FF:D3 Horror Version

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Hi everyone i was a newbie here but i am Groupbie now i am enjoying a lot here as Deetha said me this is the most friendly forum i agree with her this is the best forum i have ever been and the first FF i have read here was Aditi's i loved her FF nd started reading all the FF's reading all your amazing FF's i too decided to write one as this is my first FF please forgive me if i have made u bore but hope u all will like it...

CHARACTER SKETCH:
1) Smriti Shekhawat : A dancer but left dancing after her husbands death as she loved her husband a lot and after his death whenever she danced she felt her dance was incomplete. She loved her kids a lot.

2) Raghu Shekhawat : Famous dancer and loved his wife Smriti a lot. He had to move to London with Swayam when he was born as he had to keep a dance institution thier and he never forced their children to dance. He missed kriya nd smriti a lot so he agreed with swayam to go to India.

3) Swayam Shekhawat : Cute, adorable. He is boy next door. He loves his family and was very close to his dad. Swayam stayed with his dad in London till the age of 7. Even though he stayed with his dad he never danced. He convinsed his dad for going to India so that whole family can stay together. But he always regretted doing this because his dad died after coming to India when swayam was 10 years old. After his dad's death his twin sis was everything to him, he used to share everything with her.

4) kriya Shekhawat : Fun loving girl, Sweet, very kind at heart. Loves Swayam a lot she shares everything with him. She never danced till now as her mom did not dance after her father's death, so she too did not even try to dance. Love to make friend. And she shares everything with her Univerji too(jaha kriya ho waha universji ha hona banta hai)

5) Shruti Singhania : Dancer, but left dancing to take care of thier children as her husband never spent time with them. She was Smriti's best friend and all Smriti, Shruti, Raghu and Gautum where students of St.Louis nd are best friends.

6) Gautum Singhania : Was a Famous dancer but shifted his interest towards Buissness and became a busy person so he could not spend time for his family but he really loved them but could not take out time from his busy shedule.

7) Reyaansh Singhania : Handsome hunk, funny, brave. He always wished to spend time with his dad but it would never happen. He is too close with his mom nd twin sis Sharon. They are very friendly and they are always available for each others help.

8) Sharon Singhania : Cuttest girl. Lovevs her bro a lot and shares everthing with him.

9) Roshan Kapoor : Gud dancer. A type of evil boy. Spoilt kid of rich parents.

10) Sohana Malhotra : Superb dancer and very kind at heart and was Raghu's friend(Swayam's dad).

11) Aashana : Smriti's best friend who's at Mumbai.

And remaining are the same who are in D3 the above mentioned ppl are the main leads of my FF
Note: Swayam, Kriya, Rey and Sharon are jst 'Gud Frndz' no love just they are gud friends till now

Introduction :

They completed 12th and are thinking to move to mumbai(all are in Dehradun now) as smriti has to stay in Dehradun due to her job as she was not getting her posting she called her friend Aashana to arrange a house for Swayam, Kriya, Rey and sharon so that they can stay their safe. As she studied in St. Louis she wanted her children also to study their.
Phone conversation between Smriti and Aashana:
Smriti : Hello!!!!
Aashana : Hey Smriti how are you??
S : I am fine. How are you??
A : I m fine. So how did u remember me??
S : U forgot??
A : No i wanted call you about that. Your children can stay in my house as i am moving to Ooty.
S : Oh that's gud news so they will be safe their, i won't be worring about them now. Thank You.
A : From when have u started formalities between friends??
S : oops!!!!
A : Ok bye i have some packing left so i will call u back.
S : Ok bye.
After the conversation:
Aashana starts thinking : Should i tell her about this house... No she won't believe me... but she is my best friend how can i risk their lifes thinking for some more time she called Smriti again but this time she did not hear the ring but heard a voice...
Wat did that voice tell her and what was she hiding from Smriti about the house will she manage to tell Smriti about the house or Kriya, swayam, rey and sharon are going to stay there???

You will know this in my next update plz do comment as this is my first FF i know it was a bit boring but i will make iteresting if u guys want me to continue but plz joote mat maarna... i wuld feel really gud if everyone wuld comment be it gud or bad i am so excited for your comments so please tell me how was it and should i continue it...

Index :
Introduction - Page 1
Update 1 - Page 9

Update 2 - Page 17

Update 3 - Page 79

Update 4 - Page 85

Update 5 - Page 90

Update 6 - Page 100

Update 7 - Page 110

Update 8 - Page 120

Update 9 - Page 135

Update 10 - Page 140


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Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago

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aishasully thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awsoome mann nyc stryy linee do cntinuee waiting to read onnn and all da best wd it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishasully

its awsoome mann nyc stryy linee do cntinuee waiting to read onnn and all da best wd it


Thnkq thnkq so much u read it this fast superb nd once again thnkx a lot i will surely make it interesting as it goes on...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome shravs..nice starting.
Pm me from d nxt tym.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept and superb starting...loved it very much
continue soon and please pm me foe next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Awesome shravs..nice starting.

Pm me from d nxt tym.


Thnkq so much Snigdha nd i will be waiting for ur PM i love ur FF nd thnkx a lot...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome concept and superb starting...loved it very much

continue soon and please pm me foe next update


Thnkq thnkq so much i m so glad that u all are liking it thnkx a lot nd ya i l surely PM you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome concept plz pm me the nxt one!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

Awesome concept plz pm me the nxt one!!


Thnkq so much nd ya sure i l PM u whn i update the nxt one... thnkq
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was very nice dear...aww!!!!!! all are frnds...
and haa thanks ki smriti is not against dance...
but kriya and swayam not dancing...???
not happening...
anyways...wats the suspense...
wanna know it...
so update next part soon...kk
i will be waiting...
and first ff aur itna badiya likhti hai...
wah...manna padega...

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