ArSha FF - Set Fire To The Rain(update 7:page 13)

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Tanushree Dutta

@kriyanshlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Thankyou guys...tum log ki wajah se I'm still writing and...2 updates mein nearly 7 pages is a LOT for me..a NEWBIE...Hope am impressing you...and here goes...Enjoy...But yaar rona agli update mein aayega...Sorry if I dissappoint but I thought I should incorporte this before your full-on emotional drama right? read on...
UPDATE 3:

Shakti smiled as she watched herself glide over the screen into Kunwar's arms... his Amar-ish scent... She could kill for it. Ah, what days were those!

And she remembered the amount of pain they had given Terrence Sir for doing those dances but it was funny that she was actually MISSING those times. At that point in time she would've called them 'turbulent' rather than 'magical'...oops,'megical' 😉

Flashback

'Dil dhak dhak karne laga...'

'Shakti NOT like this!!!'

Shakti stood up whimpering and dusting her body.

'Sir, why do we have to do THIS? I mean he doesn't have to TOUCH me...THERE you know.'

'Shakti its the MIDRIFF...You're acting as if...This is the THIRD time I told you.'

'Sir,I agree with her. Sir,zyaada nahi ho raha? I don't want to offend you but we aren't used to this.'

'Amar tum bhi? Why are YOU acting like this? I thought YOU were more mature than her.'

Shakti held her stomach and started laughing.

'Haha...this kiddish person!!More mature than me???PUH-LEASE!!!

'Shut up!!!And LEARN!'

Kunwar was REALLY angry. How dare she talk about HIM like THAT??? Excuse me? Did she think only SHE could dance?Well, we'll show her who can dance and who cannot!

'OK...5,6,7..Go!'

Kunwar went from behind her and grabbed her from behind. His aftershave smell went down her nostrils. Sh edid her three belly-pumps. His hand moved over her ribs and just above her pelvic-bone. He thrust his face into her sweet-smelling freshly-shampooed hair , smelling it like he was lost..in Neverland.

Gosh,was he HOTTT!!! His aftershve smelt like...mmm! Or was it just plain-old HIM? Or HER? I dunno...But I should ENJOY this!!!!!

'Amazing both of you!! I didn't expect this from the sissy cry-babies I was watching ten minutes ago.'

'Thank-you Sir.'

Kunwar left the room - BLUSHING :P!

'Good job Shakasti...Make me proud on the show too...i want YOU TWO to get the highest votes this time.'

' Sure sir. But peformance toh Kunwar ki hain. Its HIM who you should be saying this to.'

'Well Shakti,so it happens that only you can bring the best out in him. Or so it happens. If you know what I'm talking about.'

Shakti stared on - lambasted. What was THAT supposed to mean???

NEXT TIME PAKKA RULAAUNGI...I SWEAR!!!!!!!!! JUST HAVE SOME PATIENCE!:P ...CARE TO COMMENT OTHERWISE NAHI RULAAUNGI...LOL...JUST KIDDIN ...BUT DO COMMENT!

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resh009

@resh009

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

1st to comment...😃

really nice..nd thanx for the pm..

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

it was really nice...but why it is so short!!😭

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

amazing...par itna short not fair/...

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Nyc one...luvd it...d flashback ws awesome..luvd it...waitng fr nxt update...:)

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

I realllyyy like it . . . . . The situation u chosed for flashback is perfect . . . . . 😃
Everyone normally writes on 'khuda jane' rehearsals being it their bestest dance & u wrote on 'dhak dhak' . . . . I really appreciate it,,,, coz it was the time wen they had to perform a fast intimate track wid lots of touching here & there,,,, & they had done it wid lots of nakhre & all 😉 . . . . . . But u reviewed it so well,,,,, that how awkward they were feeling to rehearse it numerous times... & must be feeling something for each other ☺️ 😍

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star_2012

@star_2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

i really loved it...

please cont.soon and pm me

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

its was awsummm DID tym yaad aa gya n i love dis performance to core...dey are too hawtt in dis thnx 4 pm

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Tanushree Dutta

@kriyanshlove

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

SO SORRY FOR NOT UPDATING THIS!!

IF YOU READ MY KRIYAANSH FF YOU'LL KNOW THE REASON!

WILL SURELY UPDATE THIS ON TUESDAY OR WEDNESDAY!

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Tanushree Dutta

@kriyanshlove

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Hey guys. Tuesday ki jagah aaj update kar rahi hun!Hope you like it!<3

UPDATE 4:

flashback:

April 16,2010. The saddest day of Amar's life.

'Amar,Binny. Aaj aap dono mein se koi ek banega Dance India Dance Season 2 ka last finalist. Aur aap mein se ek ko hi iss sunheri taqdeer ki topi ka sapna chodna padega.'

Amar,nervous as he was stood up for his tough demeanor and staunchly clenched his jaw as he held Binny's hand tight in anticipation for the judgement.

'Aur India ka 4th most voted dancing star aur Lux Dance India Dance Season 2 ka last finalist hai...'

Now his heart was beating so fast that he was sure that even Saumya announcing,could hear it.

'...Binny Sharma!!'

That was it. His judgement day. All of his world crashed around him. He had NOTHING left,NOTHING. Huh,he couldn't even make it to the finale and he was thinking of winning?

Sunheri Topi and him,it was just not meant to be. It was not written. After all,where was he from?Indore?A small town nobody had ever heard of?For God's sake he wasn't even untrained!Huh,DID. Some dream.

Making his exit speech was the hardest time of his life. Just bade his goodbyes and ran out of the show.

He saw a skinny girl weeping near the parking lot. He went there and tapped on her shoulder.

'Sh..Shakti?'

The beautiful bird-shaped-faced girl turned around.

'Kunwar!'

Seeing her teary-eyed he couldn't stop himself. All he was giving was pain.

'Shakti?Please...Why the hell are YOU crying?If anyone,it should be me!And see I'm not even crying,'he smiled a watery and not-so-convincing smile.

'Give it up Kunwar!Don't hide your tears.Let them out.I know you're sad. i know what DID meant to you.It meant everything!Of all people you needed it the most!'

With this Shakti collapsed into a voluminous tear-shedding routine. Kunwar unable to see her in this state put his arms around her and brought her closer.She hid her face in his chest and cried some more. He gently stroked her hair while crying himself.

'Shakti baby...You remember our first dance together?'

Shakti lifted her head slightly...tears still rolling down her supple-skinned cheeks.

'Khuda Jaane.'She smiled.'Who doesn't?'

'Never dreamt of this situation back then,na?'

'Hell no!We didn't even know each other,let alone THIS well.'

'So why are you crying?'

'Its just that...I dont think we'll ver see each other,or dance together again...'

'Kyun?Phone aur Skype kya tel lene gaye hain?And for your information,I have already got my first-class invite for the finale.And for your further information the Super Six AND Terrence ki Toli are performing together. And...we may just get voted for the performance the audience wants to see again. We're leading big time.'

Shakti laughed. If anyone could make her smile during her worst situations,it was this guy.

'I'd better go...I need to get together my exit performance.'

'Yeah...what are you performing on?'

'Surprise. And it will be dedicated MOSTLY to you and Terrence sir.'

'I'll wait. DESPERATELY. See you then,tommorow.'

'Sure. I hope you like it.'

'I'm sure I will.'

'So...Ciao for now.'

Kunwar walked outside. He turned and said.

'And Shakti...?'

'Uh-huh?'

'I'll vote for you. Win this one for me.'

And smiles galore.😊😊😊😊

How was this part??.Hope you LOVED it!Zyaada nahi rulaaya na?Actually it was close to my heart. will update real soon.Care to comment and take care!