ArHi FF: Every heart desires-2 (Ch 23 link Pg 1)

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LoLo

@LoLo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Excellent as usual. Thanks for the quick update and the PM.

BTW the only chemistry I care about is between Arnav and Khushi. 😉 I don't split hairs over all the details. You just give us such an exciting story, I'm not picky over the little details.

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Amena

@SaNaYa_4EvEr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Congrats on the new thread!!! 🥳 so happy for you...🤗

this has totally become my favorite FF!! love the story line!! you a very good writer...😳

this was a nice update!! 👏

Arnav it is too late!! you can't have Khushi when you want and throw her away when you don't!! after all she deserves some happiness too... your gonna have to do something BIG this time to win her back...😉

Karen is such a sweet brother!! he cares for Khushi so much ❤️

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Het Congrats on the second thread!!! Story amazing so far!! Keep it up.. looking forward to the next update x :)

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

found your FF yesterday...when I caught up with the story, thread was finished...congrats for 2nd thread!

Loved the story so far...everyone makes mistakes, it's how you own upto it & repent makes the person lovable..Saying that, cannot wait to read how you'll get Arnav to become lovable again!

-Sona

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved Karan, he stood up for Khushi and agreed to donate because of Khushi, no one else.

Arnav is still the biggest jerk.

Can't wait to read more.

Continue soon. Thanks.😃

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

khuhshi willl forgive arnav..for sure...it was a gr8 update..:)

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

the update was so heartbreaking!
Poor Arhi! :(
i realy realy like karan, hes so loving and protective!!
buT i gues itl be betTer if she leavs shantivan, and arnav goes toWin her back! after alL ths, i am sure karan wont let her stay there!
brilLiant update dEar! loveD it !
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and O- is indeed a rare blood !!

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Congrats on the second thread! This update was awesome! Can I have another one tomorrow- It's my birthday!!!! :D

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-Mayuri-

@-Mayuri-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Yay! You updated! So happy!

Loved the update! Loved Karan, he was awesome especially loved it when he went up to Arnav to tell Khushi was the only reason he was even there!

Can't wait for the next update!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

I don't get these people. I don't support Arnav at all right now. All I want to do is hit him hard but I don't get Karan either. Anjali's life is in danger and he is still trying to get the upper hand in the situation. Only Khushi seems to have any brains here.

This chapter was much needed to establish Khushi's goodness, Karan's pigheadedness and the doctor explaining Arnav's basic flaw. So great job.

Also you got the rarity of the blood group right so don't worry.

Anyways, congratulations on the new thread! :)