ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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hellgirl

@hellgirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#901

Got u i m 3rd
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so finally got tym to edit
that update is*thinking of right word* aah got it marvelous
seriously that was intense the way first lord fights with the bear and khushi is feeling all guilty.*poor soul*
ok ok now from starting aman and khushi scene was nice and arnav is angry beause aman is making her laugh.
Then arnav ordering khushi to ride horse.,
oh did i am imagining or arnav really talk with shadow...that horse is as smart as his master...
U r truelly clever the way u written our famous ipkknd ''Get out'' scene in ur ff...*hats off with my imagenery hat*
and the best part their verbal fighi loved it...
There r so manny things i want to say but this is bloody fell like hell typing all that from mobile...for me thi is what the- movement*wink*...
1 more the way arnav calms down khushi was *wink* nice...
But *sigh* our lordy lord is losing his own peace of mind...

that dream is the desire of our arnav isn't it?

P.s.thanx for pm...

P.s.s loved the parts did i said that already...never mind i can say it again and again...

Edited by hellgirl - 12 years ago

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medharees

@medharees

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#902

My dearest Aquiline
What can I say about these lines
They are a real treat to the mind
A ravishing sight for the weary eyes
I have not been a regular to the inn
On Saturday only do I drop in
So sad to have missed your timings
When you updated our comrades therein
From now on I will never sleep in
Regularly visiting the inn
Keeping tract of everything...

Edited by medharees - 12 years ago

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#903

What an update!
I had held my breath through out the chapters.
You gave us more than you had promised to.
Both are equally stubborn and that is what that pulls them towards each other.Arnav has started feeling that he owns Khushi and I think this made him do such things .
He is the one who hurts her where in he cannot tolerate her tears.

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smashitup

@smashitup

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#904

LS - I'm late sneaking into the Inn - hiding from the Captain but actually this week my reasons for being quick and quiet is that it is the week of Navratri, an auspicious and special time but one that celebrates being a woman ... that I think goes for all who are present, you and indeed Khushi. I was most moved by your description of Lavanya being unable to actually allow her heartfelt tears to fall and as the Captain again approaches behind me, Arnav with his need for it to be light ... for me it was another belt over the mouth moment, most profound and moving ... the "ride" that followed, well that's left me a little speechless ... thank you from your BS x

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farha

@farha5556

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#905

wow,wow,wow,very nice,it was a good treat u know.very good one.loved it.continue soon.waiting for next saturday.u made me cry when kushi was hurt.loved it.

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hoopoe

@hoopoe

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#906

Brilliant update dear. 👏👏👏

Much awaited encounter between khushi and Lord Arnav... emotions running high.

Their constant "I Hate you" and " I despise you" looks more like they want remind each other of their lingering animosity. But at the end of the day both are unable to stop themself from caring for each other. He cant see her worried... and she cant see him in pain... so sweet.

"I am the Master of this Castle," said Lord Arnav curtly, "Did you think I would not know what happens in this place? Did you really think that you could carry on any endeavour and not have me know of it?"

Did he know all that she did and said in this Castle?

I was wondering the same thing!!!

She looked at him and, for a moment, they were caught in a whirlwind of fire and all he knew was that her gentle fingers were on the scars that still pained. For her, his eyes were the only things that existed in that fraction of a moment, drowning herself into depths she was both scared and fascinated to sink herself into...

These lines set the tone for this beautiful tale. Im eagerly waiting for the next week's happenings in the world of Arhasia.

Such a treat to read them on saturday morning... Thanks for the update. Take care. Have a nice weekend.

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#907

awesome updateee...

i loved all the partsss...

mailny the last one parttt 😆

so khush jalebis are now coffee beans 😆...

and tht damn candle had to again distrub them uff...

all interruptions btwn arhiii only poor souls 😆...

update soon...

thnx 4 pm😃

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#908

just woke up & hurried to catch up the update but alas i m late again😭

looks like a fab weekend treat.

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#909

what are you doing Lin..??

it was like a MAGIC.! m still into it.!

gosh it feels awesome.! it's like m drowning into it.

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#910

Oh ho lordy lord is in deep trouble but this deep magical world or arhasia fascinates me
Khushi touching his scars and his dreams about her is awesome