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Posted: 13 years ago

Interesting... Payal seems to have backbone in dis ff ... Y khushi didn't argue wid arnav...

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Bhavapriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great start.. Do continue. I am hooked. Thanks for the PM>

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zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏I found it very interesting.

Lookin forward to the next update. Thanks.😊

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