Let me be your light!-Arhi FF part 8- pg 36

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asumi

@asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: jahnvi.m
awww i loved it...
n best line wen payal said to arnav...
"dont forget to hold her hand"
amazing, fab n superb update...
plzzz update more sooon...
quotes are awesome
also wen arnav said i wont show any symathy...he hs fallen for her...n its more maazing that she sensed him alone n cold...

😊 thank you!!!
and yes he did- he has more respect than sympathy - soo happy that you caught those little things! thank you so much :)

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asumi

@asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Lyraa99
wen r u updating??😆

was supposed to do it tonight, but i am going out of station now 😳 totally unexpected- so after i come back?

EDITED :P

got postponed to tomorrow! so here is the update! 😳 not exactly a 'update' but well - tried 😆

Edited by asumi - 13 years ago

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Nazibah

@nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Wow I read all four parts and they were amazing I love the concept I cant wait to read more so could you pretty please with a cherry on top add me to your PM list

Thank you😃

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kritash

@kritash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

fantastic and fabulous liked it very much.
totally new story.
great writing style felt each character.
great description.
eagerly waiting for next update.
Please do PM me.😊

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karisma

@karisma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

"If you want me to come, just tell me! Don't stare- it gets a little awkward"

*strangled voice" did i read that correctly?? 🤣 Loool!!!! Asumi!!! lol lol lol ! oh i luff Jai Mehra now hahaha can't stop laughing

" It's soo much fun to watch her scream at me in embarrassment" Jai said with a grin" sooo not commenting on this one!!! lmao 😳

ohhh...m dumbstruck... i luv what he said to Arnav next😍... n that left him thinking hmm..( made my heart go flip..flop..flip-flop)

i knew i'd luv Jai..feel like he's the wise character that gives the push, while staying in the background- if u get my drift.. he's friendly, mature, relaxed, (handsome i bet), responsible, poised, honest, loving n...married!! uff!

let me hit on Arnav instead.. ☺️ let's see..

looove the progress!!!awww...Arnav saw through her tears... 😍 m sooo reading this update again n again

n ooohh..Jai didn't miss a thing 👏 fantastic!!!thank God the jijaji has a new role in your FF ..great job Asumi!!! thank goodness u brought Jai in

n Arnav sat there looking at her time n again...even catching the sad smile on her face.. *closing my eyes n visualising khushi glowing for everyone else, but the one person who'll matter beyond anyone else is able to read her expressions* wonderful! n they're only quasi-strangers at this stage... 😍

m wondering about the warmth n depth of feeling in Jai's voice that Khushi paused upon. obviously it's not Jai..but eager to knw abt her past.. abt the incident that made her lose her eyesight...

tx 4 updating 2day..beautiful arhi moments somehow..can't fight destiny..arnav is already drawn to her.. n yes no matter how many times jali calls him , I know why he went into the room❤️ cdnt keep away..

this story is NOT depressing at all😉.. it's their journey towards finding each other..it's love😍

soo glad that Nainital is part of that journey

absolute bliss! ☺️ Arnav is...sigh!🤗

Edited by karisma - 13 years ago

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

res! B-)

*edit*
Aishuuu!!!

This is gettin better and better, sweetheart... :-D
Just loving how Arnav is growing sensitive to Khushi's smallest gestures...

Thanks for the pm that you'd send later on... :-) <3 <3

Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago

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Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

ok now m curious... why do i have a feeling that Khushi had a man in her past... someone she loved and lost... why do i have a feeling that he was none other than jai... but than jai sounded so gud... i hope m wrong n thanks for updating so soon...love this

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

There is something about your writing, simple and soulful. You can almost feel for the characters.

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devishree

@devishree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

beautiful lovely dear

i was awaiting for it eagerly

wont u update the other FF plzz i love it and plzz disappoint me by not continuing it

i am here to make another earnest request dear plzz make something to khushi so she will see again after sometime or in the last updates of this ff plzz because i feel khushi's eyes hold more liveliness

sorry this is my thought and its sheer pain for any love not be seen in the eyes of their love - arnav and khushi i feel for them...

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Ritu

@.khanak.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#170

Awesome!

Somehow I am having the feeling that Jai has to do something with Khushi...And that something terrible happend to Khushi in Naintal...Then she lost her eyesight?😕

I am really curious find out about her past...Thanks for the PM and Arnav got affected by her tears😳