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pheonix24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#651

Very sensual!...Thanks for the PM.

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: asdfgh456
I've just read the whole thing in one go, absolutely loved it! You're a brilliant writer! x

always a pleasure to meet new readers! So hey! Keep watching out for updates! 😆

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva
Hey!! I've been a bit busy that past few days so I had the pleasure of reading 3 updates in a go!! And how things have changed 😲
Ok first off simply loved the additions to her bucket list..They had me ROFL and looking forward to Arnav's reaction.. And his gift for her had me going awww especially after she was feling down in the dumps... how sweet and considerate of him..He is such a sweetie (even though he pretends hes's not) and finally the latest update had me rubbing my hands together with glee!! OMG the part I had been waiting for!! And to think that you left off at the best part..LOL
Please continue soon!! Will be waiting for more anxiously

heyyy! I have been missing your peppy comments! Glad you liked the updates... maybe I'll do a better job of it the next time 😆

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SillyPepper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#654

Heya...Sorry...had been inactive for a while...n belated birthday wishes

And whoa! brilliant updates...the game has started...Bring it on...I love ur narrative style

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prerna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#655

ah haan!! so they're heading for "it" ;) hehehe
nice n hot update dear... looking forward to the next one :p

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Angad_Diwani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#656

hey bin... awesome update.

Its lovely how ASR is aware of K on sooo many levels ... as a beguiling child woman, as his wife as a companion whom he misses by his side... awesum to read.

Carry on enthralling us plsss... thks for ur pms...

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caged23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#657

Just brilliant. About time they finally got there. I don't know how they didn't mutually combust from all the heat.I was like this:

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#659

OMG...this is the most sensual part i have ever read...

How beautifully written...how beautifully expressed...

So passionate yet so classy...oh i totally love the word lovemaking that you have used.

What a wonderful update dear. and me being the first one to comment is like heavens..

I wait to read the next part...would like to hear about khushi's thought...khushi's experience...i hope she tells her feelings to arnav about the whole romance...how she felt...what she anticipated...i totally want to here khushi's version...we all know about arnav's desire which was agained beautifully penned but we badly want to know about khushi's experience of making love to her husband being untouched before.

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Cytherea

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Posted: 13 years ago

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OMG that was beautiful! The way you portrayed their coming together and Arnav's thoughts was simply brilliant.. I loved how it was a first for him as well, because he was making love to the woman he is in love with, not having sex with any random girl.. And Khushi's confidence in him was amazing!! And then he thinks about the 6 month deal again😡.. Argh Arnav is an idiot!! Your work is fantabulous (fantastic+ fabulous..lol) Girl you are one of the most talented writer on IF!! Great update

Edited by shiv-gauri4eva - 13 years ago

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