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waterunder11

@waterunder11

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#701

even this arnav and khushi don't talk and just stare? :) I'm hoping for alot of conversations between them!

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@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#702

*Whistles*

It's getting hot in here!

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#703

Loved it! Please continue soon!

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GoGreen

@GoGreen

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#704

Khushi ..this girl is different here...just white shirt and no bra...what is this girl upto...So Nani wants Payal and Akash get married...Pyal is already having boyfriend...

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#705

Munchy, you do know your FF updates are like dope, nah? They are so addictive.

Stand-outs for me-
Nani deciding to set up Aakash and Payal's alliance. Absolutely missing the bulls-eye. This is why in matters of love the spoken words are always better than the words spoken by the eyes. I kind of feel sorry for Aakash.
Nani referring to her Children's sins affecting her grandchildren especially one (assume its Arnav). I think there is a strong reason Arnav is the way he is.
Nani feeling sorry for Anjali's situation.

The Kushi/Arnav interaction towards the end. It was electric, but then what more do you expect off them. They are after all Kushi and Arnav. I love the way you have descrbed the scene and some of the detailing, her no wearing a bra, Her dragon Tshirt covering her modesty and Arnav looking her with xray vision and nearly kissing her.

But for me what stood out most was the last line- Summer breeze and a wet nymph, summer breeze and hazel eyes.

Very beautiful line that very subtly explains changes in Arnav's feelings towards Kushi.

Fantastic update as always, thanks for the PM.

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.SublimeSaRun.

@.SublimeSaRun.

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#706

Munchy, I'm going to start from the beginning! Just the title is enough to lure me in 😆Question: So do the characters have any resemblance what so ever with those that are in the show? Just curious before I start.

~Puja~

Edited: Read the first three chapters. A very interesting twist on the characters, as you said some qualities are in tact but at the same time are inherently different. There are still many questions left unanswered, but definitely worth the wait. I'm not getting a good aura from Aakash man! Keeping my fingers crossed for more ArHi 😆 Shyamm 😍 A total sweetheart, it's soo hard to imagine him without those despicable expressions he gives in the actual show🤢

Are Khushi and Aakash together at chapter 3 or??? What's with the hand-holding 😆

Edited by .SublimeSaRun. - 13 years ago

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arta

@arta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#707

it seems that nk and shyam are seeing khushi strange and atrackted to arnav hence to make her feel more incomfortable and tease her are not missing a chance to throw her at him ... and what ideas nk
arnav is still a mystery
wonder what will happen to both akash and payal when they give them the notice to get them together ...
how come that no one except shyam and nk noticed akash having a crush on khushi..
i'm curious to know more about anjalis love , i was wondering if it was before or after marriage ... anyway better wait and see what happened ...
thanks for the pm

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shaam91

@shaam91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#708

awww thankyou munchy!! for the birthday update..:D

i wish someone would see sense and help arnav and anjali in whatevers troubling them.

but you said this ff might be more than what we can take!!

im on for the ride...:D

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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#709

thank you for this quick and awesome update!

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Simran

@Sim1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#710

okayyy woahh! amazing update! really gripping, cant imagine khushi having a belly piercing :L and LOL when arnav was staring at her breasts because she didnt have a bra on, that really made me laugh😃

Thanks and update soon!

oh and thanks soo much for the PM!