AR: Believe.|Sneak-A-Peek(for Chap#4)-Pg35|(12thApril) - Page 22

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awesum concept...
Totally luv it
seems like here avi is nt bad
plz cont soon
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Seriously guys...seen the number of likes and comments? You can just tell me if this story bores you. I will not post it anymore...and this whole less views thingy upsets me, since Believe is extremely close to my heart as a story :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

Seriously guys...seen the number of likes and comments? You can just tell me if this story bores you. I will not post it anymore...and this whole less views thingy upsets me, since Believe is extremely close to my heart as a story :)

I WILL SLAP U IF YOU STOP 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey don't stop writing..I miss ur ff..hope u come back soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I REALLY WANT TO WRITE THIS.
I miss Believe so much :(
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Sneak-A-Peek into Chapter #4

"Seriously, why are you even dating that guy?", he says suddenly.
I look at him in half-confusion, half-irritated. "What?"
"No..I mean,Look at him. When I asked his name, he automatically said,'Riddhima's boyfriend.', as if he is very possessive about you. And then he goes away for work. Leaving you with a guy he doesn't even know.That's some concern and possessiveness."

What the hell does this guy think of himself? Whether Avi leaves or stays with me, shouldn't be a problem to him. And for that matter, just because he is my best friend's "prospective husband", doesn't really mean he should pose questions on my lifestyle, does it? Some people just Don't know where their boundaries lie. What they really like, and can do, is poke their nose in other's businesses.

God, please. Get this guy out of my best friend's life. And mine too.

"I don't think me, or Avi for that matter have to justify our actions to you. And about that concern bit? What you are talking about, is mushy romance. Hands holding, baby, flowers, that stuff. Avi is my boyfriend, not bodyguard, okay? He knows that I can take care of my myself, and I prefer that. Plus if you're forgetting,Nikki is here too.", I add.

Alright. I think that's one of the biggest sentences I've said to anyone except discussing projects in business meetings. This guy is wrecking my life already. And Why, just why, am I justifying myself? To a complete stranger?

Armaan chuckles,"So you don't love him."
And Pray, Mr.Oh-I-Know-it-all, how the hell can you say THAT?

*****

"You know what,Miss Riddhima Gupta. You think that what YOU do, is correct. You think that the WHOLE FREAKING WORLD revolves around YOU. Here's the reality check. You are nothing but a Uptight,Introvert, Lonely and Unhappy Business woman. You think the way people appear, is exactly what they are. You are Judgemental, you jump to conclusions.You never give ANYONE a chance if they haven't appeared as ultimately Perfect in your first look. I had just come here to be Friends with you. Because your best friend wants that. Who is important to me. But I guess I made a mistake thinking that could ever happen, because someone like you who believe what they think is absolutely Correct, can never be Friends with Anyone. So Good Bye, Miss Gupta. Have a great life ahead."

He finished, his words echoing in my ears. This guy, whom I've known for 2 days, says everything that people had thought about me, on my face. And leaves me Speechless.Angry.Frustrated.Defeated.

I Hate you Armaan Mallik.
Maybe even more than I hate myself sometimes.

*****

I am not back. Just was missing writing to bits, couldn't help but give this Preview. I have my most important exams on 19th and 20th, then later. Please,please pray for me. I really need your wishes :(

And for now, Comments and likes please.
I will send PMs for this, but the next PMs will only be for those who like this post.
And If I don't get enough feedback, I'm going to stop writing. This is not a threat...Its a fact, because I do take LOADS of time to think and write, when studies are breathing down my neck.

Sorry if I was rude.
Miss you guys! :(

Love,
Maitree.
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOOK WHO'S HERE TO COMMENT 😳😳
Ermmm got to read the whole thing :| i did not even know that you've started writing a new ff :|
So for now reserved

Guess who? ^_^
*Edit*
Here i come 😎 to finally edit my comment.
PREFACE

I liked riddhima in the first look itself man, she really seems to be astrong girl. Ah haan...she has a boyfriend... Teri riddhima toh badi cool hai 😎

Part 1

This part truly intrigued me. What's wrong with her mom? And why Is riddhima so reluctant to go and meet her? I must say, the story impressed me in the first part itself. I'm sure it would keep me hooked till the end, that is if you plan to complete it. :/
I don't really like her bf though 🥱 hope he doesn't turn out to be in a negative role...
I'm sure our pyaari si riddhima doesn't love that filthy rich brat, as we need a scope for her to fall in love with our hero 😎

Part 2

I'm in love with nikki of your ff. She's sooo bindas, cool and funny 😆😆😆 i like her...
My armaan makes entryyy ^_^ nikiii...hope she doesn't fall in love with himm... :( warna riddhima ka kya hoga :p
Ah haannn riddhima is trying to act like normal humans here 😆

Part 3


I have a gut feeling that nikki is trying to hook riddhima with armaan...amd if that is the case "go nikki go"

And why can't her good for nothing bf leave her alone...dude get a grip...as such she's gonna fall for Our hero ARMAAN REALLY SOON..right maitree? 😳😳 It depends on our author though...but i hope my gut is correct this time :/


P.S: IF YOU DONOT COMPLETE THIS FF, I'M GONNA STANGLE YOU 😡


Edited by rockstar_kajen - 11 years ago
Prizi thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey nyc sneak peek..
Best of luck fr ur exam :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Excuse me? Miss.Purple Font Lady. But where is the REST? And best of luck! You will do amazing! ILY<3

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