Arhi FF:Mirage Note pg 158 for next thread link - Page 58

okay i dunno where my comment for the previous chapter went ..

awesome part...feel bad for arnav

Originally posted by: starrystar

okay i dunno where my comment for the previous chapter went ..

Okay chapter 11:

Hmm bani and arnav being chased.

Wow finally arnav knows that bani is la's friend.

Hmm bani is curious ... can't blame her.

Chapter 12:

Arnav didn't follow his heart.

I think bani and aakash are going to end up as friends.

And then maybe she will meet arnav.

Dunno what will happen when she comes to know about the truth or Rishab and arnav..

Who knows maybe she will help him ..

Keep it up !!

Akash should've been a doctor in the serial too cuz for some reason I can imagine him as a doctor lol
Arnav choosing Lavanya; obviously, head over heart kinda guy!
wonderful update 😊

Ok so I read this entire fic in one go!! Its just so different and brilliant! :) Loved it! :) I so CANNOT wait for Arnav and Khushi to start their actual romance! :) Even though this is an alternate universe, you have kept Arnav and Khushi true to their characters! :) Thank you! :)

Arnav needs to listen to his heart!!

I love stalking this FF and then getting really excited when i see there's been an update! Hehe.
Chapter 11 is deffo my favourite so far, i love how they just keep meeting, clearly fate. ;) and now this doctor thing oh my god! Akash seems really nice, i hope he plays a role in their next meeting. And omg nooo poor arnav thinking that choosing with his heart will lead to pain. :( i hope his view changes!
I can't wait to read more about this mission and how arnav's past led him to this gangster life. Love reading this FF, keep it up! And as long as you're updating i don't mind if they're short or not haha!
Awesome work! :)

I love this story update soon

I love love looove this story! Theres so much suspense! When you wrote about the car chasing I was holding my breath, when you wrote about the intimate moments between arnav-khushi I was holding my breath and when Dr. Akash Singh Raizada came in, I squealed! Such is the effect of your story on my emotions and subsequently my reactions! Who are those people in the grey car? Were they after khushi or arnav? Because you had mentioned a person leeeching at khushi.. And the old man of the package.. what does he have to do with all this? Sometimes, I even start suspecting Aman.. that perhaps he's doing all this, as he had blind faith from arnav! So he chose lavanya! He should know that with La comes Khushi, perhaps he will even see her at the movies! Uff!! Sooo curious! Ps. Im sorry for my late reply, exams got to me! Great update, hope to read more soon!