Bachpan ka pyar...part 1-32

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arhilover55

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Posted: 13 years ago

#631

very cute update..loved how khushi worried about arnav and he calms her down...they are adorable..and loved how he finally knows that she knew about the rose..please continue soon

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Harshita jain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#632

Waaa waaa i'm crying..u din't update .. Everyday wen i visit this site at this tyme ur next part is always updated but today its not... Sob sob ;( ;(

nd please add me to ur buddy list coz i can't do it i don't know. Iguess dere is a probin my account :P :D

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priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#633

so beautiful update

i was out of station for 2 days so i couldn't read ur updates

just now read from part 22-24

simply superb

part22: so nice amazing now akash knows that arnav loves someone thank god he does know its khushi. and the sunset was explained so beautifully. he took a pics of her wow. so nice. and the song was so amazing. their growing closeness is explained so beautifully.

part 23: their first dance was so nice. amazing song and perfect place and perfect couple. their dance was explained so beautifully. they where so close. i thought he is gonna kiss her. but he is so good and gentle. the words he said was just wonderful. he is so nice. khushi is also liking their closeness wow. so beautifully growing love.

part24: this was sooo amazing part. everything was just perfect. the rose, their first hug and arnav kiss everything were explained so wonderfully. khushi's first move she herself hugged him twice. so nice. and finally arnav came to know that she knows that the rose and note was gifted by him. amazing update

i missed ur writings these 2 days but after readings this i'm so happy. u r really a great writer

thank u so much for the pm

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: nehamcc987
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hey freezie i can't believe i'm first to comment after a very very long time
i feel really proud, well staying up all night really paid off after reading the update which was beyond fantastic.i truly loved it not just the story but also arshi's child like love in this story.well it's so not childish after all is it huh.it is so so so adorable how innocent their love is.
oh khushi loved this rose even more than the other one.look she even realized that arnav is the one she wants to spend her entire life w/ how sweet.
i also loved how khushi almost got a heart attack because she couldn't find arnav,she truly loves him
but what was cuter when arnav smirked when she told him she was worried that she couldn't find him (sigh).great now she is doubting that how come arnav knows some things only she told aish about. good i hope she figures that out soon.also the concern arnav shows is so sweet i can't explain
totally amazing in which not every guy is like that.how romantic arnav took her to a fireplace and they both shared the blanket and kinda of snuggled and fell asleep that was so romantic
well look she is getting more comfortable around arnav and even joking w/ him. also less looking at the grass and floor huh haha
also how sweet of him to pick her up take her in her room,place her on her bed and kiss her forehead and say sweet dreams
obviously her dreams of gonna be sweet because arnav is gonna be in it
i totally loved the precap yay the four of them are gong hiking and another dance sequence for arshi
but this time the two partners in crime to make arshi come closer are gonna witness it how embarrassing
especially after miss drama queen is gonna see it but i don't get it when you said
"But they actually do something infront of some one else." for the precap plz explain what you mean
overall i totally loved it 20/10 gal amazing
by far most my favorite story meaning ff and ur my favorite writer by the way what is ur real name if you don't mind saying it

aww. you stayed up al night. hehe. thanks... means a lot :)

there are many different layers and levels to love. khushi is innocent. she will feel it like the innocent way first. mening i feel like a princess. phir baad main princess say queen ;)

i told you guys its realization time first. right. and the small things put together make it special enough for you to be able to realize it. haina.

after realization, if you feel that you lost everything before even gaining it, and just figuiring out that it was yours. you would feel like you had a heart attack na. i just imagine it, then intnesify it 100 times, and then write. simple. i like to exagerate, but its the exageration that gets the intense feelings.

dono kay dil jor rahay hain. they hearts are being slowly sewn together. and knowing that the others heart cannot beat without yours, a smirk and a smile are automatic. right. aish figuring out. havent decided. well i have. but i wont tell :P

if your heart beat together, then they also smile together, they cry together. they do everything together. i wanted them to slowly get confy with each other. slowly does it. plus i enjoy it more that way. i mean you get to write about little little things and enjoy them. you find happiness in the smallest things right. if i were to jump all of a sudden, what fun would that be. hmm...😆

grass a floor were always my favourite. hehe. hehe. 😉 and them being able to pull each others legs about it. just added a bit of masala. chatpata masala. not mirch masala. that is reserved for passionate encouters. 😉

hehe. i loved how you said that her dreams were gonna be sweet bc arnav wa sin them. hehe. too cute. yes that is true. i added it in the update. hehe. hhee too cute. thanks for the idea :)

the two partners in crime are going to commit some crimes. hehehe. hehe. not saying any more. read the update. alraedy wrote it up yesterday but bc my im-laws are over wasnt able to post it. or comment or reply. khair. love them to death :) .. so not complaining.

precap, dance is a must. i love insturmental music. just love it to bits. i dont like getting in the ones with lyrics mainly bc then the mind gets a bit distracted with the words. and instead of helping to intensify the emtions it kinda distracts it. the dance i am not writing in part 24. it will be in part 25. i decided to add in a couple of things to part 24 so it is already long eough. :S ... hope you all like it. :)

and doing something infront of them. that is mintas kamaal. hehe.. havent decded exactly what. but i have somewhat of an idea. will write uyp part 25 right now or 26 which ever one is next then in there. :)

20/10 .. hehye.. aww you making me blush. hehe.. thanks for reading and the lovily long long comment. love those :) ..

my name is good. yes. but i am not telling anyone. hehe. sorry yaar. everyone calls me di. as in didi. just plain di. or even freezie. any goes :) ...

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freezie

@freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#635

Originally posted by: sruthirishi
OMG!!! i'm totally in love with dis ...

its full of LOVE...PURE LOVE...
wish every one's bachpan ka pyar turns out like dis..😉
sooo innocent...with no interference of lust !!!
glad that, kushi starts to hav doubts of arnav being aish...which'll still deepen arnav's love for kushi(wish it is so..)

ur writing is very simple but..it touches deep inside!!!
esp d part where kushi searches arnav..& that hug..was very natural!!!
Aranv: tho tum parayshan hogaen thi. Meray liye.-that was sooo swweet!!!

D night with reflection of moon,d fireplace,both under oneblanket,-VERY ROMANTIC❤️

hum aisa kuch nahin karaingay. Jis say khud baad main nazar nahin mila paen.
dis was d beautiful line,i totally loved dis!!!

gr8 going...keep ur gud work!
totally addicted to ur work...
god bless.

bachpan ka pyar.. has its own thing right. uski alag baat hoti hai. its just.. sigh. :)... and not all love stories work out. probabilty of them working out is close to none. :) .. but one can always hope. or dream . right :)

she has a doubt yes. will she think about it more. no not right now. and they need to build more of a stronger realtionship before she can find out for sure. right :)
and that was the entire purpose of this FF. pure love. with no intension of lust in it. there will be lust. or physcial attraction yes. but not right now. or maybe. well daikh thay hain. not decided. hehe. i tend to say that alot dont i. i actully write it as it comes along. i have the main story in mind. and will stick by that. but the small things, i like to elaborate.

simplisity is what i love most about this world. when things get a bit too much, complicated or hard. i could also write it a more formal manner. you want to know a secret. i finally got my hubby to read one part. the one that i dedicated to him. he was shocked. shell shocked. i always wrote papers, for univerisity, thesis and what not. all formal. but this was informal, and he was surprised tha ti could write like this. i told him that when i want to get a single message across to the heart, then make it simple. love should be simple. :) sorry for the jibberish. kinda got a bit carried away in commenting on this. hehe. as long as it touches the heart. i am happy. from my heart to yours. right :)

my secret to writing. i put on the insturmental music. close my eyes. and dont imagine the two people first. no . i type as i cover each angle of the scene. its the scene that makes the atmosphere romantic. then the couple, their lines, their feelings are what touches the heart. right :)

that was my fav line as well. and always will be :) .. he is a gentleman. true at heart.

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freezie

@freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: bhavya1237
❤️fantastic...superb...loved it more with the music...it gave a special feeling while reading with the melodious music...!!! AWESOME...!!! ❤️👏

hehe you listened to it. thank you hehehe :) .. i wanted you guys to also understand how i felt. it really does enhance the experiences doesnt it. i dont like it with lyrics. they get one distracted though :)

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: harshitaluv
Wow u know wat i read the previous part twice coz i luved it like anything...dis part was very very gud.. Iseriously can't wait for the next part. I'm deeply in luv wid dis story .how i wish dat it never ends.but i know every story has its own ending...and omg he kissed her ..he gave her a rose nd guess wat he will again kiss her in front of minta and tom..oops sorry dis was just an imagigination...how i wish dis wud cum true hehe

so do i :) .. wish some stories never ended. haina :)

heheh. hehe. cute imagination. hehe. hehe. i was about to do that though. really was.. its not even funny. a kiss on the cheek though. but then didnt. they first peck should be theirs alone. if they do kiss that is :P. hhe.hehe. we will see. just wait and watch where the story goes.

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freezie

@freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: nupsiii
i jus read all partss nd dey were amazingg... this is the bestest nd most romantic ff i hv ever read...ur writing covers every emotionnn... plz conti soon nd plz pm me :)

there are still a lot of more emotions to cover :)

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freezie

@freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#639

Originally posted by: aashshhs
Awww so cute, I swear this FF keeps getting better and better with every update...til date there has not been onr single update that I have not loved. keep up the faboulus work and take care :) :) :)

hehe. thanks. but this is worrying me though. i mean with all of these loving comments, sometimes i feel like the expectations are getting higher. fear i wont be able to deliver at times. hehe. but thanks. they are always very very motivating. :)>..