~!! I hAtE u bT y StIlL I lOvE U!!~ a SWARON FF~ - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry was watching D3 iss liye pehle comment nai kia... this part was nice... update soon... n pm ke liye thnx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Firstly, a jumbo size 🤗 for updating before pg 17 came up...
Coming to d update..
Loved rey n sharon's convo so much..
Since u told u wud b updt again I will giv a longer comment next tym..

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..loved sharey convo.thanks for pm n please update it soon,finally sharon in india
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was a chotusa cute update but same time a turning point as Sharon is cuming bac ...ShaRey is special as ever luvd their convo pls jaldi se update karna as u promisd
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aaj mood accha tha so 2 chapters update kiye n hav fulfilled ma promise k guyz...hope u people vl like dem... keep liking n commenting guyz... ur comments mean a lot 2 me..😊
il post dis chapter wen i reahc page 18 k guyz coz 2 chapters ek page pe acche nahi lagte 😛
Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
next update jaldi chahiye to keep spamming..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aaj mood accha tha so 2 chapters update kiye n hav fulfilled ma promise k guyz...hope u people vl like dem... keep liking n commenting guyz... ur comments mean a lot 2 me..😊
CHAPTER 5
In MUMBAI...
REY is at his place... After SHARON'S cal he gets vry excited...
Tries calling KRIYA bt she doesnt pik up coz she's in d shoot

NOTE:- all are couples nw except swayam n sharon...
REY leaves a msg on her cell...
Cl bak as soon as u bcum free... Exciting news 2 tell... M sure ul b vry happy on hearing it...
Send...
REY:- Done... M super duper excited cz sharon's arriving... Our lyf our frndshp vl b bak 2 normal nw... Was waiting fr dis chance only... Ab in dono ko baat karni hi hogi...
MEANWHILE KRIYA AT HER SHOOT...
As soon as she bcums free she checks her cell... Sees sharon's n rey's miss call.. N den his msg...
KRIYA:- REY aur SHARON ka miss cl n den ye msg... Aisi kya baat he... Inhe hi cl karke puchati hu..
She calls rey..
REY:- BAATCUTTER!!!!!! love u love u love u love chooo much...
KRIYA:- love u 2 my chweet se line cutter bt vl u plzz let me knw k aise kya baat he jiske vajah se aap itne excited bhi he aur mujhapar jyada pyaar bhi aa raha he...
REY:- Pyaar to mujhe tumpe har second ata he... Par tum pyaar jatanehi nahi deti ho meri baatcutter...
KRIYA:- ha ha rehene do aap rey... Vo chodo pehele mujhe ye batao aap itne excited kyu hu..
REY:- dekha tumhare pyaar mein me sab bhool jata hu..😉... Are exciting news ye he... Nai aise nahi pehele mujhe ek kiss chahiye to hi me tumhe bataunga...
KRIYA:- rey...!!!!! Ab me kiss kaise du aapko... Batao na plzzz rey... Plzzz...
REY:- no no no... Pehele kiss...
KRIYA:- pehele news...
REY:- PEHELE KISSS...
KRIYA:- plzz na rey aapko pakka kiss kya pura romance sikhadungi aaj... Plzz ab to bata do plzz...
Bt u knw our dearest rey aise thodi na mauka chodega..
REY:- ohhh tum sikhao gi romance tab to dekhana aur sikhana hi padega... Ab me tab tumhe ye news bataunga jab tum mujhe romance sikhaogi
KRIYA:- REY!!!!... Nowayz...
REY:- He baatcutter m geting a cl vl tak latr...
KRIYA:-Are REY newz... Bt he has hung up already..
Kriya 2 herslf:-
Kya karu me inka... Universeji aisi kya baat he jo itne saalo me rey peheli baar itne excited aur khush hue he.. Jaroor kuch bahot accha hone vala he... Me aapse pray karti hu ki inki khushi hamesha aise hi rahe...
(Awww!!! She's so cute wen she talks 2 universeji..)
d shoots over fr d day n she heads bak home...
Imagine her house 2 b d same wich is der in d3..

Goes into d washroom fr getting frsh..
Ab apna rey to patahi he wen it cums 2 romance vo bahot hi excited ho jaata he...
He is vry happy 2day coz sharon's returning n is remembering al d old dayz... He wans 2 meet his baat cutter so eagerly... He goes at her place bt instead of going straight he goes frm her window remembering k pehele bhi vo kaishe uske ghar jata tha... He is resting his head on d window n w8tn fr kriya..
Kriya cums out of d bathroom in a sexy light pink knee length nighty...
N den rey juzz couldnt get his eyes off her... She came out drying her hairs... N on seeing rey she shouted.. On dat he came bak 2 his senses...
KRIYA:- aap yaha se aise kyu aaye sidhe darvaje se nahi aa sakte...
REY:- Darvajese aata to tumhari is khoobsurti ko kaise dekh pata... Ur lukin like n angel baatcutter...
KRIYA blushes 2 d core...
REY:- haay.. Me mar jaunga is sharmahat se... Oye me idhar sehi baate karu ya andhar bhi bulaogi...
Kriya had totally forgotten dat he was at d window... She grins n cals him inside...
REY:- Kash ye pal yahi tham jaye... Sirf tum aur me n no1 around...
Saying dis he goes closer 2 her.. She is going bak n he is goin more closer. She stops jab vo wall se takrati he. He leans frward goes near her ears n says softly..
Aaj koi to mujhe romance sikhane vala tha...
On hearing dis she blushes pushes him n goes near d bed.. He comes n holds her frm bak n rests his chin on her shoulder...
I love u baat butter n m really w8tn fr dat day jab tum aur me hum ho jayenge...
KRIYA:- i love u 2 rey aur jald hi aap aur me hum ho jayenge..
n she plants a sweet kiss on his cheek... He kisses her forhead n hugs her... Fter breaking d hug dey sit on d bed...
KRIYA:- ab to batao rey aap aaj itne excited kyu he???
REY wid a big smile on his face...:-
Guess what? Sum1's returning...
KRIYA pehechan jati hai..:- What!!!! Really... SHARON u mean hamari SHARON's returning... Dats awesum news rey m soo happy..
bt suddenly her face saddens..
Ab vo aa rahi he. Ye chance me kabhi nai chodungi unhe pass lane ko. Sab meri vajeh se hua tha.. Uski koi galti na hoke she suffered bt i wont let her suffer nymore...
REY:- Come on baat cutter... Usme dono ki bhi galti nai thi.. Halat kuch aise the ki sharon had 2 suffer bt i nvr in my lyf thot k swayam wont trust her his best buddy..y...
KRIYA:- Even i was shocked bt rey universji ne hame aur ek mauka diya he unhe sath laneka iska hmm jaroor fhayada uthayenge.. Bt...
REY:- bt???kya???
KRIYA:- Bt vo... SWAYAM..kya vo manega... I mean vo kitna change ho gaya he aur vo uski nai girl frnd kya naam he uska ha NIHARIKA badi chipakti fhirti he use.usike sath reheti he hamesha usko akela chodta hi nai. Mujhe bilkul pasand nai he vo. Vo dono eksath bilkul acche nahi dikhate... Dey are nt made fr each oder bt jabtak vo uske sath he i dnt think swayam hamara sunega..
REY:- Dnt wry dear vo chipakti he bt hav u seen swayam sirf public ya media k samne he is wid hr nahito ghass bhi nahi dalta vo use. N u knw our swayam ryt usse ye pyaar vyaar me intrst hi nai he uski movie k liye use karna padta he...
KRIYA:- promise me rey k is baar sharon ko aane k baad hum vapas lautne nahi denge hum un dono ki frndshp vapas kara k denge... aur...
she goes into thinking mode...
REY:- kya hua baat cutter kya soch rahi ho... aur kya... ??? 🤔
KRIYA:- vo..rey.. itne saalo me aapse kehna chahati thi bt keh nahi payi .. u knw jab me clg me aayi aur tabse hamare graduate hone tak mene un dono ke aankho me kuch dekha.. ek dusre k liye.. bhale swayam sharon se baat nahi karta tha bt uski aankhe hamesha sharon ko dhundti thi jab bhi sharon ko hurt hota tha use bhi hurt hota tha... shayad...
REY(shocked):- dnt tel me ur thinking dat wat m feeling u r thinking..
KRIYA:- ha rey m thinking d same... dey...dey loved each oder ..bt dey dint knw it themselves.. dey thot dat was frndshp bt dey nvr realised dey loved each oder n shayad dey still do...
REY:- ...shayad... ur ryt baat cutter... shayad yes... yes...yes..yes...dey loved n love each oder... 😃 n u knw wat ur universeji has given us dis chance 2 bring dem close again... so my dearest baat cutter ready fr sum fun...
KRIYA:- ya alwayz...afterall...
LOVE IS IN D AIR...!!!!...

so guyz updated 2 chapters 2day hope u people vl like dem... bas ab hath thak gaye...nxt update only after page 25...n of course 20 likes...
do like n comment n ny suggestions fr d story do tell me... n for sure agle epi me u people vl get wat u r w8tn fr pakka...
keep spamming... love u all fr d sweet comments n likes... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Lots of love n hugs from my side...
...Chummeswari...
Loved d update so much...really so much.
Wow..rey n kriya deir convo n sweety talks made my day!!!
Pls continue it lyk dis n plss include kriyaansh romance too..I kno dis is a swaron FF but still atleast once in 5 updates..

I loved d update it was totally rocking!!!!

Thanks for dis sweetest update...

First one to like n comment..yupiee!!!!
Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update ... Really liked it...
Sharon is finally returning...
next tym onwards do PM me too...
(will giv longer reviews next tym onwards)

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome awesome awesome update..kriyansh convo was mindblowing waiting for next update eagerly..jaldi se swaron ko ek kardo 😉 hope for the best

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