Let me be your light!-Arhi FF part 8- pg 36 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Sarina2012

I was really not sure how u were plannin to go ahead with khushi being blind. but i have to say it that u have given it such a beautiful dimension. its just amazing. we do tke alot for granted dnt we? missing out the actual chirping of birds, the temperature variation etc etc during sunset and just enjoy the sun... you have really done a beautiful job with this.

Khushi not wanting anyone to feel sorry for her and all was like soo strong of her... and her ' i will make it right jiji' really strong character. liking it.

Thanks for 2 updates :):) and for the PM!

Originally posted by: sweetygirl28

he did not still apologise to payal yet ... lol! i loved it.. this is a new angle.. khushi doesnt want sympathy and arnav should love her for whom she actually is knowing her childish tactics n all not coz of some sympathy towards her.. i know that will happen.. i loving ur story!!!! :) :)

Originally posted by: Dew_drops

Loved it yaar..n y r u saying that u r not a top writer in IF..U r an amazing writer..there r ppl who love ur work..and i'm one of them 😊

Originally posted by: gayatri_y

ur stories have the essense of everything, innocense, childishness, humour, care everything.

U r one of the wonderful writers All the 3 ffs are amazing, please update "And then you happened" also.

Originally posted by: SiMaR.cool

okay so u made khushi blind in this one...no problem...it happens...bt can u pls restore her eyesight? lyk gt sum doc meet arnav n then u noe mayB she gets cured? lyk build sum story lyk guptas were middle-class so they cudn't afford gttng her treated...n u noe yada yada yada...n so on...pls? it wud make d story mch more happier 2 read! cuz whenever i read dis FF, i do admire d way u ryt bt d updates jst depress me a lot! so wud u pls change it...r mayB u noe alter it a bit? if u do, it wud even build khush's feelings fr arnav! pls pls pls??? pretty pls? wid a cherry on top? *pouts*

Originally posted by: karisma

Lost in the world u've created..absolutely

there r so many thgs i love abt this update❤️ ..the fact that both of them had a romantic moment (it was pure romance 4 me) on a simple bench is...sigh! m lost☺️

haye!😍

now this is creativity...

haye! i luuuv these moments

dunno where to start..i'll never finish!lol!!

i luv how arnav began to warm up to the brighter shades of the afternoon..the setting sun..how his eyes followed her as Payal took her away..ohhh☺️

ahhh..the first signs of love😳

n yea how they were sitting on that bench..silence bringing them together.. both in deep thoughts..

😍

amazing!!! ☺️ love love love!! want moreee

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m here :) was on the hot seat brrr...🤢 went well hopefully

abt to read;p will comment n scrap u after

Originally posted by: zaniax

WOW!!! Wat an amazing FF ..jus read all d part's in one go :)

Absolutely Loved the concept & it's written beautifully, wth so much depth , it felt as if im watchin a movie plus the way u hav carried the story forward , keeping their character's intact is brilliant.👏. And Khushi' is really cute.. i loved the spunk in her attitude despite of the disability. It's really interesting how Arnav is slowly mellowing down ...their whole conversation was very touching.

Thanks alot for the pm..had a pleasure reading it .😊

Eagerly waitin for the nxt part.

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

Hey, just went throught this FF and must say hats off to you for not getting carried away and maintaining a subtle balance between Kushi's disability and her need to be defined by just more than that. This FF has a nice zing to and I look forward to reading the forthcoming chapters.

Originally posted by: 321abc

Hey!

Awesome update!I liked the conversation between arnav and khushi, I wish they could have talked more, I cant wait to read more.

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: meghnas

fabulous update! the part about her feeling good abt Arnav shouting at her was sooo touching!! loved their conversation...beautifully written!

Originally posted by: -Zara-

i love this new basis and its really endearing the way arnav feels more open with khushi

xxx

Originally posted by: SJPattinson

That was simply amazing. Can't wait to see how Arnav and Khushi's relationship develops.

Do continue soon.