Pyar hai ya saza AR ff part 16 updated

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CutiepieHarshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: ojaswi96
hey awesome part...totally loved it...it was fab...waiting eagerly for d next update...cont soon...thnks for d PM...😊

thanks dear😊

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Asma Khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

I loved this part.
Armaan still cares for Ridz.
I hope he may come to know about Aahana soon.
Plz update the next part soonest.

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shami810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Nice part..!!! 👏

thanks for the pm...continue soon

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CutiepieHarshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: shami810
Nice part..!!! 👏
thanks for the pm...continue soon

thanks😊

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teenorchid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

so want em togethr. Sort out their differences soon plx.

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ojaswi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

hey cont soon...plzz update soon...waiting eagerly for d next update...

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ojaswi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

update soon...waiting eagerly for ur update...cont soon...😔

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CutiepieHarshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: ojaswi96
update soon...waiting eagerly for ur update...cont soon...😔

don't worry dear i will update today😊

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CutiepieHarshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Part 10: Pyar Hai Ya Saza

hello my dear friends how r u.preeti here thanks for lovely comment i am going to write next part hope u all like it😊

part 10

now...

next morning
malik mension
armaan come from his room n talk on his phone
juhi is in kitchen n see armaan coming n talking on his phone
j-mumbled ye kabhi nahi sudhrega
armaan reach kitchen
a-good morning mom
hugs her
j-good morning baby
a-mom app kitchen main kya ker rahi hai
j-armaan lig kitchen main kya kerte hau beta
a-khana banate hai
j-toh main bhi vohi ker rahi hoon
a-mom mera matlab hai ki app ko kam kerne ki kya zururet hai
j-kyun
a-mom ghar main itne swrvents hai phir bhi app
j-armaan beta u know naa mujhe khana banana acha lagta hai
see ben bhi gaya chal khate hai
both finish their breakfast
j-armaan tu ajj ghar pe hi hai na
a-nahi mom
j-kyun
a-mom main office ja raha hoon
j-per baby ajj sunday hai
a-i know mom today is sunday mujhe office ja ke seb check kerna hai n mere ajj meeting bhi hai
j-ok
a-bye mom
j-bye
armaan left
j-ab main kya karu ghar per aisa kerti hoon gupta house jaati hoon vaha seb se mil bhi lungi hai ye theek rahe ga main bhaiya ko phone ker deti hoon ki main aa rahi hoon nahi un sab ko surprize deti hoon ha
juhi left
gupta house
all r sit in hall
aahana is sit in ridhima lap
an-so aahana tumhara trip kaisa tha
aahana-glate anjali darling maine bahot maza kiya
sha-aare waah
aahana smile showing her dimple
aahana-mamma main bahar garden main khalne jau
ridhima-theek hai per dhuup main met jana ok
aahana-ok mamma
aahana go outside
all r talking about hospital
padma see ridhima is lost somewhere
pa-ridhima beta tujhe kya hua
ridhima-kuch nahi mamma
an-nahi ridz koi toh baat hai bata kya baat hai
r-main ye soch rahi thi ki ab armaan or aunty india main hai
sha-toh
r-hum seb ko toh pata hai ki armaan toh yaha nahi aaye ga per aunty toh aaye ge na agar unhone aahana ko dekh liya toh hym unhe kya kahe ge papa
sha-beta maine tume pehle bhi yehi kaha hai ki armaan ko bata do ki aahana ous ki beti hai
r-nahi papa hum pehle bhi ais bare main baat ker chuke hai plz
an-theek hai ridz hum kuch aisa soche ge ki aunty ko aahana ke baare main pata nahi chale ga
outside gupta home
juhi park her car n see little baby is sitting in garden
j-ye koun hai vaha ja ke dekh te hoon
she enter garden n see little baby girl playing with her toys
j-ye kaun hai oo vo bhi yaha
she feel some attraction towards her
j-smile-kitni pyari hai
aahana see juhi
aahana-app koun hoo
juhi sit on her knee in front of her
j-app ka naam kya hai
a-aahana
j-bahot pyara naam hai app ki mamma ka kya naam hai
a-lidhima[ridhima]
juhi is shocked
j-app ki mamma ka naam ridhima hai
aahana nodded
a-ye mera ghar hai
j-think to herself-ridhima ki beti per aisa kaise ho sakta hai main ridhima se hi pouchte hoon
j-chalo beta hum app ki mamma ke pass jate hai
aahana nodded
juhi pick aahana in her arms n go towards home
inside gupta home
anjali about say some thing ti ridhima when she see juhi with aahana n shocked
r-di kya hua app vaha kya dekh rahi hai
ridhima n all see juhi with aahana
all r totally shocked
pa-juhi tum
aahana-aunty vi rahi meri mamma lidhima
all r again shocked
j-ye seb kaya hai ridhima ye bachi tume apni mamma kyun keh rahi hai
ridhima stand there emotionless
pa-hum tume sab bata te hai
pa-neha neha
neha come [she is aahana maid]
n-ji
an-aahana ko ander leker jao
neha nodded she took aahana in her room
j -ridhima ye seb kya hai vo koun hai
r-worriedly-vo vo aa aaunty
sha-beta abb bata doo bahut hua
j-kya bhaiya
r-her eyes filled with tears-vo aunty aahana meri beti hai
juhi is shocked
j-mumbled-ridhima ye tum kya keh rahi hoon
an-yehi sach hai aunty aahana ridhima or armaan ki beti hai
j-shocked-what anjali ye tum kya
pa-yehi sach hai juhi aahana ridhima n armaan ki beti hai
j-per phir app seb ne hume bataya kyun nahi
pa-hume ridhima ne mana kiya tha
j-per kyun
juhi go towards ridhima
j-batao beta kyun nahi bataya ki aahana armaan ki beti hai
R-jeb muhje pata chala ki main main benne wali hoon teb armaan mujhe chod ker ja chuka tha
j-tum baad main bhi bata sekti thi beta
r-aunty app bhi jaante hai ki armaan mujh se nefret kerta hai agar armaan ko pata chal jata ki main pregnent hoon toh vo vapis aa jata per vo sirf is liye vapis aa jata ki ye bacha ous ka hai per hum dono ka rishta sirf compermise hota main ye nahi chahte ki armaan aise life spend kere main ouse banden main nahi bandna chahte
juhi,s eyes filled with tears
j-itna pyar kerte ho ouse
ridhima started cryiny juhi hugs her
r-aunty app mujh se promise kijye ki app armaan ko kuch nahi bataye gi
j-per beta
r-plz
j-theek hai beta per main apni poti se mil sakti hoon kya
ridhima nodded. all smile
all go towards aahana room n see aahana is playing with teddy aahana see ridhima
aahana-happily-mamma
r-hai mera bacha
aahana-see teddy kitna acha pyarra hai
j-bilkul app ke jaisa
aahana-sach
j-much
aahana-mamma ye koun hai
ridhima-beta ye app ki daddi hai
all smile
aahana-confused-daddi u mean grandmother
ridhima nodded
aahana-app meri daddi hoo
j-hai beta
aahana hugs her
aa-app mere dadda ki mamma hoo
j-hai beta
aahana-phir mere dadda kaha hai
all r silent
j-vi bhi jaldi aaye ge app ke pass n look at ridhima bahut jald
aahana smile -yeee
all smile
r-chalo aahana ab so jao
aahana nodded
an-hum seb bahar jaate hai ridz tu aahana ko sula ker bahar aa jana
juhi is going
aahana-daddi app bhi yaha ruko
all left
ridhima n juhi sit on her bed one side ridhima n other side juhi
aahana-app yaha hi raho gi na
j-nahi beta
aahana is sad
j-per main roz app ko milne aaya keru gi beta
aa-happily-sach
juhi nodded
aahana fell asleep
ridhima n juhi kissed on her fore head
j-tume pata hai ridhima aahana sote hue bilkul armaan jaise lagti hai
r-hain
j-beta ajj main bahut kush hoon
ridhima smile
j-chalo abb bahar chalte hai
both go to hall where all r sit
pa-so gaye
r- ji
j-aahana bahut pyari hai
an-or shaitaan bhi
all smile
suddenly shashank phone ring
sha-main abhi aaya
he left n cone after 15 min looking very tense
all notice
PRECAP-juhi-ridhima-aahana moments,and problem in sanjeevani

ajj ki liye itna he
plz comments
take care
love u all
from
arsh ki deewani preeti

Edited by awesome - 13 years ago