ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 93

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Posted: 12 years ago
Whoa!! what a mind blowing update !! 3 chps n so many emotions conveyed..hw do u do it lin? u r a power house of talent !! loved evry bit of da update..read n re-read evry word..loved n felt evry sentiment emoted thru ur work.. enchanted n immersed in da epic story.. Brilliant !!👏
Don't feel lyk commenting ovr it,n ruining da magic dat still lingers,evn aftr reading it so many times..bt considering dat u wud b waiting fr my reply n also all da hard work/trouble u must hv put urslf thru.. i'll gv it a try.. bt let me warn u,it vl fail to do justice to ur effort..
Loved da way da story frm dat vry first chp opened n evolved.. hw da green monster clutches lordy lord..thn blinds him to da extend dat he loses logic in his inquiries.. thn he gvs in,n let it swallow him n he asks her to ride wth him.. all he wnts is to hv hr fr himself, detesting evrythg n evry one, who gets hr attention instead of him.. in the process,provoking hr only to find hr say sumthg,dat angered hm n scared hr.. tries to teach hr a lesson..ends up in losing himself to hr innocence! confused n furious at himslf n hr..steps bk, aloof!!..gets hr all confused n hands hr sum courage to question hm.. thn refuses to gv in..gets hold of hr,to distract hr..finds a lame excuse to abduct hr for himslf.. rides off wth hr.. feeling hr evry fear n assuring hr security..she feels it bt fails to undrstnd it..
Hw much he loved hvg hr so close to him,if only she wud b all smiles n chirpy,lyk she's wth evry1 else..bt she aint.. she's swinging b/w fear-confusion-question mark..question mark.. n sum more fear-confusion-question mark..question mark.. .. finding courage-self esteem-stubbornness, evry nw n thn..😆 bt fails agn in the end,thanks to too many ❓❓❓ ..thn finally his patience is worn out..decides to teach hr a lesson.. leaves hr in da middle of nowhr.. cums bk,probably knowing hw dangerous it ws to leave hr alone there..inquires aftr hr change of mind..finds hr more reluctant n obstinate.. fights a li'l more until danger stands there smiling at thm..realizes hw important it is not to let nethg happen to da love of his lyf.. transforms into Trazan n runs into da big bad bear,who btw,lykd khushi n wntd to hv hr fr himslf..or who knws may b he ddnt lyk thm fyting togthr lyk Shadow.. ..we'll nvr knw😉😉..
gets hr home.. gets hr all upset n mks hr believe wt a horrid li'l thing she is..plays wth hr conscience..n gets hr to apologize to him,Finally!! What?? he doesnt wnt it ne more?! bt.. bt.. aww..show off!! altho deep down all he felt ws anger rising n directed towrds himslf,fr getting hr so close to danger..he knws he ws wrong all along..bt who'll admit dat? Nope! not him! he's da First Lord..he cnt apologize..thn sees hr break down infront of him, all mess!! gets a li'l more angry fr mkg hr cry n miserable..bt still lets his Ego win!! thn fr a consolation lets hr touch his wounds,bt selfish lordy lord!! he does evn dat fr himslf😉..loves being touched by da green heart.. ofcourse,by nw evn green heart's all attracted towrds him.. altho she hs strtd to suspect bt finds it hard to reach da conclusion.. decides to leave fr da moment.. bt stirs desires n dreams,lordy lord vl find hard to shake n escape frm😳.. do i luv him or what?!😃
WHAT A STRUGGLE IT HS BEEN FR HIM THROUGH OUT..FRM JEALOUSY TO INSECURITY TO LOVE TO RELIEF TO POSSESSIVENESS TO ATTAINMENT TO CONFUSION TO APPREHENSION TO DESIRES .. A HUGE BATTLE FOUGHT, WON N LOST.. POOR LORDY LORD!! NO WONDER WHY HE'S ANGRY ALL DA TIME..
i dnt knw what i hv written..n i dnt knw hw much u'll undrstnd..bt if possible,try to judge hw much i luvd n lived today's update..❤️
PS;
  • loved Shadow's reactions to his master n his new interest..
  • loved dat da bear,wntd to talk sum sense into these two,bt got beaten badly..
  • loved lord Arnav's tarzan avatar..
  • loved Aman's discomfort n jealousy..he wud hv so fought fr his rights ovr khushi if it hadnt been his master..poor soul !!
  • loved dat lordy lord ws only dreaming, ofcourse he doesnt realize da importance of analgesics n antiseptics.. in ne othr circumstances it wud hv lead to both pain n infection..
  • 😆😆😆
Edited by shass - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
awesome
i think he was j with Aman making khushi laugh
cnt wait 4 next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Miss A,
I had to come here and tell you what happened to me. As you know I was away from Arhasia for three weeks and then on my return i was too sick to visit the Inn. You also know that I was kidnapped by Captain Responsibility, but you will be happy to know I managed to escape him. Then last Saturday I visited to the Inn and did not see my comrades nor did I get an invite. My heart was saddened but my spirit would not give in. I begged the Inn Keeper to update me on the story and he has been a great help. I have been spending every free time catching up on the story and am almost there. Don't want to spend too much time away from catching up, but the story has turned out amazing. I had suspected Lord Arnav of having vampirish characteristics and was proven right. Also love the fact that i can actually know what Lord Arnav is feeling and thinking...just love that fact.
Miss A, I will soon be all caught up and would urge you to invite me to your 'secret' hideout as I have also brought a warm rug for my friends from my travels as my contribution towards the new hideout.
See you all soon.
Leafs
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay. Just thinking here. So tomorrow when he wakes up, Khushi won't be there because it's Sunday. What IS he going to do? Poor baby. :) She will have a day to sort things out and so will he - but he'll have to answer the questions of the ladies of the house. Oooh. Can't wait!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read it all in one go
I always loved fantasy and medieval stories, princes and lords
hope you will post again soon as I am eager to continue reading the story and discover Arnav's secret
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for PMing the chapters everytime,dear Aquiline. Feels special, I know your every reader is special for you ;)

Have read the chapters from seventy eighth.
Everything was brilliant. Rabbave's and the most unexpected surprise KKG living in Lord Arnav's house.. wow looking forward to more Rabba ve's :D

Lord Akash- payal's lovestory blooming hehe
Khushi learning sword fighting sounds exciting, I guess I will be reading them in your latest update - a sword fight between ASR-KKG

Shyam is such a disgust to me. To his wife he writes about missing her so much but to Khushi he writes his heart out, as if in mere pain ... anyway as you promised i understand we will have to bear him for a while, hoping his charater won't stoop so low.

To be honest, everything you write is just playing on my screen whilst reading. Hai... the magic in your every description of the moments just keeps me spell bound.
I have downloaded your latest chapters you PM'd me... Thank you for letting me know that Anjali is not crippled :) Will be off to read the rest in my own time. Pardon me!
Muwaahhh... off from I.F again,... update the rest soon, as i will finish those soon ..I will be stalking your forum :D

*Puts on coat* Its so cold outside*. Thanks to the Inn keeper for some hot coffee, whilst going home. I understand we are in trouble, all thanks to the inn keeper for this safe space. You have truely got the *feel home* atmosphere back in this room. hope all are comrades are safe from Captain Responsibility. Hope you are safe too!

Goodies to all !

CAC
Jonashi
Edited by serialaddict12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG😃
All Arshi after so long😃
M on the 9th cloud and I don't want to come down, as yet😃
Loved it... Umaah😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg it was freaking amazing I'm in love with this story I simply don't have words to describe how good of a writer you are!!! Hats off Girl!!!! Thanks for the awesome updates I simply look forward to Saturdays because off you and when I see that you've updated on a random day I freak out !!!!! Thanks for the pm ;))))
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was a breathtaking update. All that arhi goodness.
Loved the way they argued, its fun to read. Arnav all cruel towards her but she did not disappoint us, she gave as good as she got.
The whole bear scene and ride back just amazing, i could feel the tension.
Khushi's reaction, her pain and guilt was so perfectly described and totally shows the depth of her character and the good within her.
Loved the whole update but the ending was just fab.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Linny...

I wonder how you portrayed three men in entirely three different ways...You did an excellent foundation for three A's [ Arnav,Akash,Aman ] characters... The readers can never have a doubt in the deeds of these three...Becoz you have done a foolproof character building here...👏

" He looked over at khushi who stared at the horse as if it was Death on four legs..." Wow...👏... I think its the best way of expressing her fear...

I always say you that the Arshi confrontations you make are really awesome... I know you created all these passionate Arshi scenes with extreme contrast in their characters... In this context I would like to quote one of your lines here.." Khushi squeezed her eyes shut as she felt the wind rush at her and the body of her enemy pressed upon her giving a sense of security.She hated this, but she knew she was safe..." you are brilliant that you make use of the above mentioned contrast very well in creating such intensive Arshi scenes...

In the last comment I did quote this one..." Khushi you are willing to stand by the person who has given you only hurt..." Here again you proved this by making Khushi yelled at first Lord and rushed towards him not afraid of the huge animal before them...

I felt an untold connection between Arshi from the first chapter itself... Some how they are dragged into each other... of course there is something between them in our show... Apart from that In your FF I feel a strange delicate golden thread connecting them... You have became successful in making us feel it ...

Should I call you Cliffhanger instead of Linny...????😉... How could you put an end there 😡..??? How 'll I survive till next weekend...???... Yup since I'm having some relaxing time after my exams I'm planning to read them again and again...😃...But 😈it doesn't mean that I would forgive you for making me like ...

Once again Hats off to you Linny darling🤗.. You are such an amazing writer...👏

Edited by arshy4ever - 12 years ago

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