RACHEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am gonna go MAD!!! M-A-D...MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You started an FF, Mi Amore?!! Mi Amore, Mah Papi, Mah signorita, Mah Mon Cheri!!!! (you see am already looney now!!!!)🤪
I was actually thinking of telling you to start writing an FF, in my next reply!!! And here, you've already read my mind, ain't ya?...Heheheh...😆
Me is Sorry for not commenting earlier!! You see I NEVER get the first spot to comment!! *Boohoo* I'm so unlucky!! But am gonna make it up to my buddy, by giving you full analysis!! Don't complain if it's late, 'cause you know am busy with all my entrance exams!:P And yes, don't complain either if you find my comments far too LONG!!!!!!!! Well, am not gonna back down on this, because that is the only way I can make it up to you and my friends here for not commenting early!!!😛😛
The title is Beautiful, better than the word 'Gangster'!! You've already caught me in a daze with that killing word 'Mirage'!! 😍 It's a Dream, 😵 a Nightmare, anything you Imagine... You cannot say if it is True or a Lie! It's Gripping and Mysterious...😳 It's Approval, Success, Happiness...🥳 It's Failure, Disappointment...🥺
It's Safe...🤗 It's Dangerous...☢️
Old English has so many Mind-blowing words such as this!! That holds you and binds you with their magic!!!!!
About the chapter(s)...
Chap 1: You put me in a daze! I was actually waiting with bated breath as I read each and every line slowly and steadily to keep my imagination alive and running!!
Arnav's a Gangster?! Haila!! Am speechless you know, because I wanted him to be that at least once!!! With guns and all ballistics around him, with bombs going off behind him, loudly portraying a picture of Vengeance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EE-HAAA!!! * Cowboy riding*
Hahahahah...🤪...Am BONKERS now!!!!!!! You bet!!!
And Khushi as usual, with her Buaji on her trail!!! You portrayed her pretty well in this first chappy, after all it's just a first chappy!! :P
Well, I liked the way you put in their dress codes in here!! He was dressed in White shirt and trousers, while Khushi was dressed in White too! Well, though you didn't mention her whole dress code, I assumed she may be wearing a fully white salwar! Am I right?😳
From my perception, blood on white, indicates the murder of peace, innocence and evil flushing in to wipe out the slightest hint of white... I'm not indicating RED as evil, because I love that colour way too much to think of it as an evil, let alone call it!! But you cannot help it ,either, when the world, to tag an Evil or to show people that that object or person is Evil, put in Red!! And Blue for the Good!! I wonder why can't they do it vice-versa, eh?
And particularly the last scene, where Khushi picks up the bullet in her hand ad then walks away!!
That scene very much reminded me of the new serial Sajda on Star Plus that had an almost same scene in its montage/promo before the show commenced.
The White dress code clearly indicates here that Khushi will definitely emerge as an Angel for Arnav and that he has already thought of like that, when in such a state of excruciating pain and glimpses of his Death.
The bullet is now going to be named a 'Prize Possession' now, for this twist of Fate has much in store for them, or should I say, this twist of Rachel!!! :P
She will be his 'Sajda'...
Chap 2: YES!!! *punching fist in the air* Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!!!!!
My guess was right!!!!! She was wearing White salwar!!! Heheheh...
Aha! Loved this line! Catchy, eh! "But little did she know that the same blood would haunt her future."😉
😉Ole ole!! Abhi se hi shuk kar rahi hain ki usne apna number delete kyun kiya?
Heheheh...Am waiting jaan! Short update is not a problem now, but will definitely create loads after the actual story of yours commences here!!! :P
The doctor's pretty kind-hearted and wise. He sounds so. Arnav helped him and saved his life, eh? Hmm...Story has to be revealed soon!
Aman's concern is way more than a brother feels for one, here! And I like it! I guess, their bond really is special here and I would love to go through that too... Shyam as always...*laughing* When will that B****** come to his senses, eh??🤬
Anyways, this story is already a HIT for me!!! 🥳
Continue soon, Mi Amore!!
Annie😳
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