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Posted: 13 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: zoey_1365
Really like the update and the music!

you listened to the music. hehe. i loved it. i wasnt sure it i should add it. but u wanted you guys to also get the intensity tha ti get when writing. :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: jtammareddy
A very lovely update. And lovely song too.

you listened to the music. hehe. i loved it. i wasnt sure it i should add it. but u wanted you guys to also get the intensity tha ti get when writing. :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382
omg wat an update.
beautifully written...
super selection of song...
was jst imagining it...
khushi tld Arnav abt the Rose...
i hope Arnav also tells Khushi abt the Payal...
u knw hw much u write it...
it always seems its a short update...
i knw me bein selfish bt i want more n more...
loved it...

you listened to the music. hehe. i loved it. i wasnt sure it i should add it. but u wanted you guys to also get the intensity tha ti get when writing. :)

the song really hleps in imagining it haina. and khushi is slowly opening up to him. much needed. right. aranv tell her. hehe no no . later on. much later on. he will show her. chalay ga? 😉

i fear that i write too much. hehe. i am scared tha tthey may put a limit on me or something. no more than this. hehe. but thanks for the lovely comment. really motivates me :)

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: Sjm15
Sooo sweet! 😳

And thank you! 😃

I loved the music, again I can't thank you enough for Omar Akram's music now! He is too good!

Bonfire! 😳 He is so sweet and gentle, and she said she knew! 😳

I am speechless now..

hehe. you know what. i tried listening to another artist. maza nahin aya yaar. hehe. if you read this guys data. he add in asian and european touch. right. which is really rare and good. so that is why he is my fav. my hubby is getting me his albums for my b-day. not soon. few months away. but he knows that is what i want. and he knows he will forget it that day. so he is getting them from now. hehe.

bonfire was your idea. hehe. and yes. she needs to come a little ahead. with him alone there. yes. in todays update.. a bit more. hehe. not much as expected. but for her. a lot more. hehe.

speechless. thanks. hehe. 😊

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: dumas
loved the update very beautifully done loved that her gave her another rose she is starting to suspect he is atish loved the update so cute sweet and romantic thanks for the pm

hehe. him giving the single rose is now their trade mark. right :).. thanks

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Neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#646

Awww!! Lovely update!!! They both are super cute!!

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: arhi-fan
Hey di u r such a fabulous writer . I mean anyone cant beat u in intensifying n bringing out the emotions in romantic scenes . The sense of fear that khushi felt when she felt arnav was nt near was awesome. N the bonfire n the beach n the waves such a warm n romantic feeling it gives. U were rite it is a night to remember as in someways they took their relationship to the next level. The music was just awesome. N i think while reading this ff that i'll fall deeply n madly in love. Update soon. Just cant wait to read more.

hehe. i am sure there are a million people who wrtie a million times better than i do. and secret to that i attempt to do is.. basically.. the insturmentl music. eyes closed. and first i try to imagine every single cornor of the environent. and type as i see it. that adds the romantic atmosphere. then the two people. they add the emotion. :)..

it was their night to remember. but but but. minta and tom are going to make this their trip to remember ;) .. hehe spoiler. hehe.

that music i just loved. you should hear this guys albums. i tried to listen to the other artist. voh maza nahin aya. hehe. this guy has an indian and european mix which is what i loveee. :) .. and i think we are already in love. with ipkknd :P. hehe. haina. thanks for the nice and long comment :).. brings a smile to my face. thanks :)

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: Orion_N

Ok still in the process of reading the next part but just read ur comment to my comment! loll yeh i think we think a lot alike in that way :D !!!!! awww really u liked what I said about the rose??? seriously??? wow that means a lot :D I was just writing what I thought... kinda like verbal diarrhoea but of my thoughts!!! lolll Nope of course I don't mind... glad ur feeling better :D

well you know what i cant say. paith (stomach) karahb rakho. bc it doesnt deal with the stomach. nor can i say dimag kharab rakho. bc. that is just right. hehe. but keep up the verbal diarrheor. hehe... its inspirational :).. thanks. will wait for more inspirations. kinda need them :S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: Kriyanshlover
cute update, ,oved it. Aww Khushi getting scared and Arnav being there for her lovly updae loved it. Hmm who will they dance infront of??

infront of tom and minta. tom and minta have something espechial plnned for our love birds 😉

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: Orion_N
ohhh awesomings yaar!!! seriously loved it :D I loved how she asked him why he gave the rose and cutely asked why he didn't give a note with it... sooo cute and innocent just like their love :D The fire on the beach with one blanket... such a romantic scene :D loved it!!!!

Thanks for the PM :D

he can give her grass and carpet and she cant joke. hehehe. hehe. plus its a step fwd na. i mean both are getting a bit cozy and comfy with each toher. plus she made him realize that the feelings were always there. he wanted the confirmation right. and she also indirectly verbally confirmed it. :) ...

that idea was sjm15 . i found it the sweetest part of that night as well. more tan the dance. 😕

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