Let me be your light!-Arhi FF part 8- pg 36 - Page 5

wow amazing concept

heya awesome start...

khushi did nit mind?really...

loved the concept...

continue soon..

many thanks for the pm..:)

We first meeting itself with an client...

I loved it. A great start. Please continue soon.

So very interesting love!!! I love the quote u used at thw end!!! looking fwd to reading more!!!

Dear Asumi,

m also the girl who came up with the veryyy bad idea on how to make an April fool out of the strictest lecturer my class had 🤢, back in first year..n guess who the unfortunate student voted to play that joke was? gulp.

It wasn't good. Trust me.

M still that girl.😉

(just so you get u-know-what out of ur mind n enjoy my mad comments..)

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where to start?

"couldn't she see she was on road? and What WAS she doing? Whirling to the music playing in her brain?"

Akash shrugged thinking for a business-tycoon; his brother can sure be slow at times.

I could see Khushi through Arnav's eyes, dancing on the road, a dreamy smile on her face and a stunning apparition for Arnav..

Akash's nonchalance is so gud! n i like how he wanted to hit on Payal.that made me smile. He's mischievous and I like it.

"She can't see Bhai"

You're killing me asumi. I keep wondering about his immediate reaction..wd he regret it?be shocked?surprised? widen his eyes? turn around to mask his expression?or would he dismiss it? m waiting 4 that twinge of regret.. gosh..i keep thinking about the title, from Arnav's POV especially..it's amazing.

it's equally amazing from Khushi's POV..😍

I luvd the imagery u used at the beginning...sailing..the anchoring.. vs the galaxies...the stars..the destruction...

"giant fireball"what an image! 👏instead of the FAIRYTALE shooting star view, we get the burning meteor version

I'm loving all the characters..Payal is a strong support to her sister, but in a volatile way, just as Anjali is to her Chote, but in a serene way.

...loved the poolside description😍 😍 😍 i luv the point made by Anjali ..sigh! Arnav is sooo creative n smart..n intelligent..n cute..n dreamy..😍

n yea..lol u did clear out how Arnav thinks Payal looks..what he kinda thinks of her

How abt Khushi now? wondering how you'll approach this..

i don't want to wake up..this is a wonderful world...loovvvd it

i cannot explain how omg! this is. loved it.

how can u stop here 😭... not fair not fair.. i want more...ok i'll be patient.. u have no idea how happy i was on seeing ur pm... love Khushi... awesome update... continue soon...