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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey update soon...waiting eagerly for d update...plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plzz update na...cont soon...😔😔😔
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waiting for tom...but m expecting a big big one...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ojaswi96

waiting for tom...but m expecting a big big one...😊




Okk dear I will update n long one 😊
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Thanks dear 😊
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Originally posted by: hotarsh

pls update yar
waiting...



Don't worry I will update tomorrow okk 😊
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I will update tomorrow u don't worry 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow u make my day...
ur ff is one of my fav...
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Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

wow u make my day...

ur ff is one of my fav...

thanks dear😊
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Part 9: Pyar Hai Ya Saza

Hi friends preeti here.thanks for lovely comments.i am going to write next part.hope u all like it😊
Part 9
Recap- R-tum mujh se itni nafret kerte ho ki mujh se baat bhi nahi kero ge armaan main janti hoon maine galti ki hai per armaan main tumhari berukhi nahi seh sekti armaan i love u dammit
Now...
After armaan left juhi thinging about armaan and ridhima
J-armaan mujhe pata hai tum ajj bhi ridhima se pyar ker te ho bes dikha nahi rehe per mujhe pura vishvash hai ek na ek din tum khud ridhima se bolo ge ki tum ouse pyar kerte ho.or main ous din ka besebri se wait ker rahi hoon jeb ridhima hamare ghar main bahu ben ker aaye gi
Ridhima enter
R-smiling-ab app kaise hai aunty
J-smiling-jis ki tum jaise dr.ho vo theek kaise nahi hogi
Ridhima see here and there
J-kya hua beta kaise dhund[find] rahi hoo
R-nervous-kaise ko bhi nahi aunty
J-ridhima beta mujhe pata hai ki tumhari ankhe kais ko dhund rahi hai
R-nahi aunty aise koi baat nahi hai
J-chalo koi baat nahi waise jise tum dhund rahi ho vo abhi aata hi hoga
Then our hero armaan enter ridhima see armaan n lost
Armaan see ridhima and look away
A-mom ab app kaise hai
J-mujhe kya pata meri docter se pouch
A-dr.ridhima meri mom kaise hai
R-ab ye theek hai ber rest ki zururet hai
A-or mom distarge keb hongi
R-may be ajj shaam ko
A-thanx
Then all enter
Juhi see all n smile
All see armaan n does not speak
Sha-juhi ab tum kaise ho
J-theek hoo
J-acha armaan ab tum india aa he gaye ho toh kyun na tum hi vo deal kero jis ki vajah si main yaha aaye hoon
A-mom per main jeb app theek hojaye gi maine socha tha ki main vapis newyork chala jauga per app toh
J-dekh beta ab ais main problem hi kya hai
A-per mom
J-mom mom kuch nahi ab tuhi ye deal final kere ga bus
A-mom
J-tune hi toh kaha tha ki ab tu office ka sara kam kere ga main ghar per rest keru gi itni jaldi bhul bhi gaya
A-ok ok main hi keru ga
J-thanx baby
A-mommm
All smile bcoz they know armaan did not like anybody say him baby
J-kya mom
A-maine app ko kitni bar kaha hai ki
J-mujhe baby met kaho haina
A-yes phir bhi app
J-bhai jo bhi ho main toh tume baby hi kahu gi duniya ke liye tu famous tycoon armaan malik hai per mere liye mera chota sa baby hai jis ko jerberdesti kerke khina khilna pedta hai
All started laughing
Then armaan phone ring
J-ye seb yaha bhi teri jaan nahi codte
Armaan pick phone
A-hello
Other-...
A-ya ok
Other-...
A-bye
Atul-aunty ajj app distarge ho jaye gi toh kyun na hum seb sath main dinner kere
J-hai ye theek hai
An-ok toh ajj shaam ko hamare ghar pe
Ridhima is afraid
R-thing to herself-ajj toh aahana bhi ghar pe hai agar aunty ne ya armaan ne ouse dekh liya toh
J-nahi anjali hamare ghar
M-per aunty app ko toh abhi chot lagi hai app kaise khana banaye gi
J-nahi main hi khana banauo gi
A-nahi mom app abhi pure tarah se theek nahi hai
J-agar main nahi banaue gi toh or kon banaye ga
All girls-hum seb
All smile
J-nahi beta hamare ghar main itne saare servents hai vo bana dege khana
Ridhima-nahi aunty
J-nahi beta agar tun seb khana banao ge toh hum seb baate keb kere ge saara tima in seb main hi nikal jaye ga
All agree
Rahul-toh finel hai aj ka dinner malik mension
At-aunty ab th app apne naye ghar main rehte hoo na
J-hai beta armaan ne mujhe mothers day per gift kiya tha
All smile
Evening
All enter in malik mension all r amazed to see house .house is awesome
M-kitna acha ghar hai na
At-or kitna bada bhi hai na
An-hai
Juhi welcome all of them
[aahana is home with her maid]
J-bathye
All sit down
Padma-juhi armaan kaha hai
J-bhabhi vo apne room main hai aata hi hoga
Pa-kitna time ho gaya hai ouse dekhe hue
J-app seb toh india main hai is liye nahi ouse app seb ne nahi dekha per main ous ke sath reh ker bhi kabhi labhi ouse hafta hafta nahi dekh pati
Kirti-kyun
J-janab sahib itna busy jo rehte hai pata hai kabhi kabhi toh mujhe bahot gussa aata hai armaan per
Shubanker-vo kyun
J-vo hemesha itna busy rehta hai ki khana bhi nahi khata
Pa-lakin jo bhi hai juhi he loves u so much iseliye toh bhagta chala aaya jeb ouse pata chala ki tume chot lagi hai
All smile
Just then all see armaan he is talking on phone
At-aunty armaan jeb dekho armaan phone pe hi hota hai
J-ofice ke kam is ki jaan chodte hi nahi
Ridhima see armaan n lost in him
Armaan see all of them
Padma-armaan ab mujh se bhi baat nahi kero ge
Armaan see padma n smile padma get up n come towards armaan
Armaan hugs padma n she kiss on his forehead
Pa-kaisa hai beta
A-main toh theek ho app kaise hai beautiful
All smile
Pa-main bhi theek ho armaan itne saal ho gaye tujhe yaad nahi aaye meri
A-app ki kaise bhul sekta hoon main
J-agar app dona ka milna ho gaya hoo toh khana kaye
Pa-hai
All started eating
A-mom main abhi aaya
J-ok
All sit on dining tabal
Armaan come back he see there is only seat beside ridhima
J-arre armaan aayo na
A-ji
He sit beside ridhima
All smile see them sit to gether
Ridhima see armaan n all started eating
While eating ridhima started coughing
A-worriedly-ridhima kya hua ye lo pani peyo
She drink water
A-tum theek toh ho naa
R-look in his eyes-hai thanx
Armaan look in her eyes
Armaan realize what he is doing n started eating again
All smile
After finish dinner
All go there house
They reach gupta house
Ridhima go aahana room n see she is sleeping soundly n smile sit on her bed
R-app ko pata hai beta app sote hue bilkul apne papa jaise cute lagte hoo n smile
App ko pata hai main aj bahot bahot happy hoon saying this she fell asleep n dream about our hero armaan

Ajj ki liye itna hi
Plz comments
Love u all
Take care
From
Arsh ki deewani preeti😊

Edited by awesome - 13 years ago

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