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glossyglassy

@glossyglassy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

hey dear! 😃

btw do u hv ne nickname??...prahelika thoda lamba lagta hai...type karne mein...if u dnt mind then i hv a name in my mind...don't knw whether u'll like it or not 😆

1st of all...thx for starting a RTMC FF 😃

Thx 2 u & rashmi...for clearing my doubt...

I'm sure Avyukt is a gem of a person..and essentially a saaf mann wala insaan...so name is apt for him 😊

Part 1- the desc wer gr8...i felt as if i was watchng a show..mindblowing!!!

And wen u said her sis name is Simran...mujhe ekdam DDLJ yaad aa gaya...mustard fields & al...😆

waise woh hai bhi badi filmy...i found her amusing!!

& muskaan ke replies toh lajawaab the...

But wt Sim said in the end ws rite...u cnt decide who 2 fall in love with...😳

Again i lovd ur desc abt the nightclub...Avi mujhe kafi interesting lagta hai...arrogant toh hai...but i wud like to knw ...y??

Btw i luv ur title...reminds me of JWM song...mayb u cud use in a scene...just a suggstion😊

i also luv Muskaan's name...do u knw italian mein uska naam hoga "sorriso"?

free ka gyaan...socha baant loon...😆

keep up da gud wrk

luv u...😃

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glossyglassy

@glossyglassy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

chalo...ab part2

Vickyyy! Thx for keeping him as Avi's friend! ...luv dat guy😆

Methuselah...oh god...i totally cracked up at this...🤣

Love his dry humor...😆

So Avi bachpan se hi ladkiyon ko attract karta tha...wel who can escape his charm...😆

Lovd MS convo...

Bechare Vicky ko Avi ki driving jhelni pad rahi hai...

well Avi ki aadat kafi interesting hai

Eagerly waiting for the nxt upd8😃

luv u...😊

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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

awesome part!!!!😛😛😛😛
waiting for the meeting of Muskaan and Avi!!!!

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

awesome update!!
love all the description n emotions!!
thanks for taking viky as his frnd!!
so avyukta don't like his name but its very good!!
avi is gr8 casanova heheh n vikky knows tht
but he sacrified his night

"I don't know what to say..."Vikrant nodded his head in surrender."Should I curse you for disrespecting your own family now and then or thank the stars that you decided not to enjoy your night on a random girl's bed?"

"A curse never touches the devil.So I'll go for the thankfulness"Avyukt winked at him with an evilish killer grin enlightenning his dashing facet.

loved this
👏👏👏👏👏
so avi not giving lip kiss to any1 saving it for muski😳
hmmm so simran saw guest list of her marriage n avi's father's name in tht also!! so avi's comming to india!! waiting egarly for their 1st meet
loved convo between two siblings!!
so simeran was use to drool on avi at childhood time!!
liked muski wants to know more abt avi but showing disinterest
n she use to eat all chocolates brought by avi's father at the age of 1 year?
aur kya kaha simeran ne muski was less cute than avi!!
how dare she!! woh toh avi batayega😉😳

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

nice part...now waiting for their confrontation.

cont soon.

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

hey prahu me too expecting ur ff intro vm from u😃

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: shruja
hey prahu me too expecting ur ff intro vm from u😃

prazi di...

count me in.😉

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: glossyglassy
i also luv Muskaan's name...do u knw italian mein uska naam hoga "sorriso"?

free ka gyaan...socha baant loon...😆

maine socha main bhi thoda free ka punya kamaloon, gyaan baat kar...

french main muskaan ka naam hoga- ''souris''😳

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Cmnt edited
ud se phle hi h :P

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pranita1202

@pranita1202

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

make it rock n give great updates i m gonna read it later so then i shud get a fultoo superb novel reading experience . me waiting getting rid of exams and drowning my self in rtmc world