Tumse hi...(rt mc ff)updated{epi 5 on page 27} - Page 2

good to c a new ff :)

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

wah wag wah for me
dekho dekho m yha sbse phle 😎
mera to jwab hi nhi
ab to pakka ye ff ROCK kregi pakka ji pakka 🤗
luv u di
ek or ff
balle balle 🤗
muskan se sanyo yaad aa gai missing PRC
chlo ye sb chodo
kya baat h muskan bhut jaldi uth gai
lgta h di bhi jldi hi uthti hongi tbi muski bhi jldi uthi
vaise ache bachche jldi nhi uthte like me 🤗
uthna bhi nhi chahiye 😛
vaise jo maza sone me h vo subh subh uthne me nhi
chlo bhut ho gai meri speech sone k upr ab next ud me ok
ye simar such me bhut boring h ek hi trh ka spna roz roz 🤣 oh god
muski jhelo apni sis ko koi ni kuch din ki hi to baat h
muski ki speech abt her dream boy 🤣
bt avi to uska thik ulta lgta h 😆
ek baat to shi khi simaran ne jab pyar hoga to uski gltiya nhi dikhengi
awww avi dance karing 🤗
waooo m flat on u avi 😳 🤗
m in my LALA LAND
avi rocks [:D/] [:D/]
di u to rock [:D/]
m to fan ho gai aapki
luv u so much di
ab hme jldi se next ud chahiye (order😛 ) 😎

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

😆so lets start with ma punch line, dedicated to di.- MA DI ROXXX...🤗...

i really din knew ki u can write so fab, earlier...

but di jabse maine aapki writing padhi h, by god...u really made me a fan of urs.

u r awesome...mindblowing...⭐️...

maine kaha tha na, u will rock...n see its true...

ab aap bhi rtmc ff writer's club main aa gaye ho...

so party again...🥳...

meri di ka naya ff aaya h...

dhol tho jarur bajega......

bhangra bhi hoga...

meri di ne ff likha h...🤗...

your description abt the morning scene in india n nite scene of london is sooperbo.

just could see it while reading...👏...

luved ur dialogues...to the point and damn freaking...especially muskaan's.

i really loved them...😳...

belive me, maine sach main yeh poora ud vapas padha tha, coz i loved it, though maine nite main bhi padha tha.😍

but maine vapas padha, kyun na padhoon, meri di ka ff h...😍...

it really feels so awesome di ki i m commenting on ur ff,...😳...

aap nhi sanjhoge...sacchi, mujhe kudh samajh nhi aa raha ki mujhe kya ho raha h...

its really strange, n i m serious...😃...

matlab aap jab mere ff par comment parte ho nah!, bilkul vahi feeliing, but thodi si jyada usese...🤔...thodi aur jyada, 🤔thodi si aur jyada...🤗...thodi si aur bhi kar lo...🤗

dis story is gonna rock...

so ab ud par bhi comment sun lo-

morning scene desc. ws so magical, 😍muski's entry is so perfect, can't be better than this...u were all perfect here.

simran is really hysteric😆, really don't she gets bored of seeing the same dream again again🤣...her monotonous brain.

muski is a early raiser, hmmm...🤔

hope muski ki sangat mainmain bhi sudhar jaon,.

but prazi di mere saath jyada rahti h...tho ho sakta h, ki unka influence mujhapr jyada h, tab tho main suhdne nhi waali

writer hi kudh loyal to sleep h, tho main kya karon😆

avyukt a dancer, haye mar javan uski har ada h khatilana...

chaa gaya di yeh ud...chaa gaya...

we all will love to have dis,...😳...di u will be rocking...👍🏼...

muski n avy rocks...😎...

love u di for writing it, mujhe pata h u will make this story dazzling, i believe......

love u di.🤗

ud soon.(yeh tho har writer bolna padta h...😉..)

Originally posted by: aysha1989

Res...

Edited...

Ok first I would say that I'm sooo happy to see a new RTMC ff...😃

Thanks a lot for sending me the buddy request and now I'll wait for the pm...

Thanks again... Continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: ridzzi

one more...RT-MC FF...🥳...thanx for sharing...🤗

loved the way u started it...the way simran called her from behind...

the whole scene reminds me of sanyo's entry...it's a little bit of same na...😍

n simran...dreamy,dreamy girl...our poor muski is annoyed with her useless talks...but not able to say anything...big sis hai na...hum tumhara dard samajh sakte hain...muski...😳

simaran is telling muski about her dreams...which she already knew...😲

she knew the whole line which simran is going to say...n she herself said the whole dream...😆

n the lines she said...describing...her so called mr. future perfect...

every single girl on this earth will say the same when u ask them about their dreamboy...

that he should be perfect,respect others...but when they fall in love...😍

saari list dhari ki dhari reh jaati hai...😳...then they didn't need any mr. perfect...they love them as they are...muski ke saath bhi yahi hoga...dekhna...😉

what ever she said about her dreamboy...avyukt is totally apposit of it...

but as says opposite attracts...so lets see when,where n how they are going to attract...towards each other...😍

really liked the intro scene...dancing in middle...

n the centre of attraction of whole night club...n dancing with full force...good u described it very well...ekdum hero wali entry...😎...(i mean bigde rahis wali entry...😉...)...👍🏼

well the starting is really good...n the title name...amazing...👏

thanx for the pm...n i m in ur pm list...

n all the best...for ur journey to this ff...👍🏼

update soon...

luv u...😊