First OS on ARHI-Sweet Punishment LAST LINK ADDED

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It is a small Os my be

First OS so pardon for mistakes

This is about ARHI'''''''''..

And name is Sweet Punishment''''''''''''''''''''''''.

The back of story''''..

Sabji market

Khushi had a fight with Mr ASR b y breaking the neela dath(Blue tooth ) of her

And she left the house early..

And ASR at the work but as usual cannot concentrate and reminding of his pagal wife dialog

Mr ASR why on the world u everytime thinks the facts which u see are extremely right and what ever u thinks are absolutely right

Misunderstanding the people and hurting them with u venom words and impulsive actions.

Mr raizada let me give u a thing

U once told me that I live in a fantasy world and I assume think world run on it but mr raizada im not that nave as u to see the person''..in a view I can differeciate the person and identlify him even though tough situations'''''''.that is the reason even in the hate situations I will see the good things of aperson'''''''.

But u cannot .because ur a heartless person

And one more thing

Befor e understanding the situation u may loose the precious thing which is more important for u

With that she stromed out of the room

3 hours

His phone was ringing picked up it is his di

Arnav:Haa di are u ok he is still''''''''''..

Anjali :Di khushi bhabhi.

Arvav:Di kya huwa khsui ko sab teek hay.the concerned kicked in''''''''.

Anjali: Who apna phone n aye utarahee hay

ARnav (self thougth) Dam this wife of him.trouble name KKGSR''''''''''''''.Its ok di she may busy in some work

Anjali: No she went to vegitable market but not returned she told that she is not going to work today as her mood is offHe closed his eyes know''''..She is hurt today due to his actions not want to hurt but everytime he does.

Arnav: Ok di I will call her He called her the same

He quickly drove his SMU to the place he hate the place but everytime he end s up there'''''''''''.

KKGSR what this girl do everytime he ends up here

Searching for her in this gloof y and weird market'''''''''''..

He called one more time then suddenly a person came hopping of

He got him

He is happy singh the garage person , and cartoon neighbor of khusi

His mood is not good he is angry

Ur khusi di husband na

Another stupid enquiry.no arnav concentrate on misson khusi searching other wise di and nani will eat ur head off''

He didn't see the worried expression of the person

Who khushi ko lekar gayaa'''''''''.

Kaun ''''''''''.

Arnav shocked wahi uska pechle mangetar.

Where he quickly made him to sit in smu the person is going on

He is giving detailed expression that how the person managed to enter with sweet words to madhumati who is lady hitler to them.

And how he used to see khsui and that day incident when they learnt that he is a amarried man and cheat gupta family'''''..

And on that day before madhumati warning''''''..

He is listening.

His heart is running the marathon one thing I need to save her heis bleeding inside''''' guilt ,pain'''''he stopped the car and suddenly he ran to the road''''''''''''''''.

And some people are standing and blocking the road.

He shoved them all andprayed to one thing oh god please not her.don't give such a punishment for me

I will do what ever u want but please don't tore away from me.

I promise I will clear all the things'.i will give everything

She can use bath room ,wardrobe ,everything to me.but please don't .

He is not taking his phone as his sister is ringing.

Then he managed to the crowd

Saw the creatur e in the ground

The same creature the pink dress'''''''the pom pom dress dupatt aof her fill of his favourite color blood

And a scream ''''''''''''''''..khushi''''''''..

And lifted the lifeless form in his hands''''''''''.and

Next few hours he don't know what is happening.

But the police got some information from the strangers

That a person is trying to drag her and she is wincing inpain'''''''.

Suddenly the car front door force fully open and the girl jumped and she hit the truck the person looked at this and ran away in the car'''''''''''''''..

Arnav is still in the same position

His eyes fixed on the door where they taken in life with him''''''''''''

Whole raizada family and gupta family ran off to the place''''''''

They are consoling themselves

But only one person.

Anjali came and said chotte sab teek hojayegaa.

He looked at the sister.

He know the culprit but cannot do anything''''''''.

Aftersome time the light on.

And the doctor came in and said she is out of danger'''''''''..

Arnav;felt very happy he feel his life came back to him,

Everyone rushes to her room

Everyone eyes are welled up on seeing her'''''''''''''''

But suddenly.

She open her eyes

And everyone got shock in their life

She rubbed her eyes and asked

Maa bauj I kaha hay muje unne milna hay''''''''''''''

She is asking like a 9 old baby'''''''''''''''

And she is crying miserbly

He called khsui but she is not looking at everyone ''suddenly nurse came in and she hugged her and said.nurse aunty I scared of injections please I will be good child never do mischeifs please

Doctor came in

And he checked in and said no if u eat medicines and food properly then she will not''''''.give injections otherwise

He scared her she made a puppyu and cute face and hugged the nurse again'''''

She patter her hair''''.and she sleep due to sedictives''''''''''

After sometime the doctor called in.

Sorry mr raizada the truck had created the mishap which had done partially damage to her brain it is so lucky that there is no tumor .but the thing is it Inflected to amnesia'''..

She had droven back her lifeto 8 yr s child

She is physically 18 yrs old but mentally 8 yr old

May some incidents and some circumstances she can get b ack to normal

But she didn't know any changes'''''''.

U need to be careful'''''''''and u need to accept as the 9 yr old girl''..

Can u give some case history of mrs raizada

Then garima informed how khushi lost her parents and gupta family adopted and so on''''''''''

Ok mrs gupta now khusi feels that her biological parents return bac k from some place.

So please make sure she believes it

Her stitches are not removed u need to be very careful''''.u need to be with her like ur treating a 9 yr old girl''''''and please be careful'''''''''''.

And with that I need to talk some personal things to mr raizada

Mr raizada'''''''I know it is a very difficult pharse for u

But uneed tob e very careful she is not ur matured wife which is 18 yrs old now she isa child and u need to be like that

Ima afraid how the situations will be'''..

All raizada family and gupta family is waiting where our princess is in deep sleep''''''''''''..

Anrav drove back to the place

It is mandir

He looked at the sky and told

So this is the punishment u given to me

But u don't know this is ASR'I will take this a s a sweet punishment

My khushi is not reconignisg me''..

But still .i will be with her

What ever happens''''''''''..

With that

I accept the deal

I will go with the sweet punishment

Precap: oh prince,,,,,,,,,ur the prince tehn im princess.but where is ur horse''''''''''''''''..

Arnav replied''''''''''''and show I will make ur ride horse princess but ur not well so now u canthink this white car as ur white horse

Let us go''''''''''

But u won't hurtme na,,,,,,,,,,,,,ur not abad prince na

No princess I will not hurt u in my dreams''''''.

Let us go princess'''''''''''''..

Guys this is going tto be sweet punishment for the mighty ASR'''..

Let us see how story unfolds

Send ur comments yaar

So that I can make up for next part

See u

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i love maneet ss or ff
but best of luckkk for ur os
i m waiting for maneet
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this is completely different.plz continue soon dear.i am loving it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cute like my ss cute one dear go ahead
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Posted: 13 years ago
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now thats interesting... do continue,...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting...wud luv to see how asr deals with kid khushi...pls continue soon.. :)
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Please do continue dear.i m loving it...this is soo different from all... cant wait...well done...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on ur new os waiting to see arnav interacting with khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice Srilu-- someone used Happyji finally in the OS! According to me Happyji is a crucial eyewitness... he is a third party and unbiased at that so Arnav will trust him.

Second part is like Sadma ( Moonram Pirai in Tamil)!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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