~!! I hAtE u bT y StIlL I lOvE U!!~ a SWARON FF~ - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Im so happy😃..first one to lyk n comment again!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Im so happy😃..first one to lyk n comment again!!!


di i feel so hapy wen i c ur comment n lyk 1st..thnkz a lot di.. il try my best 2 make dis ff interesting... n d credit goes 2 u only di fr d character sketch also..u helped me in dat n thnkz frm d bottom of my heart..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: namratajadhav


di i feel so hapy wen i c ur comment n lyk 1st..thnkz a lot di.. il try my best 2 make dis ff interesting... n d credit goes 2 u only di fr d character sketch also..u helped me in dat n thnkz frm d bottom of my heart..
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Mine was just really lil...whole credit goes to only u n u deserve it too...gud going!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovely cs.
loved it.
Swayam-actor
sharon-DJ
kriyaansh-dancers
gr8. pla update the first chap soon .thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..this is really beautiful...keep it up...keep updating fast..thnks for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmaju

wow lovely cs.

loved it.
Swayam-actor
sharon-DJ
kriyaansh-dancers
gr8. pla update the first chap soon .thanks for the pm.


thnkz.. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaron95

wow..this is really beautiful...keep it up...keep updating fast..thnks for the PM...


thnk u choo much..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Kriya dancer nd actress superb nd swaym is an actor haha maza ayega nd rey choreographer awesome nd sharon a DJ yuhuuu this is gona be fun... thnkx a lot for the PM nd plz jaldi update bhi kardo waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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May i know ur name??? as i dun know u... but ur concept is nice... really looking forward to this one... 20 likes thats possible if u know huge chunk out here... if u dun den dun wory... people will start reading this as ur story progresses... but please do continue n as for adding a picture... first u need to upload that pic on an image sharing site... like www.imgur.com or www.tinypic.com then they will provide u a link with copy n paste that link where u want to post the pic... n pls add me to ur pm list... ill b sending u a buddy request...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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So guyzz excited 2 read d 1st chapter...

Ok wont make u w8 ny longer.. Its short.. n m really sry fr dat... do bare wid me fr sum dayzz plzz.. as m thinking abt d stry till nw so har min I keep on making changes 2 it...

So here's d 1st chapter..

CHAPTER 1

A beautiful morning..a sweet girl sleeping on a soft round bed( same as in om shanti om jispe srk sota he lolz 😆) covered wid teddies on both her side..a smile curved on her face as if she's dreaming about her soul mate...

...Guess kiya ye kaun he ya batana padega hmmm... Itz our diva guyz.. looks hot while sleeping..aww!!

Her sleep is disturbed by a call on her cell phone. She ignores it as she's been disturbed in her golden slp bt it continues ringing and she irritatedly picks it up wid her eyes still closed and in an angry tone says "HELLO!!!"

XYZ:- "Hey sweetheart !! Good Morning... Itz 10 a.m. already and our princess is still in bed. Hmm this means she has surely forgotten that we have an appointment with our new client right??

On hearing his voice her anger fades n a smile curves up on her lips again n opens her eyes ...

On opening her eyes dey fell on d adjacent clock and she realizes that she's really vry late...she quickly gets up...

SHARON:- "OMG!!!!!! How did I forget..I slept for so long?? Huh!! Itz all coz of u. u forced me 2 cum 2 yesterday's party and we got late. Even I was telling u lets go itz gono b late bt no our loverboy falls in love wid each and evry beautiful girl and wans 2 spend tym wid her..and c coz of u m late nw.. Ohh!! Wat m I gono do now!!!😭 🤢

She's getting worried, irritated, hyper, tensed at the same tym..

XYZ:- " LOVE!!.. Hold on...will u let me speak nw.."😕

She keeps quiet n tries 2 calm down...

XYZ:- " 1ST OF ALL PLZZ CALM DOWN and u still hav 1 hour.. so get up and get ready.. I'll b there in half an hour 2 pick u up.. and u tym strts nw darling!!.."

Sharon:- "Ohh!! Darling ur such a swthrt!!!... thnkz a lot...bye...meet u in half an hour.."

And saying this d conversation ends...

( pata he u might b thinking k ye XYZ kaun he bt let me tell u, your guesses are wrong :p 😛)

She gets up frm her bed and is checking out her wardrobe wen her eyes suddenly fell on a frame on her dressing table. Ya...that's the college group photo when all of them d d3 gang were 2gedr..

She admires each and every face n gives a smile..but on reaching d boy at d very corner she stops n keeps staring at him... Her eyes fill with tears and anger at the same time...

SHARON(to herself):- " U always said that u trusted me lyk hell then y...y dint u cum and ask me the truth.. U always found out something positive in all my negative behaviours.. but this tym u believed wat u saw.. u dint even giv me the chance 2 explain..and went away frm me.. I was ur SIREN na ( note:- he calls her siren sumtyms u might b knowing dis) den y SWAYAM y??????...

Suddenly her thoughts are disturbed by her maids knock on the door..

MAID:- "MAM!!!... Hav u got up?? Shall I get ur breakfast ready'???"

She comes out of her thoughts and replies..

SHARON:- " Ya sure SUZZI..!! I'll hav ma shower and will be at the dinning table'AND ha he's cuming so make sumthing fr him also.."

MAID ( with a wide grin on her face):- "OK ..MAM!!..."

AND LEAVES...

SHARON:- " HUH!!! Kitni pagal hu na me!!!.. purani batako yaad karke sirf dard milega aur kuch nahi.."

She wipes her tears takes her dress and goes for her shower..

So guyz.. here's d vry 1st chapter of dis ff!!...👏

Kaisa laga!!... don't frget 2 comment and like it. If u wan PM'S do do send me buddy request k guyz.. v'll cum up wid d nxt update soon till den enjoy n try guessing d story..😉

And ha all sorts of comments are accepted good as well as bad and if u people wan some addition frm ur side in d stry den feel free 2 tell me I'll surely consider dem..!!

And ha are u people liking my ff???? if yes den dnt frget 2 hit d like button and comment. I'll make sure agar jyaada likes aaye den only ill cont n update d nxt part ok!! Till den take care...

And w8 fr d nxt update.. n plz jooto se mat marna fr a vry small 1st chapter...😳

Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago

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