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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#711

hi...
thanks for the pm. I look forward to reading the update of this FF. A quick question, could you old in simple words explain the family tree...confused on who is aditi, aparna, and the kids of family.
I am so involved in knowing about arnav and khushi...that I missed the family members.
thanks.

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Saniya

@saniya.x

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#712

Arnav and Khushi, gosh their scenes make me shiver man!😍 Anjali suggesting Payal for Akash? She's already got a boyfriend called Imran, right? Ooh I'd love to see how that ends up! Beautiful update Munchy.<3

continuee sooon!😳

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savvz

@savvz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#713

munchy,,

u r on a roll...

keep these updates coming... :)

that was smashing... :)

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#714

Anjali centric chapter! Loved it!! The way she despises and accepts her role - what was that reaction to marriage in the Akash interaction? Does Anjali have a lover? Anjali held captive by tradition while there is a hubbub of youth in her house

Children of the damned - what an interesting name for a chapter

When I first read Anjali giving Shyam pills, I jumped to the fact that he had a mental illness. Then I found that he had acne lol - a fitting punishment - doom him back to the awkward gangly days of teenagedom

I loved reading the Khushi Payal sister scene - beautifully written

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#715

Anjali as a devoted daughter, almost obsequious was slightly difficult to read - but my unease is a testament to your writing

I can't say how much I love reading Khushi's spitfire dialogues, actions, and interactions with NK and Akash - her cursing, her fire they add so much to the story. NK is especially awesome in this

Payal already has a boyfriend, and she might married to Akash? Hooray for love quadrangles!

The entire pool pulling out Arnav thought process was incredibly hot to read - staying true to the poolside as Arhi's favorite spot to romance and then the transition from summer breeze and green eyes to summer breeze and hazel eyes - lovely

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#716

loved the update thank you anjali yeah go give akash away to any one but khushi loved it like how nk tossed her in the pool and arnav just realized she did not have on a bra awesome update loved it hanks for the pm

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#717

loving the FF Munchy...

love the relationship between Khushi, Shyam, and NK...and the sexual tension between Arnav and Khushi, uff so hot...the last line was just amazing...loved it

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.Euphoria.

@.Euphoria.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#718

haha..so Akash is going to meet Payal..I love it..
Aww Khushi is helping Arnav get over penelope...
and is NK really gay?? He seemed so defensive about it..

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Crinklez.

@Crinklez.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#719

Loved it. Arnav oooh so hot.

"Bhain choud" 😆 I love the way Khushi is with her friends.

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#720

I loved the last two chapters. I feel so bad for Anjali and they are think of payal and akash... Lol. I can't wait for the next update. Please continue soon.