AR: Believe.|Sneak-A-Peek(for Chap#4)-Pg35|(12thApril) - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome preview
can't wait for part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome sneak peakk :D Got me all excited to read further. Update sooonisshh!! And good luck with your examss
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Posted: 11 years ago
HERE'S A HUGE SURPRISE FOR YOUUU <33
Imma give you as long a comment as I can


First Look:
I was just going through my news feed and saw your update and then I read the first look and it was LOVE at first read. <3 I'm tired of the heroes who are workaholics so for a change, I love the concept. 😆 It's all ulta-pulta and I'm really interested to see how he teaches her. xP

Preface:
Soft mat on the grass and looking up reminded me of KHYK Kanjoos ka DP it reminded me of So KaJenish <3 So pretty <3 And wow, I love this AR too ^_^ Who can resist the charms of Armaan Mallik, just who? ☺️ Same as in she loves him? I hope he doesn't break her heart. 🥺 Amd she is beautiful, ain't she? <3

Chapter 1:
Your author's note is just WORD. Nothing more, nothing less. Not the P.S part of it. 😆
Beginning with it, I must say I am so NOT like Riddhima. 😆 Alarms disturb my sweet and I LOVE MERA SLEEP <3 Her routine is so well planned xD Inspired by you maybe? :P I love how you've kept the character intact by the schedule, fake smile and no-chatting policy. And for a moment there, when she turned emotional, it touched my heart, like sacchi mein it did <33 But what happened to her mother? Old age problems ya fir kuch aur? o.O Avishek? I like the name but his sweetness is creepy at times :/ Thank god she doesn't love him, it's reserved for Ammy. Boringly dressed? I bet she looks the best there. 😳 And the ending of the chapter. PERFECT, SO PERFECT. :O They were my favorite lines in the chapter <3 AHHH, SO BEAUTIFUL MAITREEE :')

Chapter 2:
Is Mr/ Mehta related to Armaan in any way? 🤣 Sorry, I just had to ask you that. 😆 Avishek gave her a SUV? Now he just seems more creepier than ever. 🤔 I don't like cherries but music is LOVE <3 But oh well, I see where she's coming from. I expected Muskii and not Ridz but awww, soul sister? I thought soul sisters are similar. Oh well, when you know each other 20 years, chalta hai. I LOBE THIS NIKKIII <33 5 years toh I expected Modi but you changed it up firse 😆 Good to know though that something as mundane as traffic jams irritates even her, but then who does it not? 😆 And WOW, does Ridz love Nikki a lot or what? She said I love her so many times 🤣 I want more for AR woman. 😳 Oooh, she's an interior designer? That's nice 😆 Another option but then, I'm not creative so Imma chuck that 😆 ASDFGHJKL, the introduction was just 🤣🤣 Mother of 10 babies and 32 blackened teeth? Where did you even come up with that? 🤣 Duuude, that was soo funny 🤣 Vapas tapak pada kabab mein haddi Avi -.- Nikki not liking him just adds to the attributes I like in her 😆 Voice she hi distract hogayi? 🤓 Black coffee? Cliche much? 😆 But even now it's not Modi and it's Armaan. Okay, I didn't expect that but what the heck 😆

Chapter 3:
I can see why you called Tashu adorable :| She spammed in your FF unlike in mine 🤔 I don't think I've ever read of Minisha in any FF 😆 Thank god Nikki has no problem with her future jeeju ;) And see, vapas Nikki ki taarif. I tell you, kuch toh gadbad hai 😳 And Nikki says I love you too. Maitree, you sure it's not a NR FF? 🤣 BUT, I love their interaction and how they know each other sooo well and also how work always comes in somehow and it's not one of those FFs where the leads don't work at all 🤣 And aww that Manish scene. <3 I loved it bahut hi zyada <3 It was soo touching and poor Ridzi 🥺 Hayyyeee :( AND WOOHOO, she's gonna meet Armaan *dances and then calms down a bit* And I LOVE NIKKI (too much?). I meant I love her philosophy :3 And here we go with NR. *looks sternly at Maitree* AND WHY DOES AVI HAVE TO TAPKOFY EVERYWHERE? Like really, WHYYY? AND YAY, she changed her kapde 😆 Jen is itniii yummy. And yay, Nikki hates him and I love her ^_^ She didn't find him attractive? Like, how is that possible? 😲 Nikki's reaction was just 🤣 Name not designation *dies laughing* Thank god he left and so did Niks, now we have AR And wow, he recognized her 🤣 Damn, I LOVE HIM <3 He's oh-so-smart :') And Ridz gayeee 🤪

Sneak Peak:
Oooh, mera Armaan <3 Thank you for telling her, seriously. _/\_ And he made her say the longest sentence ever. AWWW <3 I'm weird, I know 😆 And Ridz, he is a know it all 😎 And Reality Check time ^_^ You italics mein put Friends 🤣Good to know I'm on track 😆 And she doesn't hate him, she's just affected 😆 Awww, I looove Armaan (No connection, just felt like saying it 😆)

And I LOVE YOUUU <33
This is so perfff :')
I can't believe I knew only about MTB 😆
I can't type out a comment for all parts there but idhar kasar puri karli xP
Alsooo, take your time to update, I don't want to be wrong 😳
You're lucky I was in a mood to comment huge today🤣
Thank Tashu for that LMAO
Oh well, I hope you LOVED my comment 😎
Signing off now :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice and good luck for ur exams 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
All the best or ur paper & take ur time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
well i forgot the story. bt after reading the preview yaad aa gayiii
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting preview!
Please continue soon!
And thanks for the pm :)

Good luck with your exams!

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