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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo


tareef ke liye ...thnx.
agar yeh taunt bhi h tho main isse appreciation he samjhongi

but yeh taunt nahi hai...main toh genuinely praise kar rahi thi... I love it so much when you use it in your ffs...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
OMG :O ITS FANTASTIC YAAR:-):-) I LOVE UR WRITING STYLE:-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome part... Ab plz jaldi se Muskan aur Avi ko mila do
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

aap tho ek do dinn lagte ho unres ke liye...

main reading ke baad instantly unres karti hoon...😉...main di ki acchi sis hoon na! isliye!...aur main sis ki buri di😭...aj unres kar doongi...sachchi...

but di kuch bhi h, even muski n simran bhi itne cool nhi h jitni we both...

agree na???????/...can't agree more

we both r coolest.😎...hum tum jaisa kaun yahan.??? we both so uniaue na!...yay...hum dono hai sabse ajag😎...and hamare thinkings bhi milte hai...like we thought of the same title for this ff😛...


thnx ki aapne mera suggestion liya! agar voh aapne pehle se hi decide kar liya tha ki aap avyukt ko AVI bolaoge! ...😳...phirr bhi i will consider it as ma suggestion...
coz i lov to take ma credits,...😆😆😆...ok ok take your credit...😆jab tune yeh naam suggest kiya tha tab hi maine avi nickname ke baare mein socha tha...like i said hamare thinkings same to same😉...


aapko pata h main jab koi bhi project yah phir presentation banati hoon, sabse pehle main AAPNA naam lekhti hoon......kuch bhi hojaye main credit jarur leti, beshak voh mera ho yah som times na ho......
bit freak , i noe....aur mein sabse last mein rakhti hoon apna naam taki koi professor mujhe question na puchhe project se😆...kaamchor hoon ekdum...😆

lets start wid ud...
avi ke expression r wondy...
loved them way u described...

di same pinch, 😉...😵pinch de rahi hoon😆
hamare rt leads ka friends ke naam n nick naam same h...
vicky!....haila I almost overlooked this fact😕...LSS mein bhi toh Vicky hi tha na😛...
loved avi n vicky convo, superb ably written...🤗...u r a damn writer...a hug from me too🤗

that stupid annette!...😈...u stupid. i hate u london chiks...:P😡...me too😡

:P

annette ki aankh.!!...aayi badi avi ko kiss karne......😆 nice gaali invent ki hai rashu ne😆...
accha laga avi ne ignore maara usse...
he back off.🥳...aisi repulsive girl ko kaun kiss karega🤢...chal is khushi mein main bhi bhopu bajati hoon🥳...

chalo kahin tho sahi kaam ker raha h yeh banda...😆......itna bhi bura nahi hai hamara avi😳😆...

vicky- aawww...iss par taras aata h.

sahi banda but galat dhandha..🤣...
banda -vicky.
ghandha - avi ka friend bankar rahna...

bichare ki band h.🤣...kabhi kabhi toh mujhe hi confusion ho jati hai k yeh dono friends bane kaise😕🤣...maybe the phrase'opposite attracts'works for friends too😆...

loved the fact he never let kiss any girl his lips...
i noe they reserved for ma muski,☺️...oops! avi's muski.😳

u mean, she ...no not she, he will kiss☺️ her first time 😍 !.smooch her.☺️...yeh haq toh sirf muski ki hai...☺️...jo avi baad mein realize karega woh tu abhi se samajh gayi😉...smart girl

muski tho abhi se dhosman ban gyi avi ki.🤣
ab baad main kya hoga...
god noes......woh thoda sa irritate hua hai bas😳...dushman banna toh abhi baaki hai meri sis😆...

rat cat fight ke 🥳pahad lag jayenge...😍...
rat cat it s too old...call it wrath of warriors...clash of titans....😆slender muski ko bhi greek warrior bana diya😆...

ismain tho koi doubt nhi h ki avi cute hoga aapne childhood ...😳...
but muski se jyada...i seriously object.👎🏼...i'm with you...girls looks better than boys...koi shaq?

di aapne meri indirect insult ki, aapne nhi avi ne!.
iss avi ki tho main n muski dono band baja denge......
aaya bada meri band bajai......
...i knew it...yeh line padke aisa hi expression ayega tera😆...avi is a bandar you know and bandar kya jane adrak ka swaad😉...don't worry main muski se is naam ka praise karwa doongi😳...happy now?😃
kaise.abhi batathi hon-

"You know very well that no one knows me by my actual name here.I'm popular as Avi.And I'm sure it is easier to pronounce it than the name originated in the age of Methuselah,got lost in the medieval age and finally rediscoverd by my wise dad."he cut his best friend off in between his entertained outburst of laughter.

in reality , is suggested dis name...😡...
hw dare he call ma choice wired...😡...
its much better than u, okay...😡...
dare u repeat it dude.😡
gonna make it hell pathetic for u to survive...😡......shant ho ja😆...muski ki tarif teri anger ko vanish kar degi😳...she loves your choice😉...

wah di! aapki english ke influence me main bhi kya english boleti hoon!.😆
...😆😆😆agar aur tarif ki toh main sach mein channe ke jhad pe chad jaungi😆...

but this facts really fits here...
english language is most apt when it comes to sarcasm..⭐️...
n di the way u exploiting this fact...is just more than ''up to the mark!''👏

i just love ue writing...😳.....aww thank you sweetu😳

aapse inspire hokar i feel mujhe bhi aapne ffs ki language change karni padegi!😳

wat u feel???????😕EGL ke liye hindi apt rahegi kyun ki tu hariyanvi bhi use kar sati hai yahan...and i guess LSS needs sarcasm...so you can induce some english dialogues there too😉it will spice up Swaleen's chemistry jo ki baad mein biochem(you know what i am hinting towards☺️)banega😳...but that vodka from pipeline😆type ideas hamesha add karna...i loved it😳

waise i m just deing with the fact that its muski, ☺️only muski😳 who will be honored to claim avi's lips for the first time in his existence...😍...i won't call it life!.😉 coz life tho voh muski ke saath katega!, now he is only existing......this whole para summarized the reason behind his not kissing any other girl😳...loved it...and kissing part bhi ayega if not intentionally then unintentionally hi sahi😉...

lov u di.🤗me love u too...🤗
ud soon...😳...of course😃



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Edited by prahelika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
such a sweet update..😊
oho.. ao Mr. AVI is a complete play boy and doesnt want to spoil his image..😛😉
and muskaan is showing interest on thim unknowingly... what would she do if she meets him in person... 😉 which she is going to i guess.. and that too soon enough..😊
and i guess there are some diff b/w avi and his dad.. y so 😲
story is turning interesting..😉
totally loving it...😳
great update... excellent work..👏
waiting for the nxt part..and their meet too..😉
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
lovely...👏
avi didn't like his name...well it's not that bad...i really liked it...
n simran is going to marry...n she is so much desperate that she even wants to know the no. of guests coming for her marriage ceremony...😆
n muski...she enjoys making her annoy...well the way sim is talking n behaving...any one can enjoy her annoyance...😉
n hope that boy will be ayukta...of whom sim is talking about...😛
n for the first time muski is taking interest...in such a non interesting topic...hmmm...😉
but i really took pity on vicky...poor guy...avi ne toh uski halat hi kharab kar di...😆
n avi himself didn't understand that why he denied that girls invitation...
avi u will soon get to know the reason...
hope that they will meet soon...😍
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
I love his name... And you have a nice writing style...
Thank you for the pm.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

simply amazing story line..

loved it alot..

awsum..

n liked the characters..

how completely different from each other..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
awesome part

sorry for short comment
my hand is paining sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
nice...

seems like will be going to India...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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