Bachpan ka pyar...part 1-32

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jtammareddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#621

A very lovely update. And lovely song too.

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rkapoor1382

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Posted: 13 years ago

#622

omg wat an update.

beautifully written...

super selection of song...

was jst imagining it...

khushi tld Arnav abt the Rose...

i hope Arnav also tells Khushi abt the Payal...

u knw hw much u write it...

it always seems its a short update...

i knw me bein selfish bt i want more n more...

loved it...

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princess84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#623

awww...totally loved this part continue soon

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JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#624

Sooo sweet! 😳

And thank you! 😃

I loved the music, again I can't thank you enough for Omar Akram's music now! He is too good!

Bonfire! 😳 He is so sweet and gentle, and she said she knew! 😳

I am speechless now..

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#625

loved the update very beautifully done loved that her gave her another rose she is starting to suspect he is atish loved the update so cute sweet and romantic thanks for the pm

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Chhaya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#626

Hey di u r such a fabulous writer . I mean anyone cant beat u in intensifying n bringing out the emotions in romantic scenes . The sense of fear that khushi felt when she felt arnav was nt near was awesome. N the bonfire n the beach n the waves such a warm n romantic feeling it gives. U were rite it is a night to remember as in someways they took their relationship to the next level. The music was just awesome. N i think while reading this ff that i'll fall deeply n madly in love. Update soon. Just cant wait to read more.

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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#627

Originally posted by: freezie

declaration. hehe. not yet. that was just a confirmation. declaration is yet to come. with a lot more emotion! hehe. i hope.. hehe. the dance. you dont understand i was about to have a heart failure was i was writing it. yikes. gulp. aranv is a true gentleman. that is what khushi loves most about him. he is not like other guys. will take up the opportunity given it. he loves her and respects her. he knows what she belives in, and respects it. he will wait for her. maybe even his entire lifetime. hehe. we will see. nervousness yes. defiently. hessitation. no. becuase they needed to take the next step. with hessitation that was not possible. so finally khushi decided to take one of the barrier walls down.
payal no. honestly. i think you know me way too well now. hehe. no more element of surprise. or maybe you are feeling the same value for these things as i am . and i am definetly using how you descried the need for he rose. i just loved it. you have put this in better words than me. i hope you dont mind though.
and i am feeling much better. i have my hubby and the wonderful long comments that you guys give. that makes me smile :) .. thanks

Ok still in the process of reading the next part but just read ur comment to my comment! loll yeh i think we think a lot alike in that way :D !!!!! awww really u liked what I said about the rose??? seriously??? wow that means a lot :D I was just writing what I thought... kinda like verbal diarrhoea but of my thoughts!!! lolll Nope of course I don't mind... glad ur feeling better :D

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Amina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#628

cute update, ,oved it. Aww Khushi getting scared and Arnav being there for her lovly updae loved it. Hmm who will they dance infront of??

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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#629

ohhh awesomings yaar!!! seriously loved it :D I loved how she asked him why he gave the rose and cutely asked why he didn't give a note with it... sooo cute and innocent just like their love :D The fire on the beach with one blanket... such a romantic scene :D loved it!!!!

Thanks for the PM :D