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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Appy_Indy
OMG...this is the most sensual part i have ever read...
How beautifully written...how beautifully expressed...
So passionate yet so classy...oh i totally love the word lovemaking that you have used.
What a wonderful update dear. and me being the first one to comment is like heavens..
I wait to read the next part...would like to hear about khushi's thought...khushi's experience...i hope she tells her feelings to arnav about the whole romance...how she felt...what she anticipated...i totally want to here khushi's version...we all know about arnav's desire which was agained beautifully penned but we badly want to know about khushi's experience of making love to her husband being untouched before.

I am really glad you liked it! I hope I could bring their love or the expression of it in some way that wasn't too graphic... Stick around for the next part, Khushi's little flashback! 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva
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OMG that was beautiful! The way you portrayed their coming together and Arnav's thoughts was simply brilliant.. I loved how it was a first for him as well, because he was making love to the woman he is in love with, not having sex with any random girl.. And Khushi's confidence in him was amazing!! And then he thinks about the 6 month deal again😡.. Argh Arnav is an idiot!! Your work is fantabulous (fantastic+ fabulous..lol) Girl you are one of the most talented writer on IF!! Great update

Arnav IS an idiot.. you get no argument from me there! You gave me such an amazing compliment - I feel blessed because there are some INCREDIBLE writers here who deserve their very own book deals. To be put in that class! 😃 Thank you! Now.. what you should wait for is the big blow up! 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: aria009hera
Ohh My God... I literally am speechless after this update.. I have never ever seen something like this written so beautifully. Ever.
Wow.. Like seriously.. Wow..

What an incredibly nice thing to say! Thank you! I hope I don't disappoint with my future updates! 😊 Much love. MUCH MUCH MUCH! ❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Binggg!!

Well hello there..long time no speak :D

Why is it that I always miss the AMAZIIING updates?? Caught up with them all now...you have outdone yourself. I seriously had no idea how this SS was going to unravel itself, but I'm seriously in love with it. I love how they've both given themselves to each other wordlessly, and now the only demon they have to get over is the contract and Shyam...

Cannot wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ashred12
is he still bent on letting her go ?! idiot...

He is an idiot.. I agree so he's still thinking about it 😆 Kind of like a child's self defence. If I leave her now.. she won't be able to leave me later...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: pheonix24
That was passionate yet emotional...You are an awesome writer!

I am so glad you liked it! Thank you! 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arshi143
beautiful!!! just beautiful! so glad u didn go into too much detail. no arnav u dont hav to let her go u ullu!!!! aaarrrghhh! heheh thks for the pm :)

I know he doesn't have to let her go.. you know he doesn't have to let her go.. but he's being egotistical and foolish! Let's hope something sorts him out soon! I am glad you liked it! Hugs! 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..
Hope He Never Brings Those Six Months Up :| The Way He Says Baby, UFFF My Heart Skips A Beat ☺️ Can't Wait For Morning Scene 😳

Well then, here's to hoping that you don't have to wait much longer! 😆 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: tina_1234
awesome part...soo sooo beautifully written..amazin loved it..plzz clear d mu soon...wonderfully written

Their MU will clear sweetie! I promise but in a little while. So that their relationship is stronger and steadier. So that, Arnav takes a fall worth taking 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: shaam91
oh.my.god!! (janice style)
i have read plenty of love making scenes..in books and in ffs..but this by far was beautiful...so sensuous..all from arnav's point of view..as in just how special he wants this to be for her...this was awesome honey...you outdid yourself!!
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LOL! you made me laugh! I just remembered Janice and her OH MY GOD(s)! That is such an incredible compliment! I don't know how to thank you 😊 I am glad you liked it. I wanted it to be beautiful and special... Thank you for reading! 😳

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