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Posted: 13 years ago
I am so sry pata hai mai late ho gayi hu nd is main kya kya mistakes hai maine dekha bhi nahi so plz forgive me for the mistakes iss update mai bhi horro nahi hai but ye lo update nd aaj kal na tum log bohot shararti ban gaye ho sacchi thodasa to wait kar lete ab mujhe mat dant na ki yaha pe stop kia nd all ok start reading now
Manasie & Namrta : Di aap kuch to bolo.
K : Thnkq ab mujhe at least thoda sa bolne ka moka to dia nd aunty ne koi chaabi nahi di hai mujhe...
Meow : Di ab kya kare kal hi humara stage performance hai *with a sad face*
k : ab itna mat ban nautanki mai ek baar dekh ke aati hu.
Deetha & meow : Di hum bhi aapke saath chalte hai.
K : accha teek hai chalo.
Kriya, meow and deetha left from there.
Deetha : Di kya hum sab kelie coffee bana de aap tab tak chaabi kelie dekho.
K : Arrey its fine don't trouble urself.
D & meow: Di aap bhi na jao aur keys leke ao tab tak hum bana dete hai.
K : Accha baba ok tum log kab meri baat mante ho *both meow nd deetha smiled*
Deetha and meow goes into the kitchen and Kriya goes to the neighbours who have given her the keys
Scene Kitchen :
Meow and deetha went into the kitchen(guys ab ye mat sochna ki puri coffee ki process bataungi jst skipping it dono experts ne coffee bana dia)
meow : Deetha chalo hum cups unke paas hi leke jaate hai(i mean group ke paas nd guys unhone coffee to bana dia but ek extra cup bana dia un dono ne)
Deetha : Accha ok but Kriya di abhi tak nahi ayi.
Meow : koi problem nahi vo aati hongi hum chalte hai.
Deetha : Ok thn chalo.
They were about to leave when Meow suddenly stops and places a cup on the table al most to the edge of the table.
Deetha : Meow kya hua?
Meow did not answer anything so Deetha was about to take that cup but she felt someone was stopping her from doing that she thought accha chodo let it be Meow and Deetha left from there.
Guys beech mai bas itna maan lena ki Rey jaise jaa raha tha gaadi ruk gayi nd car mai kuch problem aa gaya tha he called nd informed Swaron abt it
Scene shifts to kriya :
K : Aunty vo Aashana aunty ne aapko koi extra key dia tha kya vo peeche rehearsal hall ka?
Nei : Nahi beta jo bhi mujhe dia vo maine tumhe de dia tha.
K : Aunty aap ek baar plz check kijie na.
Nei : shayad Aashana ji rehersal hall ke keys vo store room mai rakhti hai.
K : accha ok aunty thnkq.
While she was walking she got the thought that she didn't know where the store room keys were she turned back and went agian.
k : Sry aunty vo maine aapko phir se disturb kia actually store room ke keys kaha hai vo mujhe nahi pata tha.
Nei : Pata nahi beta Aashana ne mujhe aur koi keys nahi dia shayad vo ghar ke chaabi ke saath hi hoga.
K : Ok aunty thnkq nd sry phir se disturb karne kelie.
Nei : its ok beta koi problem nahi hai ok bye.
K : Bye aunty.
Now Kriya came back as she was expecting Deetha and Meow inside the kitchen so she directly went to the kitchen she did not find them so came out and started searching for keys (Guys jab Kriyaansh ghar aye the to rey ne darwaza khola tha so she didn't knew where he kept the keys)
she searched for a while in the hall but she did not find so she thought of going near the team. While she was going(guys she did not notice the cup)
the cup startes trembling(ya phir shacking kuch bhi bol sakte ho jab earthquake ata hai to sari cheeze hilna shuru ho jata hai vaise) as it was kept at the edge it fell down sue to that sound Kriya turned back.
Kriya thought to herself ye dono ladkiya bhi na pata nahi kya karte hai aise koi table ke corner pe rakhta hai kya.
she went to the kitchen in search of a cloth to clean it up she found a cloth and came back then she observed some strange thing (jab cup neeche gira tha to coffee jo hai cup ke open side se aage flow ho raha tha jaise hi vo vapas ayi coffee open side se close side ki taraf flow ho raha tha nd tat too under the table)the coffee went under the table she sat down to clean it when she sat on her knees and bent to see till where the coffee was spread she found the keys.
She quikly took the keys and talked to herself Thank god ye keys mil gaye chalo koi to accha kaam kia in dono ne. She smiled and took the keys (guys usne vo place clean nahi kia) and went near the store room she inserted the key in the lock (guys yaha pe imagine a tipical filmy scene jaise hawa ana shuru hojata hai and climate mai change aa jata hai nd all that) she felt it strange but finally opened it when she kept her feet inside the room she felt something different but she still continued and went in search of the rehearsal hall keys.
She looked around but she was feeling that someone else was watching her it made her uncomfortable she finally found the keys came out locked the room again and went to the back door when she was out of the house(i mean jab back door se bahar ayi thi) she felt strange like something had happened to her but she was not able to figure it out.
Tw & manasie : Di kitna time lagti ho aap jaldi chalo.
K : haa vo mai... accha chalo.
Shonu : Di keys mujhe do mai open kardeti hu.
She took the keys and opened it the room was actually dark Sweets went in and switched on the lights. The room was absolutly awesome it was big.(guys imagine the same rehearsal hall of St.Louis but a bigger one)
They all went it Kriya was just looking around and admiring the place.
Meow nd nimi : To guys shuru kare??
K : Arrey ye kya tum sab ne coffee pi lia aur mere lie bachaya bhi nahi *pout*
Cherry nd asma : Arrey di ye lo aap kelie hi to ye cup wait kar raha hai (told na un dono experts ne ek cup zyada bana dia tha nd now don't expect meow nd deetha saying her that they left a cup inside for her uske baare mai baad mai batati hu)
Kriya smiled and took the cup now all of them(except kriya started warm up excercises)
Harsha : Ok guys chalo shuru karte hai
in sab me se select any of the costume whch u like

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http://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=http://www.silhouette-dance.com/site_assets/www.silhouette-dance.com/images/dynamic/7777_1.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.silhouette-dance.com/BODY-WRAPPERS-7777-Wrap-Top&usg=__lkidb3UDDIYE4tcV9fYNEYPwjSQ=&h=466&w=391&sz=49&hl=en&start=41&zoom=1&tbnid=saOuYoBgg5gdOM:&tbnh=128&tbnw=107&ei=edKTT5LlEcqqrAehr5yEBQ&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dhip%2Bhop%2Bdance%2Bcostumes%26start%3D40%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DN%26biw%3D1364%26bih%3D707%26gbv%3D2%26tbm%3Disch&itbs=1

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They wore the costumes
All facing the mirror now nd Kriya watching them
Ab ye gaana chalu kar lo nd wapas aajna yaha pe thodasa describe karungi unke positions phir tum log imagine karna shuru karlo http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VCLxJd1d84s
Ab sare 12 members redy ho gaye hai nd their placements (guys i m so sry mujhe nahi pata ki kon-kon kaisa dance karta hai but i heard ki meow,deetha nd manasie dance karte hai)
meow, deetha, manasie, shonu, twinkle, nimi standing in a line in middle of the hall nd 3 left side nd the other 3 right side (guys mai ye pura describe karne wali thi but u did not give me the change)
song starts now till 0:20 the 6 membs. in the middle started swaying nd doing some hip hop moves 0:21 all the girls started coming close nd did some hip hop moves (guys i m not describing it fully so plz imagine it by urself all of thm were dancing like wild cats nd doing some hawt moves)
After the dance Kriya stood still she could not utter even a single word everyone came near her
namrata : Di *no response*
Sweets : *shaking her* Di kya hua?
Kriya back to her senses the 1st word she could say was WOW.
Tess : Thnkq di.
K : Guys tum log... tum log... ek dum wild cats ki tarah lag rahe the nd tumhara coordination wow it was mind blowing.
All stood there smiling and in union they said : Thnkq di.
Deetha : Di thnkq so much but ab hum sab ko nikalna chahie warna aaj to humare mom's kha jaengi hum sab ko.
K : Ok but guys u were fab.
Everyone left Kriya locked the rehersal hall and accompnied them till the door everyone left (bye guys phir milenge iss FF mai). Kriya just colsed the door and went to rehearsal hall. After seeing their dance she really wanted to try she unlocked it nd went it she closed the door but did not bolt it she played the music went to middle of the hall and closed her eyes she started feeling the music every nerve of hers wanted to dance now her nerves were feeling each and every beat of the music she was about to take a step
when she heard someone shouting her name at top of their voice it was Rey now she opened her eyes Rey opened the rehersal hall door she saw him he was tensed (coz when he entered the house he went to Kriya's room he did not find her she saw the back door open he came out nd heard the music which brought him to the rehearsal hall)
On seeing her he calmed down but soon anger crept on his face he closed the door with a bang nd went into the house. Swaron entered the hall
Sw : Kriya kaha thi tum pehle to tumhe chot lagi hai y didn't u rest?
Sh : Kriya ab dekho rey phir se gussa hogaya hai he was really tensed tum rest le sakti thi na.
K : *a bit scared* vo mai... actually wild cats aye the..
Swaron : What?
K : Sry vo humare frnds aye the unhe rehearsal hall use karna tha to mai unke saath yaha ayi thi mujhe dard nahi ho raha hai its ok.
Sh : Kriya ab andar chalo.
Kriya nodded and followed them like a kid she was searching for Rey but could not find him he was inside the room so they went to the dinning table sat their (yahi soch rahe ho na ki jo coffee gira tha vo kya hua vaise mai bata du vo jo cup nd coffee gira tha it disappered and remember i mentioned tat whn kriya came out of the house she felt smthng strange actually vo sab kuch bhool gayi hai vo coffee ke baare mai nd all)
Sw : Accha ye batao ki tumhe kaise pata chala ki rehersal hall hai.
K : vo actually meow ayi thi aaj uske paltan ko leke.
Sh : par keys??
K : vo...vo... (guys as she forgot the coffee scene she doesn't remember how she got the keys)
Sw : Accha vo chodo Tum ab puri tarah se teek ho na no pain na?
K : haa mai teek hu.
meanwhile rey comes out of the room now time was 7 o'clock


ab yaha se wait karo aur bhi hai but tum log to time hi nahi de rahe the i wanted to give a big one accha ab agar tum logo ne comment nahi kia na to dekhna mai sacchi mai gussa ho jaungi

Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
cn i cl u poppy 2 cz saw d comments n evry1 calls u dat..
n yaa agar tune abhi update nahi kiya den il b katti wid u baba..plz na jaldi kar na aaj mera last day he...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nj_swaron

cn i cl u poppy 2 cz saw d comments n evry1 calls u dat..
n yaa agar tune abhi update nahi kiya den il b katti wid u baba..plz na jaldi kar na aaj mera last day he...


ya sure tum bhi bula sakti ho nd ek aur naam socha hai how's candy??
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Posted: 13 years ago
update update update pwweeessshhh update karo na...!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
ya update karo na...u said dat u wud surly pst it 2day...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie

update update update pwweeessshhh update karo na...!!!!


haan madam kar rahi hu res karke rakha hai na par thodasa time lagega
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

ya update karo na...u said dat u wud surly pst it 2day...



Haan post karungi thoda sa time *puppy face*
nd wat's ur name?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poppy updt on new thread..wat say??😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Poppy updt on new thread..wat say??😉


Meow no ways arrey iss thread mai at least 10 update to hone de nd don;t even think of spamming
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Poppy updt on new thread..wat say??😉


aisa mat bolo i wanna read her update fast fast...!!!

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